Hey Guys NovaBlade 67 here again. I hope you guys liked the first chapter of the rewrite for blue and crimson haze. Decided that I'm going abit of a different direction with it then the original and of course to keep it more Cannon friendly with the dragon ball villains and such. For those of you wondering about the Dbz x ATLA story worry not, new chapters will be coming soon for that and my other stories. Just trying to get this one off the ground and running first.
Anyways onto the story! P.S- I only own the oc's and nothing else!
Chapter 2- The shy Hyuga heiress
Odyn's eyes were still closed, but he felt hot. It was like his body was burning up from the inside out, this caused him to awake but he couldn't find the strength to open his eyes. A Hyuga maid noticed that he was awake and rushed over to calm him. "Stay still, you shouldn't be moving around just yet. Your injuries will reopen if you move around like that.," The maid said. This is when a smaller girl came over and saw the boy drenched in sweat being treated. "Hm? I-Is someone th-there? I can't tell.. but i can sense someone may be there. Whoever you are could you come abit closer? I can't see or sense you all the way over there.," Odyn said.
The girl in question was the younger sister of the Hyuga clan Heiress by about 5 years. Her name was Hanabi Hyuga. "Lady Hanabi, It's alright. The boy just wants to speak with you.," The maid told the young girl. "Ok..," Hanabi replied. The young Hyuga cautiously made her way closer to the boy so now only about 5 feet separated them. It was then that Hanabi noticed just how injured the boy really was and she felt sorry for him. "Who am I talking to?," Odyn asked. "My name is Hanabi Hyuga.," Hanabi replied. " Hanabi huh? That's a pretty name. Where am I?," Odyn asked. Before she could answer, Hanabi saw that Odyn had fallen asleep. She'd wait to talk to him more after the boy was on his feet.
A short while later, Odyn opened his eyes to see a wooden ceiling. He couldn't remember much of anything from when he was asleep. The next thing he saw was a pair of White pupiless eyes that had a hint of lavender surrounding them, these eyes belonged to an ever so curious Hyuga girl. She didn't realize that Odyn was awake yet until their eyes locked onto each other. Unable to move in time, Odyn and the girl ended up bonking their heads against each other. This only happened because Odyn was so startled by Hinata that he jerked his head forward, right into Hinata's forehead. "Gah! I'm so sorry! Are you alright?!," Odyn asked concerned.
Rubbing her forehead and straightening up, Hinata answered back. "Y-Yes I'm fine. Ow...," Hinata answered as she kept her hands over her throbbing head. Odyn went over to her after seeing that she was still in pain. "Here, let me take a look at it.," Odyn told her. Hinata very shyly nodded and lowered her hands, still wincing from the pain. "Yow, that looks kinda bad. Here, let me take care of that. Consider it my way of apologizing for your head injury.," Odyn said as he put his right hand over her forehead. Although she didn't say anything, Hinata's face lit up like a tomato. The girl was bright scarlet as a result of being very happy, but also very embarrassed. That was the first time a boy around her age aside from her cousin Neji had touched her. But that wasn't the only reason, Odyn was very kind and sweet to her.. she liked that about him even if she was just meeting him for the first time.
But then something strange happened, there was light coming from Odyn's hand! After that, all the pain in her forehead was suddenly gone! Hinata was shocked, she was at a loss for words. "Wha-huh?! How did y-you do-" Hinata began to ask before Odyn interrupted her. "I'll explain later, let's just have this be our little secret for now ok Hinata chan?," Odyn answered. Hinata just nodded. When she looked closer at his face, she finally noticed his eyes. They were the color of fire, almost as if she was staring directly into flame itself. From there, she noticed the scars on his face and arms. Especially, the scar running down through his right eye. That's when she noticed that Odyn's right eye was more of a scarlet color than his flaming orange colored eye. The more she looked at it, the more curious she got about it. Before she could observe his eye anymore, Koh, her guard came into the room. "My lady, Lord Hyuga wants to see you and-," Koh started but then stopped once he saw Hinata's proximity to the boy. "Would you mind stepping away from lady Hinata, boy?," Koh asked barely containing his displeasure.
Odyn noticed the position they were in and decided to clear up the misunderstanding. "Sir Koh, i know what it looks like and i can assure you it's not what you think. Hinata was just curious about why one of my eyes is a different color than the other.," Odyn explained. This seemed to calm the young man down as Odyn noticed his change in demeanor, once the misunderstanding was cleared up. The two children then followed the Hyuga guard into the main house of the head family where a meeting was being held regarding the blue haired boy who had pointed.. ears? Hinata rubbed her eyes to see if they were playing tricks on her or if she was just hallucinating. However, they were still there and plain as day. Nope, she wasn't just seeing things. Those were real alright. She'd never seen anyone with such beautiful and long ears before though. And this boy's hair, it would make many girls jealous. It was beautiful and long like many girls hair, so she wouldn't be surprised if someone mistook Odyn to be a girl.
They finally arrived at the main room where the meeting was being held, Koh knocked on the door and awaited an answer. It was one of Hyugas from a branch family who answered the door and escorted them in. When Hiashi saw the boy and Hinata, he abruptly quieted the meeting. "Ah Koh, I see you've brought the boy and.. my daughter. Excellent work.," Hiashi said aloud. Odyn picked up on the disdain in Hiashi's voice when he addressed Hinata, of course he didn't like that. He already didn't like this man, though he was grateful to him for saving his life. "What's your name, boy?," Hiashi asked. There it was again, that condescending tone he really didn't like hearing.
Barely restraining his rage towards Hiashi for how he addressed his own daughter, Odyn introduced himself as politely as he could. "My name is Odyn, sir.," Odyn replied. "Hm? No surname, boy?", Hiashi asked. "I do have one, sir. But it's of no weight now.," Odyn replied. Hiashi raised an eyebrow, he was curious as to why this boy's surname held no weight and was worthless now. "Oh? No weight you say.. Why is that?," Hiashi asked curious. Odyn clenched fists as he attempted to push back the tears that came with what he was about to say. "My family... they're gone now. Myself, my cousin, and my friend are the only survivors of our people. All of the others were... all of the good ones anyways.. they were wiped out.," Odyn replied.
Hiashi looked into the boy's eyes, he could tell Odyn had been through a nightmare. He took pity on the boy, he'd seen the look Odyn had before... he'd seen it on young Naruto uzumaki. He couldn't turn the boy away, so he relented. "We can't have you going around nameless, we'll visit the Hokage later and get this fixed.," Hiashi told him. Looking at this boy reminded Hiashi of his promise to his old friends, the former 4th Hokage and his wife, Kushina Uzumaki. Odyn's opinion of Hiashi improved after this, he thought maybe he was wrong about him.
Odyn spoke up again as he did suggest something to Hiashi. "Lord Hiashi? I have a favor to ask.," Odyn asked Hiashi. Hiashi listened to his request. "Yes? What is it?," Hiashi asked. "Well i can't right now, but would it be ok if i trained your daughter once i'm abit older? She's not very confident in herself right now and she's pretty depressed that she keeps disappointing you. All she's looking for is your approval.," Odyn answered. Hiashi's eyes grew sad at this because he knew what he was doing to Hinata wasn't what a father should do to his daughter. "I'm.. aware of that. Unfortunately the council of the Hyuga won't allow me to be like a real father to her. I have to be cold to her, even though i don't like it.," Hiashi replied. "I see... can you wait for me then? I want to fix that.," Odyn asked. "Of course. How long do you need?,"Hiashi asked. " I'll need about 4-6 years until i'm strong enough to confront them.," Odyn answered.
Hiashi could see that this boy really did care about Hinata, so he was willing to wait the allotted time. "Very well. I'll allow to visit Hinata as well, because i'm sure she'd like to keep spending time with you. She is quite fond of you as well.," Hiashi said. That was the beginning of the plan Hiashi Hyuga and Odyn set into motion to free Hinata of the verbal abuse from her own clan. Over the next 4 to 6 years Odyn would get significantly stronger under the training of his elder cousin Kanna and the shinobi tutelage from Natsuki.
Time skip: 4 years later
It was the day everyone in the leaf ninja academy was waiting for, graduation day. Today the students would all graduate and become shinobi. Except for one boy, a certain blond had failed again. After receiving his headband much to the ire of the adults in the village, Odyn noticed the boy on the swing outside the academy. He looked depressed, like he was about to cry but no tears would fall. Odyn had seen that look before, he had that same look himself for the longest time. Odyn was now 12 years old, the same age as most of the graduating students. He went over to the boy on the swing and sat next to him. "You alone?", Odyn asked.
The boy just looked at him blankly with nearly no emotion on his face. "Yeah, what do you care? I failed.. again, that was my last chance. Now i'll never become a ninja and everyone will just keep treating me like i'm not even there.," The boy said back. Odyn noticed that everyone was leaving and it was soon quiet around the academy. "So you're going to give up, just like that? You're going to let what a bunch of lousy adults who don't know the first thing about you decide what you are?! What a load of crap!," Odyn snapped at him. Naruto then got angry at him and asked him why he was even there. "Are you just going to judge me like everyone else?! If so, i don't need you to tell me that i'm a failure, that i shouldn't even exist! If you really think that, then go on! Kill me! No one would care if i'm gone anyways.," Naruto yelled back.
Odyn then balled his hands into fists and got really ticked off at what this kid was saying about himself. "Get up.," Odyn told him. "Huh?!," Naruto feigned like he didn't hear him. "I said get up, you idiot.," Odyn snapped. Naruto stood up angry at this kid for calling him names, he just wanted to sock this boy in the face for that. But before he could, Odyn socked him in the gut really hard. " Ow! What was that for?!," Naruto raged. "That was for being stupid! If you really feel that way, you're not even worth killing! Fool!," Odyn said angrily. The more insults this blue haired kid threw at him, the angrier Naruto got. He got so angry at him that he punched him in the face. This argument divulged into both boys just taking turns punching each other in the face. This lasted from that afternoon and into the night. The sun had long since set, and they were both still at it. Naruto completely forgot what he was upset about because he was so mad at this other boy for just walking up to him only to throw insults at him.
Naruto was the first one to fall onto his back from exhaustion, he was to tired to keep this up. But something odd happened afterwards, both boys started laughing! Only then did Naruto realize why this blue haired boy came over to talk to him, he was just trying to cheer him up. "You're weird, you know that?," Naruto said to him. "Yeah, i get that alot. Must be why the village hates me. Not as weird as you though. I mean who gives up on their dream to be Hokage just because he failed to become a ninja 3 times?," Odyn chuckled. This time Naruto laughed and smiled. Both boys got up and eventually introduced themselves to each other. "My name is Odyn, I've only lived here for about 4 years.," Odyn introduced himself. "And I'm Naruto Uzumaki, future Hokage! Believe it!," Naruto said as he introduced himself.
The two boys weren't aware, but a certain shy Hyuga girl was watching them during their whole exchange. She was relieved that Odyn and Naruto were getting along now in their own way. Now that they were getting along, she didn't have to worry. The Hyuga decided to go back to her own home, confident things would work out for Naruto and Odyn. After the Hyuga girl left, there was another person watching the exchange between the two boys. A certain instructor at the leaf academy. Once Odyn and Naruto parted ways, that's when he made his move.
Mizuki confronted Naruto and was able to trick him into stealing the scroll of sealing. Odyn was almost back to where he stayed at the moment when he heard about the commotion. "Ugh, come on Naruto! What have you gotten yourself into this time?," Odyn said as he took off to find Naruto. As he headed towards Naruto, he thought something felt off. As he drew nearer to where his new friend was, he felt it. Something that never should have been able to travel all this way was in fact here, a creature of darkness called a marauder. They were eerie creatures that were like parasites, once they possessed you there was no going back. If their virus got to your brain, you couldn't go back to being human. In reality, they were demonic parasites who were controlled by someone from the demon world. Odyn knew that whoever had been infected by that dark magic couldn't be human anymore. When he arrived at the spot he sensed naruto, he saw him. It was Mizuki, but he'd been infected. He had to warn Naruto, so he quickly jumped down and sprinted towards naruto just grabbing him in time to avoid the infected mizuki's attack.
He quickly got Naruto's attention by slapping him out of his stupor so to speak. "Naruto, what are you doing?!", Odyn shouted. "Odyn? What happened to Mizuki sensei?," Naruto asked. "He tricked you is what! He's been infected by a parasite from where I'm originally from. He's no longer human, nor can he go back to being human! You are not the nine tailed fox Naruto! You are just it's keeper! If anything you're doing the village a favor by not letting that thing rampage again!," Odyn told him. "But I'm the reason Iruka sensei's parents were-," Naruto started but was interrupted by odyn again. "Don't even think that! That was the fox's fault, not yours! If you're a monster, than so am i! No brother of mine is going to give into their beast's rage, i won't let them!," Odyn told him again. "I'm your b-brother?," Naruto asked. "Yes, you dimwhit! You are as of now!," Odyn answered. Naruto then straightened up and stood to his feet. He produced the hand sign and in a giant plume of smoke, hundreds of Naruto's appeared. "Shadow clone Jutsu!," Naruto called out.
In no time at all the hundreds of narutos, along with the original, and Odyn beat Mizuki into the ground. Odyn stepped forward and channeled golden yellow energy into his palm and aimed it at the infected mizuki. "Goodbye demon! Haaa!!!!",Odyn screamed as he incinerated the dark magic and the parasite. Mizuki was left lying on his back, unconscious.
A short time later and just before dawn, iruka called over Naruto. He told Naruto to close his eyes as he took off the green goggles on his head and replaced them with a leaf village headband, a sign that he was now a shinobi. When Naruto opened his eyes and felt what was on his forehead, he jumped up and down in glee. "Congradulations, Naruto. You are now a leaf village shinobi.," Iruka told him. This day couldn't get much better. There was one last thing that had to be taken care of though. "Naruto.," Odyn said to get his attention. "Yes?," Naruto asked. Odyn then pulled out two cartons of chocolate milk and gave one to Naruto as they stood across from each other.
The two boys stood in front of each other while locking arms as each had the carton of chocolate milk at each other's mouth. I know this isn't typically how one becomes blood brothers but this was the best i could come up with.", Odyn said. Naruto waved him off by saying it was fine, he always wanted a brother anyways. Both boys drink their milk before taking a small amount of their blood and drawing a tattoo either on the forehead, or on the base of the neck. Naruto's blood seal was placed just beneath his left eye in the shape of a jagged lightning bolt, while Odyn's was placed on the base of his neck where it was visible. Odyn recited the jutsu to make the seals permanent by adding his ki into it. With that, the ritual was complete. Odyn and Naruto were now brothers in blood.
This had been a wild day for Naruto, he defeated someone who tricked him, became a ninja, and gained a brother by blood. He couldn't wait for what lay in store for him next. After a long day, the two Uzumaki brothers headed back to their apartment to rest up for the next day's events.
To Be continued in chapter 3- Promise kept pt I