I didnt like how I wrote this chater the first time, so I cut and added some stuff. Please please please review and give me suggestions of what she should see next. I might update again today if I get some suggestions. If not I might also update, but it helps when people do tell me what they wanna see. What villains should be here?
YinYangSisters: Thanks so much! Yeah, ya gotta feel for someone like that! It sucks. At least she got away, right? Thanks for your review, and hope to hear what you think again!
Unknown: You can be critical, but it helps when you say why my story sucks. I'm not insulted or anything, but giving tips helps. Thanks and please dont flame :)
Drama sapphire: YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAY! Glad you did! And just to talk about your review of this chapter, cuz you did, yeah I put doc in cuz of that. No one would expect him! Besides, he always annoyed the hell out of me. This is just showing him the way I see him, lol! And like I said to the person below KAA WILL COME! Thanks again for your reviews!
Unknown: KAA WILL COME! I will deffinitly put him in! He's one of my fave's too! 'Specially since it's like seeing Winnie the Pooh as a man eating snake!
animeloser101: You should punch the mother. And yeah, the dad at least puts in some effort. But not really. He's kinda lame about it. lololol
AngelOfDarkness1959: So. Do. I. Yeah, the idea was that she was a total bi-och. Hate her after I wrote it!
The airport was bustling that day. People from everywhere came in and out of doors. They waited patiently and not so patiently in lines that stretched from wall to wall. Luggage rolled past and she sometimes found herself jumping out of the way to avoid collisions with sleep-deprived flight attendants. Bartleby whined from inside his crate and she shushed him. He had always like walking, and rolling in a trolley seemed to be his least favorite thing so far.
A large black nose stuck out from between the bars and his eyes looked at her from behind masses of fur. "Hey, if you want to walk through this circle of hell, then please be my guest."
He barked as if to say yes please but she just rolled her eyes and searched the area.
Will had told her that someone would be waiting near terminal A21. And so there she was, in front of A21 and not one person with a sign or anything signaling that they were of any importance came her way. She sighed and sat down on top of the crate, letting her hand hang over. She felt something slobbery lick her and she glared down at the culprit. "Hey. Tongues to ourselves buddy." He just barked and let his tongue loll out farther.
She glanced around again. A woman wearing a sports bra jogged past with her iPod in her ears. A man wearing a kilt toting a dead alligator on wheels skipped by. The Naked Cowboy made a brief appearance, only to be ushered away by security. Through all of it she didn't even bat an eye.
That was New York for you.
It and it's people had nerves of steel and didn't seem to give a damn.
She was going to miss it.
She looked down sadly, but a voice snapped her head up.
"MISS AYMAN!" She looked around until her eyes found a very short man. People had called her short before. She was tiny compared to many. And sure, some others were only 4 foot something and were smaller then her. But this man was…
tiny!
She stood up and he only reached her knee. "Umm… hi?"
"Hello there miss!" His voice was so happy go lucky, like Santa Clause. And for the strangest reason he looked it to. A snowy white beard framed his face and small round glasses balanced on the tip of his bulky nose. "I'm Doctor One."
She blinked and her mouth opened, but she closed it before any rude comment could leave her. "Doctor… One?"
"Yup! That's me!"
She just stared at him. "That's your name. Doctor One."
"Mmhm!"
"Doctor O-"
"YES!" He shouted, then rolled his eyes. "Ugh, New Yorkers." His face perked up immediately. "I'm here to achieve- I mean retrieve you and your… your…" he squinted at the crate. "You and your bear."
"He's a dog." She said lamely, still getting over his name.
"He looks like a bear."
"You smell like a bear." She muttered, trying to stick up for her only family member who did kinda look like a bear.
He didn't seem to hear her. "Well, let's go this day- I mean way. Lets go this way!"
"Whatever you say… Doctor One."
He rolled his eyes and sauntered ahead of her, smiling and waving at everyone he passed. They walked through so many terminals, pacing entrance after entrance as they did. Planes were boarded by the various classes, going through as quickly as they could before the take off. He kept walking and smiling while she still struggle dwith the large trolley behind her. Soon her legs were burning from all of the walking and pulling, and she was left in an incredibly bad mood. Whenever he flashed her a smile she stretched one across her face as well as she could. But that was a while ago. Now she just glared at his carefree style.
She was really starting to hate the guy.
"So!" he said at one point, attempting at a conversation, on his part a very bad idea. "You're from the big apple are ya'?"
"Naw. Texas." She grunted as they reached another flight of steps. Her trolley was too large to fit into the elevators, so she was forced to pull it up step by step. And when one of those objects is your giant dog, or bear, or whatever Bartleby was, it was incredibly hard. She was partly glad that the rest of her stuff was already sent over.
But the dog was still there.
"Texas is a super duper place."
That just about did it for her. His attitude was beyond happy. Anyone who can stay that happy watching someone suffer behind them had issues, and every chord possible that rested inside her had snapped at the sound of his voice. So she let him know any way she could.
"Texas," she seethed, "can kiss my ass."
That basically ended any conversation that had a chance with them. After that he stayed ahead and waved to strangers, finding them more pleasant then she was. That was fine by her. She had more time to plan how she was going to get this guy fired. Or maybe kill him first if it became necessary.
They walked around the airport for a while, occasionally he would take out a map of the place and look around, not sure of where he was. But those stops were rare, and he always ended in the right way. They traveled all the way across the airport before reaching a door labeled 'DO NOT ENTER: STAFF ONLY'
"Umm… hey Dr. Phil"
"Doctor One. My name is Doctor One."
"Yeah yeah. Whatever. This is a staff door. It says staff on it."
"Yes. I can read."
"Okay. Then you'll know that it says staff." He just kept smiling and she sighed, exasperated. "We. Aren't. In. The. Staff."
"My dear, no one but us is going through this door. Not even the staff can see it."
"Can see it? But it's right-"
"I'll explain all that later. For now, through the door!"
She looked at it. "I ain't going through the door."
His hand went to his hip and he pushed his glasses up, glaring through them. "Why not?"
"Because! It says staff only! And how do I know your not some psycho killer or something."
"Because I'm Doctor One!"
"That doesn't… How does that even… gah!" She gave up, totally at a loss for words. "Listen Santa."
"Doctor-"
"Fine! Listen. Doctor One. If a man came up to you and said he'd give you candy if you went into a room with him, would you do it?"
"Is he a nice man?" He asked slowly.
"Sure. He's a super nice man. He acts sweet to little children when he drives around in his white van."
"Then absa-posa-lutley!"
She just stared at him numbly after that. "You really don't get out much, do you Yoda."
"DOCTOR. ONE."
She sighed. "Fine, whatever. But you try one thing and I'm gonna let out my bear to attack you."
"It looks like a dog to me."
Her jaw went slack and she felt a vein in her neck begin to pulse. "… nope." Her throat was tight with anxiety and disbelief. "It's a bear." She croaked out.
He gave her a weird look, then gestured to the door. She sighed and shook her head, and then she opened the door. It creaked on its hinges as she pulled it opened. He walked in first then she followed, pulling the heavy trolley with her. "Ugh… I could use some… help…" Nothing. "Great. Chivalry is dead." She turned and then tensed. The man was gone.
In front of her though was a private airplane hanger.
Only one airplane stood alone in the middle of the floor. It was painted red and yellow, the logo was white with black mouse ears in the middle. "Great. I'm taking the flashiest cheesiest thing they've got." She muttered.
"Oh Miss Ayman. Yoohoo!" She squinted into the plane and could just see Mr. Santa or Dr. Phil or whoever he was sitting in the drivers seat. "C'mon! We have a schedule to keep."
"How am I supposed to get all my luggage into their in record time? Hmm?"
"Already got it!" His cheerful voice shouted back.
"Are you nuts. It's right…" she turned, but her luggage had finished. She heard a bark and turned back to see her dog in his crate already in the plane. "… here." She finished numbly. You're a New Yorker. You're used to crazy stuff. Keep it together, Lillie. Just keep it together. She slunk into the plane, eyeing it suspiciously. Doctor One smiled at her, then put on headphones. "This is Mouse 26 requesting takeoff. Over."
Something garbled back and he nodded, then began flipping switches.
"Mouse 26, huh?" She said slowly, still trying to wrap her head around the luggage thig. "Is that code ofr something?"
"Nope! Just a little thing after the boss!"
She didn't even try to question it.
Soon the plane roared to life.
"All right! Get ready for takeoff! He said to her, giving her a friendly wink. Wen he turned away she stuck her tongue out at her an looked back at Bartleby. He looked ready to be sick.
"Can I go back there? Yunno, to be with my bear?"
He just shook his head, concentrating on rolling the plane down the marked lines. She sat back and gripped the sides of the seats, sure that the experience of flying with the strange man was not going to be a pleasant one.
She was right.
As soon as she felt the wheels leave the ground, her stomach plummeted. He reached higher and higher speeds, breaking numerous laws and limits as he did so.
"SLOW DOWN!" She cried at him. But he just shook his head and pointed upward. They continued to shoot up into the sky. Pressure built around her and she screamed. "SLOW DOWN NOW!"
"WE HAVE TO BREAK THE BARRIER!"
"NO! WE DON'T!"
"YES WE DO! LOOK!"
She did look. In front of them was what looked like a glass line of blue and over it a thick fog of clouds. Whatever theis barrier thing was she didn't like it. She squeezed her eyes shut and waited for them to all die. This is how it ends she thought. Me, a doctor with a number for a name and my giant phone eating bear. I never wanted to to be like this.
She heard Bartleby whine from behind her, scared out of his mind. His small nails made scraping noises on the bottem of his crate as the plane rocketed upward. She clawed at the seat, feeling the fabric pop open under the pressure from her nails. This is it this is it this is-
But death never did come. In fact, they slowed down. She let go of the seat and flexed her fingers. Then peeped her eye open.
"There's easier ways to get into Disney, but that ones just so much fun!" She heard Doctor One from next to her. Her blood boiled and she turned to give him a piece of her mind.
Then she screamed.
Doctor One sat next to her. But now he was a cartoon.
Terrrible great good, you tell me! R&R! And I'd just like to thank all my loyal reviewers again! Drama sapphire, YinYangSisters, animeloser101, AngelOfDarkness, Daydreamer747 and Rozen14 YOU GUYS ROCK MY SOCKS! And an extra thanks to Daydreamer747 for all her help. Not on this chapter, but she had to deal with me for just about all the rest and probobly for many more to come!
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