And I'm back with a new chapter. Thanks for the support on my first chapter getting 36 follows and 500 visits so thanks. Anyway this is chapter 2, No it's not a prologue anymore it's now naruto's childhood being neglected for his siblings anyway heres chapter 2 hope you enjoy it! (Last edit 6/19/17)
Hokage Monument (6 years after attack naruto is 6 basically)
It was October 10th marking Naruto's 6th birthday however his parents seemed to not notice for the 6th time in 6 years. Naruto was in a mix of emotions he was sad, mad, and apologetic at the same time. "Why do they always forget about me?" Naruto said out loud still crying.
"Well they might not forget next year… Right?" Naruto said hopeful but at the same time thinking to himself that it was very unlikely which made him cry even more.
Naruto then froze when he heard a man talk behind him, "Hey why are you crying and don't you think you should be at home at this hour at night" the man spoke with some humor in his tone.
Naruto didn't even turn around before saying "my Family don't care about me".
"Hey don't go all Uchiha on me and start brooding, Before you do that how bout explain to me why your family don't care about you?" The man said.
"Well i a-hhhh mean they don't celebrate my birthdays, don't give me dinner don't train me like they train my siblings and they ignore me. While my siblings make fun of me and don't give two shits about me" Naruto said in a cold and satire tone which made the man frown. 'I know he told me the kid was sad from being neglected but from here it seems like he hates them but still yearns for their attention.'
"Well gaki how bout we introduce each other and tell each other our life stories?" The man said with a smirk while Naruto turned with happiness in his eyes.
"Really you mean you would listen to me?" Naruto said. "Sure Gaki But How bout We Exchange names first?" He said Laughing offering a hand to Naruto.
"YA" Naruto said in excitement While the other man simply laughed. "The Names Jinpachi Ryu" Jinpachi said. "Naruto" Naruto answered without his last name.
Jinpachi and Naruto then talked about their lives with Naruto talking about how he was neglected and practically forgotten by his parents with Jinpachi answering telling Naruto his life story where he was from the hidden mist but had no home anymore due to his clan being killed due to their bloodline during the Hidden Mist Civil war and the Bloodline Purge.
"Well I guess that leaves both of us with no family" Jinpachi said with laughter while Naruto only nodded sadly. "Cheer up kid Because Now we're gonna be each other's family cause right now I'm Choosing you as my apprentice to pass on my clans teachings to you!"
While Jinpachi stood up showing a man with no shirt but a scarf on his neck showing a lean but muscular form with 1 ring on both of his arms and neck with a red jewel on middle. Completed by baggy black pants, red eyes (A/N kurenai eyes),and messy black hair. "From now on i-i'm gonna be your student and family Jinpachi-san?" Naruto answered with a hope filled awe face.
"Sure are Naruto-Kun" Jinpachi said with a smile. "Tou-san" Naruto said with a smile "wait what?" Jinpachi answered as he got tackled by Naruto shouting "TOU-SAN".
"You don't really have to call me that Naruto-Kun" Jinpachi said with confusion but Naruto just started shouting "TOU-SAN TOU-SAN TOU-SAN TOU-SAN TOU-SAN TOU-SAN".
"Ok" Jinpachi answered. But little did they know this was just a start of the most important relationship that decided the fate of the world. 'Part 1 finished now to see if this guy holds up his deal with me… Or is he a god?' Thought Jinpachi while simultaneously getting hugged on the ground by a certain Blond male.
Scene change forest of death (2 years time skip naruto is 8)
Naruto was now in a shack in the forest of death that his sensei lived in. Apparently his sensei was a seal master and made a seal that suppressed their chakra and home so no one could find it. But they both did admit a lady by the name of Anko managed to stop by their location many times and still managed to not find them.
Naruto didn't live there by all means but still managed to crash their for the night sometimes this was one of those days. He was now training his fire dragon Taijutsu stance as he need to have really good grasp on all of the element dragon Taijutsu stances to combine them and gain the Elemental dragon stance. His Sensei had told him it was his best taijutsu stance and that it probably was Naruto's best stance as he recognised Naruto as a explosive and unpredictable person which meant he was perfect with this stance. He had already mastered the wind dragon style and was doing fire since it was his 2nd strongest element his third element was Lightning which was his weakest of the three so he was planning to do it last.
But his jutsu collection was almost non existent with his Sensei never teaching him his jutsus since Naruto didn't have enough control over his chakra. But his sensei did teach him a jutsu just for the academy and had already said he would teach him jutsu when he was 10. He knew some Jutsu though which included Shunshin no Jutsu, Kawarimi no jutsu, Fire clone Jutsu, And his newly acquired jutsu from his Sensei Katon: Twin Dragon Jutsu Which was a jutsu that made 2 twin dragons that roared and approached its target even following it if it tried to run. (A/N Looks like Hanzo ultimate from overwatch but dragons are smaller and made out of fire)
The User needed a sufficient amount of chakra control like walk on water amount but also needed a MASSIVE amount of chakra to make. But sometimes when Naruto did the move while he was mad a red chakra would cloak and the flames would turn blue for some reason which he still didn't understand. Although he had to train hard for 2 years. You would think Jinpachi was just a normal shinobi BUT NO. He was a massive slave driver. But before Naruto could finish his summary of his last two years of training was awoken by his Sensei's cooking also remembering that it was the day he was to go to the academy for his first day.
Naruto having a good body being skinny while having a lot of muscle that made it look like a forming six pack which made him have a swimmers like body put on his black pants that made it just below his knees and was less baggier than his sensei's pants, then put on his fishnet undershirt then his normal all black tee and then his red and black jacket with a dragon going up on his back that was resistant to fire jutsu gifted to him by his Sensei (A/N Looks like boruto jacket but more darker red instead of lighter red and doesn't have the thing that's raised on the neck basically lower neck thing and dragon going up on back). "Naruto-Kun Please wake up you're probably like a minute late by now" jinpachi said with a laugh playing a prank on Naruto like he always did although he had a funny side he was quite serious when he wanted. "WHAAAAATTTT" Naruto Shouted before he ran out with dango and used shunshin no jutsu to get to the academy.
Scene Change (Academy)
when he arrived he saw no one outside of the academy he quickly rushed to the counter to
see his room when he got his room he saw what was probably his teacher standing beside the podium doing attendance as he entered he heard his name be called "Naruto Namikaze-Uzumaki".
"Here" Naruto simply answered as he got everyone's attention in the room he noticed some girls going a slight shade of pink and Menma his brother growling in uninterest as he continued to quietly argue with a raven haired boy that looked like a Uchiha. "Oh ah there's a seat next to Ino so sit down Naruto" His teacher who he quickly realised name was Iruka said.
As Naruto sat down beside a blond girl that looked really cute to him but he didn't let his feelings overtake him he then remembered the time yesterday where his sensei told him to make some friends since it would be good for him. "Hi My names Naruto" he quietly said to Ino. Ino then looked at him and smiled "Hi! My Name's Ino Yamanaka" she said before saying here to the instructor.
Naruto then smiled and said "nice name" while Ino Blushed a slight pink from the smile then remember something 'Wait isn't this guy Mito's brother I can't think like that!' Ino thought as she was Mito's best friend.
Mito and Hinata who saw this both had different thoughts Hinata thought 'Look like Ino found someone who she likes i can't wait to tease her for this' she then giggled after this while Mito Thought 'Why is she talking to my loser brother?' She asked herself but felt a ping on her heart after saying that.
The Kyuubi then growled of how stupid his container is " Of Course the Shinigami altered the seal to make his family hate him but i can't say that to my dumb container since my mind is locked in a smart one ahhh i wish my whole body was in him at least i would have fun, but no i get these two shitheads." the Kyuubi growled.
Alright "if attendance is done i will now lead you all to the training grounds to test your skills." While he led the class Naruto felt 3 Large chakras at the field 'Guess They brought in the sannin or some jonin to test us' as the class entered to field to be all surprised except naruto who already saw this at the three sannin in front of them.
Jiraiya the Toad Sannin broke the silence saying "Alright Gakis! We're here to see your skills so we can determine where you are in the class rankings." Tsunade then cut in saying "We will call your name and you will first do taijutsu matches then you will show us your kunai and shuriken throwing and for extra credit show us ninjutsu" With the clan kids all cheering. "First up Kiba and Menma" Orochimaru said while the two got up to the ring.
"Sorry Menma But i'm gonna take you down" Kiba said with confidence "Sure you are Kiba" Menma replied with disinterest with Kiba growled at and gave his dog a pill and the dog then became Kiba as they both attacked Menma. They started throwing punches at Menma who Blocked all of them but was obviously apart of a plan which Menma didn't realise because of his thick head. "HAHA I got you Now Menma Akamaru let's do it!" They then both shouted PASSING FANG as they both turned into what appeared as drills and went at Menma who jumped up but was to no success as they both followed him.
then Menma Threw a smoke bomb laced with Ramen smell that confused both of them and then atop of them they got a brutal kick from Menma to the back. Which promptly decided the match. "Ok Winner Menma" Jiraiya said with a smile at him while Menma's fangirls all started shouting.
"Next Match Shikamaru vs Ino" Tsunade said while both got to the ring but then Shikamaru said "I forfeit because fights against girls are too troublesome." with All three Sannin sighing with them all thinking 'Yup a Nara' While Ino shouted at Shikamaru for not fighting against her for being a girl Jiraiya said "Winner Ino by Forfeit
Couple of civilian matches later
"Naruto VS Sasuke" Tsunade said with sadness in her voice as her And Jiraiya knew they both neglected him Tsunade personally didn't talk to him since he reminded her of her dead brother While when Jiraiya ever thought of him his heart would just tell him to not to do it. Naruto and sasuke both got to the ring with everyone curious as to what Naruto could do since almost everyone didn't know Their Hokage Had 3 kids. While Sasuke Smirked and said out loud "I guess I got Menma's failure of a brother" while Menma snickered Naruto said nothing and two of the sannin held a frown over the Uchihas words. "Alright Naruto VS Sasuke… HAJIME!" Jiraiya said.
I know Cliffhanger I'm a dick But atleast i posted 2 chapters in 2 days plus this was 2k words so definitely an Improvement. Anyway to answer some questions people might have Jinpachi is a OC but if you want to know my idea for the oc just search him up on naruto fanon but i did change a few things. Is Naruto going to be OP? No he's not gonna be jounin level while genin and not OP He's just really strong from his training with a kage level person in terms of power right now i would say he's a little more powerful than Menma who is mid genin level right now. In terms of teams i might make it a new number which instead of 3 genin there would be 4 and 1 or 2 jounin which i didn't decide yet. As far as Naruino their relationship will get going when they become genin but there friends right now i guess. Anyway Please review and support my newest chapter. Chapter 3 coming soon.
