Gamelover41592- Thx

Matt (Guest)- I don't know what you are saying so true too so I am just going to agree with you.

Johnathen Youngs (Guest)- Check the story called Announcement if you want to learn more about the series

Omni Spectator (Guest)- And there are worse things coming….

And we move to planet names as chapter names. If you are wondering why I didn't do that last time, then this story would have around five or six chapters named Popstar or Dreamland. Anyways, let's begin.


"I forgot how bad this place looks," Dee said as the group looked over the next planet. Rock Star looked less like a planet, as much as it did a bunch of rocks barely held together by gravity.

"Can we play on the rocks? Like the big ones?" Owen asked.

"Maybe some other time Owen, but we need to help Ribbon find the crystal shards," Kirby replied.

"Oh right," Owen said.

"Okay, where should I land?" Kirby asked.

"Um...over there!" Ribbon pointed towards one of the landmasses.

"Let's head down!


"Any ideas on how to get that shard from that beastie's nose?" Dedede asked. They had found the last shard in the area inside a sphinx's nose and it was resisting everyone's attacks.

"Well, Owen and I could try our copy abilities…" Kirby trailed off when he saw Owen struggling with one of them. It was a combo ability were Kirby swung a rock around using electricity. However, due to his age, Owen was struggling with keeping it in the air.

"Watch out!" Owen called out as he flung the rock at the sphinx, shattering the nose and a lot of the face.

"Well...that worked," Adeleine noted as Ribbon flew over to pick up the crystal shard.

"Yay! I got one!" Owen cheered.


"Well, this place is very out of place," Adeleine noted as the group nagavited an oasis like area.

"Cannonball!" Owen called out as he jumped into the water.

"Psst! Ya wanna see a real cannonball? Watch this!" Dedede called out as he got a running start before leaping into the water, splashing everyone.

"Can you show me how to jump like that?" Owen asked.

"All ya gotta do is get a little extra weight on that belly," Dedede said with a laugh as he patted his own belly several times. Owen copied the moment.

"Can we keep looking for the shards please?" Ribbon asked.

"You two can play in the water when we finish," Kirby said as everyone raced off.

"Hey, wait up!" Owen said as he and Dedede raced out of the water.


"Yay, more water!" Owen cheered. The next area had taken the group into an underground cave which was filled with water in the later sections. Kirby was very grateful that Nova had given Owen the skill to breathe longer underwater.

"So where is the next shard?" Dee asked, his voice muffled by the water.

"Somewhere up ahead!" Ribbon replied, her own voice muffled by water.

"Let's just find it and go. The water is ruining my paint…" Adeleine complained.


"Oh wow," Adeleine marveled as the group arrived at their next destination. It was a large black pyramid.

"Sure is different from the ones we have on Popstar," Dedede noted.

"We have pyramids on Popstar?" Owen asked.

"Yeah, surprised your daddy never showed ya," Dedede replied with a dismissive wave of his hand.

"I'm trying to keep him out of the places he can get lost in until he is a little older," Kirby replied. As the group got closer, it was clear that they hadn't found a pyramid, they had found a spaceship.

"This is awesome!" Owen cheered as he started looking over the ship.

"Owen, maybe you should stop before you make it fly?" Adeleine offered.

"But that would be awesome!" Owen protested.

"As long as he doesn't find the cockpit, we should be fine," Kirby said as they moved farther in.


"Hey, look at that! It's a big crystal!" Owen pointed out. Everyone turned to see what he was pointing at. A big red crystal.

"Owen, that's not the crystal we are looking for," Ribbon noticed.

"Look out!" Dee cried as the crystal began to attack. Everyone scattered.


"Is that the right crystal?" Owen asked as a green crystal appeared next to the red one.

"Nope!" Ribbon replied.

"It's another evil one!" Adeleine called out as the green crystal began attacking with the red one.

"Um, Owen? I don't think any of these crystals are going to be the right ones," Kirby told his son.

"Oh," Owen said before landing a hit on the green crystal with an atom it had dropped.


"WHY ARE THERE SO MANY EVIL CRYSTALS?!" Dedede asked as a third blue crystal appeared.

"Dark Matter clones?" Kirby offered.

"No, then they would be darker," Adeleine pointed out.

"And eviler looking," Owen added in.

"Let's just break 'em!" Dedede ordered.

"Works for me," Kirby replied as he sucked up an atom and spit it back at the crystal.

"Same for the rest of us," Adeleine added in as she summoned a drawing to toss another atom back.


"Ugh so hungry," Kirby moaned as he flopped onto his stomach. Once they had beaten the crystals(or Pix as they had learned it was called), they had learned it had a crystal shard and had collected it.

"Ugh, me too," Owen replied as he repeated his dad's actions.

"Hang on you two," Adeleine said as she painted both of them a few pieces of cake. Owen quickly ate his and Kirby was only a little slower. Once they finished, a nearby portal opened up.

"That must be where the next shards are!" Ribbon realized as she flew into the portal, with everyone else hot on her heels.


Alright, two down, four? to go!