Hi I originally wrote this as a sort of joke for my friend to read and I don't think I realised that people might read this story. So I'm going to try a rewrite of this.
Prologue
It was a rainy day in Tokyo, cars speeding across the roads to get home and the hustle and bustle of people walking and laughing down the streets. One of these people was a teenage girl called Ichika standing outside of a gaming shop. But unlike the majority she wasn't talking, she wasn't laughing at all. A new game had come out today Demon Hunter Online. It didn't look incredible or bad just normal. The thing was Ichika was falling behind with the trends nobody talked to her after the event. Her mum and dad wouldn't even allow her to buy the game after what happened to her brother. Ichika stepped forward then hesitated. "Let's do this." The doors slid open so neat, as she walked down the aisles incomplete, and there it stood from her head to her feet, the Demon Hunter Online stand. She stood there flustered surprised she even walked that far into the sweaty humid gaming shop. She grabbed one copy of DHO and the game glasses. As she joined the never ending cue of people she felt eyes piercing into her back like it was weird that someone would buy an AR game especially so little time after the Sao incident. "Forty pounds please miss miss." Ichika snapped back to reality. "Sorry here keep the change." After leaving the shop Ichika walked staring at the cherry blossom trees so vibrant and full of life it had stopped raining since and the sun started to shine through the clouds. She stopped quite abruptly to find herself at a little coy pond deciding to sit down on the grass. She snapped the glasses on got out her copy of Demon Hunter Online and popped it in. "Here we go again." Ichika murmured.
I hope this was better than the original