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ArrowOfTheMoonlark, thanks for the advice, I will try to use it to the best of my abilities as I want to make this a good fanfic as my first! I wasn't sure if I was doing things right, and your advice will really help me with that! If anyone else reading this will give me more advice on what you think I should do to make the story more interesting or less confusing or something, just leave a review and I will try to use it! Thanks, CLGood