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this is my new fan fiction with new idea which based on Dareya rajvi and abhirika and also include other couples .
Please friends read and reviewwwwwww
Please guys review lazmi dijya ga ky kesi lagi story and should I continue r not.
One fine morning a girl prepared a breakfast and engrossed in his work .A men come in kitchen and ...
Bhuaaaah
Girl scream aaaah and suddenly turned fear visible on his face and the boy laughing like a mad
Tum ... hamesha dara dety hu mujhy pata hy mujhy tumhara roz ka hy yeah lekin ...
lekin lekin lekin aup roz hi asey hi chilati hu dekh lo
Haan na wohi to pata ha mujhy tumhara to roz ka ha
Kiya aup bhi aesy ghusy sa lal bilkul achi nahi lgti hu and he turned girl on his side and put his hands on his shoulders kiya aup roz hi asey ghabra jaty hu
tu tum bhi to itny khamoshi sy aty hu ky ...Girl said
Acha choro btao kiya bna rahi hu ap and smell oh wao alo ky prathy yummmy
Tumhary favorite hein na pata hy
Oh wao really yeah aup mery liya bna rahi hu ...
Haan na aur kis ky liya itni sbo yeah sub kr rahi hu
Acha really yeah sub mery liya ha ya phir ...
Yeah phir girl asking
yeah phir choro kia mein janta nahin jesy ky aup yeah sari mehnt kis lya kr rahy hu
Kiya matlb mein yeah sub kis liya kr rahi hu girl asking
Woh hein na mery bhaiya bol diya hu ga uno na ky unhein sbo breakfast ma prathy chayn to bus aup lag gayi mhnt mein
Ary nahin asa tu kuch bhi nahin tum kafi dino bad ghar aya hu na to socha tumhari pasand ka nashta bna lu
Oh really kiya ap sachi kah rahy hu yeah sub mery liya
Love you Love you Love you so much u know what mein ny is nashty ko ktna miss kia love u Bhabhi
Man krta hy ky aup ky yeah hath choom lu
Acha bus bus baht hu gya ab zyada buttering nahi kro
Haan haan mra asa krna to buttering hi lgy ga
Hi mery bhaiya jb asey pyar sa khth hu gy tu kiya lali bikhrti hu gi ap ky chehry pr
Dekho dushayant aub baht hu gyi masti mujy aur tang na kru
Oho really acha bhabhi btao na bhaiya kesy blta hn Purvi love you and he acting like his brother aur aup...
but before hi complete his sentence
Purvi turned and catch his ear
tu abhi tumhari masti khtm nahi hui han ufffo bhabhi choro to mujh masom pr itna zulm sach mein baht dukh raha hy
Oh really tum aur masoom kis angel sy zra btao tu mujhy
Ary meri pyari bhabhi 360 ky angel sy masoom hu aub to choro
Tum to mujhy 90 k angel sy bhi masom nahi lgty hu purvi said
meri pyari cutie bhabhi rehm kro muj masom pr
Tum aur masoom tum jesy 2 aur masom aa jaty tu is ghar ka pata nahin kia hu jana tha
ufffo bhabhi aub to kan chor do such mein baht dukh raha hy and Dushayant hardly tried to free his ear but vein
Tum bhi roz sbo asey hi to uth kr msti krty hu na
kiya bhabhi such mein aup ko bhaiya hi bear kr skty hein koi aur nahin
to hear it girl leave his ear boy looked the girl and think (yeah kiya kr dia )
and before he say something his phone beeped
Boy see the caller id and smile appear on his face before he pick it up ...
Kis ki cal ha itni sbo girl asked
boy stunned nahi tu bhabhi koi bhi tu nahin and he hurriedly dismissed the call but unfortunately call is answered and the boy never know
Girl turned and kiya bat hy devar jhi sbo hi sbo phone calls
ary nahin tu bhabhi wrong wrong numbers
acha wrong number really purvi asked
Jhi wohi to asa kuch bhi nahin hy
Purvi laughing Dushuyant mein ny kab kaha ky wesa kuch hy lekin mujhy lgta hy ky tum mujh sy kuch chupa rahy hu
ary nahin tu bhabhi asa kuch bhi hua tu sub sy pahly aup ku btao ga wo to kiya hy na ab aup ka devar itna masoom aur handsome hy larkiyan marti hen roz koi na koi kisi na kisi bahany sy call ker leti hy
Acha tum aur masoom dushayant aub nah baht hu gya tum jesy 2 aur masoom aa jaty tu is ghar ki bhala zror hu jana tha
kiya bhabhi pahly bolty na aub tu deir hu gayi ha and looked like very sad
Deir kis chez ki deir purvi asked
Ary bhabhi dekho na deir tu hu gyi na aup kuch tim pehly kehty tu mein zror papa mama ko bol kr un sy 2 aur baby plan krwa leta lekin abhi tu deir ...
Dushuyant tum...
Zaror auj pito gy sharam bhi nahi ati apni bhabhi sy yeah sub khty hoya and smiles on his antiques
Bhabhi is mein knsi sharam mein tu aup ku bhi khta hu aub baht kr liya enjoy bhaiya ko bol kr next plan ker hi lo mujhy bhi is ghar mein koi chayah jis per mein order chala saku
Dekho dushuyant baht hu gyi nautanki ab jao mera bhi bus hu gya abhi table set krti hu
Kiya bhabhi bolo na plzzz bhaiya ko bolo to
Purvi turned dushu kiya hy kitna tang krty hu
Acha bhabhi wo and boy screams cockroach
kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Cockroach kaha hy and purvi jumping oh my God cockroach Dushu btao kaha hy
and again boy laughing so madly r looked like a crazy men and moved his head in no
purvi see scenario and give a tough look to dushuyant
Acha acha acha sweetie bhabhi and boy side hugged to purvi
kiya bhabhi cockroach sy bhi koi darta hy
aur tumhein pata hy na ky mujhy dar lgta hy purvi said
Acha sory next time nahi bolo ga
tum roz aysa hi blta hu dushayant
aur bhabhi aup bhi to roz kahty hu ky nahin gabrao gy lekin...
Acha thek hy aub batein choro aur meri man lo jao fresh hu jao
Bhabhi aik shart hy pahly aup meri man lo na aur ...
Aur ... purvi asking
Dekho bhabhi aup na bhaiya ky sath mil kr aub tu baby plan kr lo
Ufffffffffffffffff yeah larka dushuyant tum ny kab bary hona hy
kabi nahin and the boy draw the cheeks of the purvi and said hansti rha kro aup baht achi lgti hu and kiss on her forhead
Jab tak tum hu na mein muskrana nahin chor sakti and purvi ruffled his hair
A lady come in kitchen and see the scenario hey bhagwan tum yaha hu tumhary Baba tumhein bula rahy hein
Ary haan maa unhein bol do bus aata hu nashta kr lu
Nashta tu tub kro gy jab bany ga kitna tang krty hu isy kiya purvi mein bhi bahir thi aur yeah bhi tumhein tang ker raha tha nashta bna ya nahin
Ary nahin maa yeah tu kuch nahin bus yunhi ap chlo mein bus table lgati hu nahin wo ...
And all hear a scream Purvi
Aa gya bulava jao Bhabhi and Dushuyant leave the kitchen
Maa wo mein ...
Tum jao purvi beta mein yeah dekhti hu
Maa Dushuyant Papa aur aup ka ...
Again the men calling Purvi
Tum jao beta mein dekh loon gi
And the girl hurriedly leave the kitchen
When she entered in room Room is fully messed clothes are scattered everywhere in the room before the girls understand a man shout
Tum kitni bar bola hy tumhein meri chezon ko hath na lgaya kro tumhari samj mein itni si bt nahi ati and the boy hit her head itni si bat tumhary dmagh mein nahin jati
wo mein ...
Just shut up boy roared
Purvi stunned in his place
After few seconds Aup btayn kiya chayeh
Meri blue shirt kaha hy wo nahin mil rahi
Aup hatiya mein dekhti hu
Kiya dekhti hu haan tang aa gya hu mein tum sy shadi kr ky Aj office mein meeting hy aur mujuy der hu raha hy
Aup fresh hu jayen mein abhi nikal kr press krti hu
Tumhein kuch krna hota tu baht phly kr leti asey meri zindagi mein aa kr usy jahanum tu na bnati
Wo mein...
But Without listening single word boy go to washroom for freshen up
At dinning table everyone hear the voice of boy aggressive behaviour
Dushuyant come and mom kiya hy yeah roz ka akhir kb tk bhaiya bhabhi per asey hi chilayan gy aur papa aup kuch bolty kiyun nahin bhaiya ku yeah kia trika hy bhabhi sy bat krny ka
Dad: Dushuyant abhi tum choty hu in mamlo sy dor raho dad ap ...
But stop to hear the sound of foot steps
Purvi hurriedly find the shirt and iron it
Boy come out wear his shirt and leave the room
Then purvi hurriedly clean the messed room which condition is miserable
and again boy shout purvi
purvi leave the room
On dinning table
Boy come Good Morning everyone
Everyone Wished him
Dushuyant never wished him and only focus on his breakfast
Mera breakfast boy ask
Han wo mein lati hu bana kr kia khao gy
Whattt abhi mera nashta nahi bna and he again calling purvi
Purvi come and boy said
Purvi mera nashta tumhein pata bhi hy auj meri ktni important meeting hy aur tum ...
Haan wo ma bus
kia tum ...
Dekho rajat (yes guys its rajat so rajvi fans it's for you but have different concept in this story ).
Mein tumhein breakfast bna deti hu Bua said
Nahin bua koi nahi auj mein biny nashty ky hi chla jao ga and he go and the purvi silently crying and leave the place
Dushuyant to leave the place
In his bedroom purvi crying very badly kiyun rajat kiyu itni nafrat ...
A BIG BUNGALOW
A small boy try to awoke the person
Tacho (Chcho) Utho na
Kiya hy aadi beta sony do na no tacho (Chcho) Utho mela (mera) choclate kidl hy ...
Daya smiling and awoke up on the bed and kissed the small boy
To itni sbo ap apni chocolate leny aya hu .
Boy nooded his head in yes
Lekin phly meri kiss kidhr hy Adi ko 1 nahi 2 choclates milein gy per phly meri kiss
2 Choclates yahooooo
Small boy is super duper happy and kissed on daya's right cheek ya Adi ka kiss and then kissed his left cheek aul (aur) yeah ...
Yeah daya asked ( As daya know the reason but he always asked )
Uffffo tacho (Chcho) Aup roz bhool jaty hu yeah chchi ka good Morning kiss
Chchi... Daya thinks
Flashback
Ufffo daya ab uth bhi jayan nashta ready hy aur bhaiya aup ka wait ker rahy hein
Kiya shreya sony do na bus 5 minutes
Daya aup na kb sa jaga rahi hu aub uth jao mein ja rahi hu phir khud dhond lena apny clothes and shoes and shreya want to get up but daya pulled her and shreya landed on daya's chest
Daya yeah yeah kia btmizi ha
Acha ya btmizi ha mujhy nahin pata tha
Daya dekho bht late hu ra ha choro mujhy
Oh hon asey nahin mera morning gift kaha hy Daya said
Morning gift konsa
Acha tumhy tu pata nahin na abhi btata hu sub yad aa jaya ga and daya wants to kiss on his lips but shreya put his palms on his lips dekho daya already late hu ra ha
Haan tu jabi ka rha hu mera gift meri good Morning kiss and he point on his cheeks and shreya silently kiss on his left cheek and wants to get up
ary ary asa nahin daya pulled shreya om him and kissed on her both cheeks
Love you shreya
Suddenly someone open the door and shreya hurrhurriedly get up
Tacho (Chcho) meli cholcate (choclate)
Ary aadi beta aup aoa idhr phly chcho ka gift and adi wants to kiss his left cheek but stopped by daya voice
Ary nahin aadi beta idhr right side
Kiyun tacho (chcho)
Beta yaha ap ki chchi ka kiss r is side aup ka and shreya give angry look to daya
But aadi understand and kiss on his right cheek
Flashback over
Chcho meli choclate but daya still thinking about shreya
Tarika comes in the room
Aadi beta jldi kro abhi school ky liya tyar bhi hona hy and see the scenario
Daya kaha gum hu
With this daya comes in reality and wiped his eyes
Ary Tarika tum tum kb ayi
Bus abhi hi daya tum aj bhi shreya ko nahi bol paya hu kiyun us sy bat nahin ker lety hu .
Nahin tarika aub bat krny ko kuch nahin bcha jb usy hi mujh pr believe nahi tu...
Dekho daya tum aik bar us sy bat ker ky dekho to
Nahin tarika aub kuch nahin bcha mein fasla kr chka hu
kesa fasla daya
Dekho daya please phly achy sy soch lo jald bazi ma koi asa qadm na uthana ky ...
Tarika mein ny baht achy sy socha hy Tum bol dena shreya ko ab wohi hu ga jo wo chahti ha
Daya tum... .
Tarika aub nahin aub mein wohi kro ga jo shreya chahti hy ...
CITY MALL
A girl walking on different shops but do not buy a single thing and looked like very frustrated.
Girl want to entered in lift but suddenly a boy come and pulled a girl a side and before the girl shout boy put a palm on his mouth and say
sssssssshsh
Chilao nahin ma hu
Girl eye widened
Tum...
Haan mein
Tu tum mera pecha kr rahy hu
What ma mein kiyun tumhara pecha karu ga mein tu bus ...
Kiya mein tu bus agr tum pecha na ker rahy hoty tu how u know k mein yaha shopping krny ayi hu .
Woh tu tum ny kl kaha tha ky tum yaha aoa gi shopping ky liya tu mein ...
Kiya mein dekho Dushayant mein ny tumhein warn kiya tha ky tum mujhy yaha follow nahi kro gy try to understand agr ksi na dekh lia tu ...
tu mein kiya krta tum na hi mera phone pick ker rahi thi aur na hi mery messeges ka answer ker rahi thi
Oh to tumhein mil gyi furst mujhy yad krny ki .
Dekho Ishita kiya mtlb ky furst mein tumhein sbo sa call ker raha hu lekin tum kuch reply hi nahi ker rahi hu
Tu kyu kro reply haan mein tu koi extra hu na ho tum sy flirt krti hy aur tum tum tu yehi smjty hu na ky mein tum sy flirt kr rahi hu
To hear this Dushuyant is dam shocked oh no to tm na ...
Haan mein ny tumhari sari batein sun li mujhy pehly bol dety ky mein tumhary pas time pas ker rahi hu tu mein and divya crying
Oh God dekho Ishita wo to bus ...
kiya bus dushayant haan mujhy nahi pata tha ky tum mujhy is kism ki lrki smjty hu and Ishita soobing
Ishita ishita hey look in to my eyes
Ishita look at me but divya turned his face on another side
Ishita look at me and dushayant turned his face
Ishita meri ankhon mein dekho aur kaho kiya tumhein wakyi lgta hy ky mein tum sy time pas ker raha hu
Damn it I really love you
please asey udas na hua kro
Tumhari ankho mein anso mein nahin dekh skta
Tu kiyun dety hu anso mujhy yeah anso bhi tu tumhi ny diya hein na
Ok ok I am sory kan pkr kr sory and dushuyant wiped her tears .
Aub to maaf kr do na please I am so sory
Ok Ishita said
Nahi asy nahi please smile jo mera din bana deti hy and Ishita smiled lightly.
Yeah hui na bat acha chlo aub kahi cofee pity hein
Nahin dushuyant tm jao mujhy ghar bhi jana ha bhaiya wait ker rahy hu gy .
Please Ishita thori deir
Nahin please wo bhaiya unhein pata lga to pata nahim kia re act krein gy please try to understand .
Oky thek hy no problem chlo mein tumhein drop ker deta hu .
Nahi nahi dushuyant dekho tum mery bhaiya ko janty nahin mein khud chli jao gi .
Ok agar tumhein problem hy tu ...
please dushuyant tum tu jnty hu na ky mery bhaiya
Acha baba jao aur ghar ponch kr inform ker dena ok.
Ok chlti hu ab and she moved.
Ishita boy called her
Kia hua ab kia ha
Dushuyant come closer to Ishita and she hurriedly closed her eyes
relaxed Ishita open your eyes and she do the same
Ishita mein tumhary liya kuch laya tha aik chota sa gift agr tumhari permission hu tu ...
lekin gift ki kia zarort thi
Ishita gift zrort ky liya nahin diya jata please
Abhi nahin dushuyant phir kabi
Relaxed Ishita bus 2 minutes please
Ok Ishita agreed
Dushuyant kneel down on the front of Ishita and open the box which have his hand
Dushuyant yeah tum koi dekh ly ga please utho
relaxe Ishita koi nahin aya ga yaha bus 1 minute and he hurriedly open the box and tie the pair of anklets and Ishita is shocked to see this and his eyes are moist
Dushuyant get up and asked Ishita kesa lga mera gift
Ishita is shocked and don't say a single word
Dushuyant shaked her kia hua Ishita psnd nhi aya dkho agr psnd nhi aya to mein mein abhi utar deta hu ...
But at the next moment Ishita hugged him and crying
Dushuyant is so shocked because before it Ishita even never shake hand with him but that a time she hugged him he is in cloud nine .
Suddenly Ishita realised what she can do and hurriedly she left dushuyant and try to walked out but dushayand catch his wrist and called Ishita
but Ishita never turned and say please dushuyant leave me wo mein...
Dushuyant come in the front of Ishita and said
Thank u so much Ishita yeah meri life ka best ever birthday gift ha really thank u so v much
Whattttttttttttttttttttttt Birthday gift tumhara birthday to and she see her wrist and so shocked to see the time because its 12 15 AM
Dushuyant mein bhaiya ku kiya kaho gi mein ny unhein bola tha ky mein 11 bjy tk aa jao gi my God ab ufffffffffffffffff
Relaxed Ishita tum bol dena ky tum traffic mein phans gyi thi
Nahin bhaiya mera wait kr rht hu gy bye dushayant mujhy jana hu ga and she hurriedly go to the lift and dushuyant still thinking about their first hug...
So guys here the first chapter of Bapnah pyar ha .
Friends please review lazmi dijya ga ky kesi lgi story .