Hello everyone, sorry I haven't update this. I wasn't feeling a good mood through days a lot because it's rough, I was deperessed today. Cause I have final exams before winter break ugh...Here's my chapter sorry for waiting.
Review
JPbake:Okay finally got around to reading this, hears my thoughts. First off the plot is really enjoyable. It's unique and original which is something I enjoy in stories. I also love how you put my favorite animates couple Hiccup and Astrid into this story. I applaud you for actually having the guts to kill Branch, even if it's obviously temporarily. I actually was originally going to kill Branch at the end of Eden but backed out after it was obvious the readers would get mad if I went through with it. Now for some constructive criticism. You don't need to waste a chapter telling us about what your going though or begging people for reviews. If you want a review just PM people and ask. And when it comes to telling people about your personal stuff a simple authors note before the story part would do, no need to wste a chapter for it. Please don't take this wrong, I'm just trying to help you improve as a writer. You follow these pointers and you will improve greatly. Good luck in the future.
TDIcelebrity14:Sorry about your ipad. I look forward to the next chapter.
Astrid arrive at her home walking in after school before out of the bus, while Branch comes through the bus.
He looked to see her walked to her house, he ran in but suddenly locked out since she closed the door.
Branch tried opened it but no use.
He sighed loudly.
"Dammit! Now where to go in?! Think! Think! Wait...I'm already dead I can go through it," He thought as he went in like he was ghost well a spirit since he was already died from an unknown hit and run car.
She sees her mother arrive home packing her stuff and all dressed up for her job going to New York. Astrid came home threw her book bag to other exhausted and going to her room tired. "Hey, Mom why are all dressed for tonight where's dad?" She asked coming in the kitchen seeing her mom she was a blonde woman with her hair into braid and blonde bun wore a dress for court.
"Well, Sweetie he's going to his business trip."
"Again..?! That's the third time he went again since two years!" She complained.
"I'm sorry, sweetie I know it's hard that your parents have to go in other places to work. I just wanted you to understand, that your going to be 16 to be responsible and going to be 18."
Astrid rolled her eyes as her mother kissed her cheek.
"The food in the fridge if you want to heat it up."
Her mother said going out the door before it's closed.
Branch stayed silent watching, Astrid being home alone since her mom left.
"Well, I guess I should do something what I'm doing." She said walking suddenly she heard knocking, she went to answer the door to see her friends, Fishlegs, Tuffnut, Ruffnut, Snotlout and Hiccup
We're here to see her.
"Hey Astrid!" Fishlegs said cheerfully.
"Hey guys, why are you here?"
"Just hanging out with you! Of course!" Hiccup said smiling softly awkwardly place his hand at the back of his head.
"Well, Yeah." She reply. "I heard in school that someone died last weekend!" Ruffnut said.
Astrid looked puzzled. "Then who died?"
"Remember Branch Timberlake the one we call him Wednesday Adams that he was always grumpy all the time?" Tuffnut asked as Astrid nodded.
"They said in the announcement that he died, by someone who hit and run him." Fishlegs said.
"And the mayor's daughter boyfriend." Ruffnut quote it with her fingers, as Branch felt offended what she said while she quote it with her fingers.
"Yeah I remember that. Did they investigate it?" Astrid asked crossing her arms.
"Not really Astrid, but they're finding out who's responsible." Hiccup said. Snotlout scoffed,
"Yeah he did deserves it for being a jerk to hug the day we met him remember in freshman year that he pick on us through the year? He did deserves what's coming to him!" He laughed. Branch suddenly felt angered what he just heard.
"Uh, Snotlout isn't that not nice to say, you don't have to say that,"
"Hiccup's right." Fishlegs added.
"Oh come on! Let's go out at my house party celebration about he's gone forever! Heh? Anyone?!"
They stood silent staring at him for a minute.
"It's getting late guys see you tomorrow Astrid!" Hiccup said while the rest are going home.
"Bye..." She said as she closed the door walking to her bedroom. Branch felt fuming hearing what Snotlout said about him about school freshman year.
"Me?! A jerk in high school! Oh I can't wait if I'm done with this I'm going to kick his ass after this!" He thought. As he sat on the soft velvet purple couch that belongs in the living room as he lies down, looking at the ceiling, sighing thinking.
"I really want to go home, and I'm stuck with this deal with death to get home! Yeah right...First I'm gonna protect this Hofferson girl and I didn't see any danger...I didn't!" He thought as he closed his eyes for tomorrow.
He dream of he was five years old had black hair, blue long sleeve shirt and black pants remembering how his grandma died. She and him were driving home he was in the passenger seat, at night time when it's almost nine o'clock but all of the sudden a car came out of nowhere that they were loosing control that young Branch screams along with his grandma Rosiepuff screaming too as they crashed into a light pole.
Branch wakes up to see a bruise in his head and look to see his grandma. Not moving with blood and broken shards on her. He tried to tap her awake.
"Grandma! Grandma! Grandma wake up!" He said trying to shake her awake but didn't wake up or not regaining consciousness.
Branch was in shock and scared calling and screaming for his Grandma's name suddenly he woke up to see everything dark and still in Hofferson's House, as he began to flow with tears in his eyes looking at the sky and stars and he sighed.
"I missed you grandma...I wish you're hear already to help me to get me out of this death thing...But if
I earned this job all go with you, or I'll just go home, but We'll see each other again, when I'm done with this...I wonder what would Poppy is thinking about me?" He said.
Meanwhile
Poppy lying on her stomach in her soft pink bed with pink pillows and blanket with used tissues around her while she has her eyes were red looking at the picture of her and Branch in the summer time he worn his blue T- shirt and poppy wore a baby blue top with pink shorts hugging his waist smiling and Branch looked at her smiling softly.
She looked at the another picture of Poppy giving him a kiss on the cheek in the photo booth. And had their first kiss before when it's summer time.
She sniff takes a tissue and dap it on her eyes gently crying all day and yesterday after Branch's death.
She's in grief, she'll never forget that Branch met her and changed her life after the break up with Creek who cheated her with a girl and being abusive and drinker and weed smoker. But he's always there for her.
She looked at him about how she have a good time with him a lot through high school years missing him.
Together since without him and passed away yesterday.
"Oh Branch..." She said between the sniffles looking
At the picture of him. "I wish your hear. That I really need you a lot."
She sighed placing the picture of him on her nightstand before she rolls on her back looking at the ceiling up, she couldn't stop crying a lot. She then hear a buzz that came from her phone and look
At it to see messages from the snack pack just wanted to checking on her.
Message from Suki.
Suki:"Hey Poppy! How are you doing? We're just wanted to make sure your okay?"
Messages from Guy Diamond
Guy Diamond:"Hey Poppy! You wanna what makes you happy? The twins made you dress!
MessagesfromCooper
Cooper:"Hey Pops! Didn't you listen to Justin Timberlakes song cabaret ft Drake?! You'll love you love him instead of Branch!
Poppy shits off her phone and closed her drawers as she shuts off her lights laying on her side looking at the reflection of the moon shining brightly at her.
She looked at it frowning sadly.
"I missed you Branch...I wish your alive more than you dying..." Poppy said softly before closing her eyes sobbing softly after she sleeps softly.
Awww poor Poppy, I know Branch I know you wanted to go home and have choices to go to heaven and be with your grandma or just go home and be with poppy.
Sorry about waiting, I was in amount of stress because my family were arguing a lot and neighbors complaining that triggered me, but I'm okay. I'll update more of it
Sorry about the grammar, I think it looked sucked, sorry again.
thank you for reading.
