Gamelover41592: Not going to lie, writing the backstory between Magolor and Susie is a lot of fun.

Matt (Guest): Yes, Star Allies will be when he gets his memory back. And I would hate to be Chris when he sees any of his former contestants' new friends and family.

Okay guys, this is the final world left before the Access Ark. Let's get going.


"Hurry up, slowpoke!" Magolor taunted. It had been a few years since Susie started living with him and Landia. She had her homesick spells on occasion, but the two were practically inseparable.

"You can fly! If anything, you need to slow down!" Susie protested as she climbed after him. The duo were going out to explore a relatively safe area they hadn't seen before. However, Magolor could only notice one thing.

"I like your hair," He said before thinking. Susie had opted to braid her hair for the journey today. Of course, Magolor's comment brought her back to it and caused both to started blushing.

"Um...thank you!" Susie said, not really sure how to respond or how to make herself stop blushing.

"Let's ...let's go," Magolor said awkwardly. For a good chunk of the trip, both refused to look at the other, trying to figure out what the heck they were feeling about the other. Eventually, both shoved it down and things went back to the way they normally would, with the duo talking about what they hoped to find, things they overheard Landia talking about, etc.

"So what's with that crown thing Landia guards?" Susie asked at one point.

"The Master Crown?" Magolor asked. "It's an ancient artifact that the ancients imbued with magical powers. However, something corrupted it and unless you are powerful enough, it slowly takes you over,"

"Why the heck would they make something like that!?" Susie exclaimed.

"Do I look like an ancient?" Magolor joked, causing both to laugh. "Oh hey, looks like we are here." The here in question was an old temple of some kind. With that, the duo broke off to search different parts. For the most part, they looked for two things: parts for the Lor Starcutter and random trinkets to keep themselves busy when they weren't trying to fix the Lor. As much as Susie had come to enjoy hanging out with Magolor and living a carefree life, she still knew she had to get home. After about an hour, the two met back up.

"Find anything good?" Susie asked.

"Yeah! I found a few parts, but this was probably my favorite," Magolor said as he opened his palm. Inside was a small necklace with a pink gemstone. "It's….it's for you,"

Susie's hands went to where her mouth would have been if she had one. "Magolor! This is beautiful!"

"So you like it?!" Magolor asked happily.

"I love it!" Susie said as she hugged her friend, before putting it on. "How do I look?"

"Great!" Magolor cheered.

"It's kinda funny though," Susie said as she opened up her own hand, revealing a necklace as well, only with a blue gemstone. "I got you want too!"

"Now we can be twins!" Magolor smiled as he put his own necklace on. With smiles, the duo grabbed whatever else they had found and continued on their way.


"Hey, Magolor?" Kirby asked.

"Yeah?"

"I kinda remember a necklace being next to that picture of you and Susie. What was that from?"

"She gave it to me," Magolor answered before looking at the ground. Of course, he didn't get much of a chance to wallow in his feelings.

"Whoa…" Owen said in awe as he looked over the final location they needed to travel too. It was a futuristic looking city with music blasting from it.

"Whoa indeed," Kirby agreed.

"How did they build that so fast?" Dee questioned. Everyone turned to Magolor.

"Don't look at me!" Magolor protested.


"Hey! Wake up!" Magolor yelled at a giant sleeping turtle that was blocking the way. Said turtle replied by eating him.

"Magolor!" Dee panicked. Magolor started struggling until the thing spit him out.

"Ugh, now I know how my food feels," Magolor groaned as he tried to shake off the spit.

"Let us try something," Kirby said as he and Owen walked over, the Robobot in mike mode. One quick blast and the turtle was awake and out of the way and a treasure chest with a code cube was open.


"Marx! Where the heck have you been?!" Kirby scolded when he saw the jester sitting atop a pile of gold and eating what looked like expensive food.

"Here! So what's with these guys?" Marx asked like he hadn't gone AWOL.

"We think they are taking our planet's resources," Owen explained.

"So it's our average evil invaders thing?" Marx asked.

"Kinda," Magolor admitted.

"Oh hey Egg Boy," Marx greeted, ignoring Magolor glaring at him for that comment. "Your girlfriend was complaining about you when she came through here. Didn't see me though,"

"She isn't my girlfriend," Magolor protested.

"That's what they all say," Marx replied with a dismissive wave of his wing before devouring a turkey in front of him.

"Glad to see you're okay, Marx," Kirby said quickly. "But we really need to get moving."

"Yeah, yeah," Marx said before turning back to his food. "Beat them extra hard for me, okay?"

"We were gonna do that anyways," Owen called over his shoulder as they walked off.


"Do not like! DO NOT LIKE!" Owen screamed as he used his warp star to stay above some panels with skulls on them.

"You're telling me," Magolor said as he tried to dust off the burnt parts of his outfit. Because he didn't have feet, he thought he couldn't be hurt by the electric floors.

He was wrong

"What purpose do those things even serve?" Dee questioned.

"Haven't we already decided not to bother with the logic of these people?" Kirby asked.

"Oh yeah, we did," Owen remembered.

"It still doesn't make sense," Dee grumbled.


"This never gets old," Owen said as he leaned back from his seat in the Robobot's car mode.

"No it does not," Magolor said as he always leaned back, yet again with his sunglasses from nowhere.

"Where do you keep those sunglasses anyways?" Kirby asked.

"Trade secret," Magolor replied.

"That doesn't answer the question!" Dee protested, but at this point, Magolor had already tuned him out.


"A music city? I know you love to sing, but this is a little far," Magolor mocked when they confronted Susie again.

"Oh shut up!" Susie snapped. "Anyhow, I was quite surprised when you reduced my Mecha Knight to scrap,"

"He's going to kill you when he gets back to normal," Owen said bluntly.

"...Hmph," Susie huffed before mumbling something under her breath. "I guess the Mother Computer isn't perfect after all…"

"The what?" Magolor asked.

As per the course with her, Susie ignored that and produced a vat with a little purple blob in it, "Don't worry, though! This next one should quash your rebellion. He was created from the latest in nanogenetic technology. He's ruthless. He's driven. He's...a clone of royal proportions!"

"Great King?" Dee asked nervously.

"Get ready for... Model #D-0030: Dedede Clone!" Susie said as she tossed the vat into the air. A purple clone of Dedede appeared from the goo. "See those annoying nuisances? Destroy them!" With that, she fled once again. The Dedede clone was not much different from the real thing. Inhaling, jumping, flying, and swinging its hammer. However, it split into three not long after the battle started.

"Great, now we have more of them!" Magolor said as he fired a magic blast at one.

"Let's try to keep them together this time," Owen said as he readied his sword.

"Good plan!" Dee said as he tossed his spear at one clone. While the attacks didn't change, the fact that all three clones attacked differently and at the same time. Finally, they were reduced to goo once again.

Only for the group to realize that they roof where a giant cannon was waiting for them.

"They are not making this easy for us!" Kirby said as the three clones reformed and jumped into the cannon.

"No kidding," Magolor groaned. The cannon, while stuck on a track, was able to move quickly. It also had a lot of functions such as rapid-fire energy turrets, a massive laser, and a flamethrower. Later, they used the cannon to try and launch a bomb to blow up the group. Thankfully, they were able to bat it back, dealing major damage. Finally, the cannon blew up, the clones became fireworks, and the final arm deactivated.

"Only one place left to go," Kirby said as he looked at the massive spaceship looming over them.


"Susie!"

Susie's head snapped up from the damage reports on the arm to meet her boss's glare. "Yes, Mr. Haltmann?"

"Those natives you said you would handle destroyed the final arm and will most likely be on the way here," Haltmann explained. "Now, I do not understand why you can't handle these ones like you have all the others, but I want this DONE! Understand?"

"Yes sir," Susie said as she bowed her head.

"Excellent" Haltmann said. "Go get some rest. You seem worn down from all this," With that he left and Susie sulked back to her quarters. On the nightstand were three things. An identical picture to the one Magolor had, her own necklace and…

A picture of her and Haltmann before they were boss and employee.

When they were father and daughter.

"I...I lost everything…." Susie realized as she looked over those objects. If she failed to stop them again, she would…

No!

She wasn't thinking about that. She would defeat them, no matter how much it hurts! But that still didn't mean she liked it any less.

"Magolor ...I'm sorry," Susie said as tears started flowing.


Ah! Never a Kirby story without someone else suffering. So now you know what Marx was up too, the last arm is gone and you get a look into what Susie is going through. Hope you liked it.