We are back but and these are the reviews of chapter 7 of Brother of the Night
SomeBloke420 : Thanks for supporting so far my story and sorry if my previous chapters were not that great , and i hope youl like this chapter .
Mega DMX and The Wolf 1230 : I m glad to know that both of you like the return of Bane .
The God Titan : Indeed Lincoln is gonna have so many problems now that Bane is back , youl see on the future chapters of course .
James B Cameron : I like how you see Lynn in this chapter .
Ryan Mills-Manestar : Thank you for supporting my story so far i realy appreciate it alot .
Gamelover41592 : Thank you also and i hope youl like this chapter all the other ones i made so far .
With that being said will see each other at the end of chapter 8 . See ya soon everyone .
" Don't be afraid of losing people . Be afraid of losing yourself trying to please everyone around you" - Batman
Chapter 8 : Behind the Mask part 1
It was a very beautifull sunday afternoon on Gotham City , the Louds minus Lynn where at a nearby cafe trying to enjoy a nice quiet day . Lincoln was enjoying a nice cup of coffe trying to forget for a little whille that he is the protector of this city .
Lori noticed Lincoln looking a little happy , but she knew pretty well that his mind was focused in trying to get Leni ' s memories back and finding there lost sister Lynn who dissapeared a couple of weeks ago . Ever since her little brother becamed Batman , Lincoln was trying to make up for the family for every mistake he made ever since he lost there parents and started to changed from a peacemaker into a troublemaker .
Lori wanted so much to help him out . But what could she do ? . She hated to see Lincoln feelling sad , but when the time will come she will know what to do in helping out her little brother .
Luna the third eldest noticed that Lori and Lincoln where acting really weird for a couple of good weeks but she didn ' t understood why . Ever since they all moved into the Wayne Mansion Lincoln started to always dissapear the house whille Lori always tried to explain that he has a job he needs to attend to . But Luna didn ' t buy the story Lori told her and everyone else .
I mean why would Lincoln keep a secret that he has a job from everyone else . Something was akward but she will have to figure that out later on since she didn ' t wanted to ruin this moment seeing everyone else enjoying themselves .
Just then a mysterious black van appeared in front of them with many soldiers crashing in scarying everyone around and started to take hostage the Louds . Lincoln was shocked and not understood what is going on , but that did not stopped him to fight them and to protect his family . For a couple of minutes Lincoln was fighting with the soldier that ruined there day , his sisters were amazed to see how good is Lincoln fighting .
" What the heck is going on here ? " asked Lincoln to himself .
" Lincoln watch out " yelled Lori at him . To late when he turned around he was knocket to the ground by one of the soldiers with some sort of an electrical device .
" LINCOLN ! " said all of his sisters to him whille the where being caught and thrown in the mysterious black van one by one .
Somewhere in Gotham ...
" Oww my head hurts so bad " said Lincoln finally waking up after being knocket out cold by thoose soldiers who attacked him and his sisters .
He starts to look around and Lincoln finds himself inside some sort of a prison cell all alone . Just then the door of the prison cell starts to open revealing a man in front of him who starts to speak with him :
" Greetings and welcome to my headquarter it's a pleasure to finally meet you Lincoln Loud or should i say Batman "said the man in front of Lincoln making him shocked that he knew who Lincoln was .
" And you are ... ? "asked Lincoln .
" Me ? Ohh how rude of me to not introduce myself call me Mr . W " said Mr. W to him .
" I will call you every way i want , but first tell me where are my sisters ? " asked Lincoln looking really mad at Mr . W
" Dont worry youl get to meet them soon , if you can survive of course " said Mr . W with a wicked smile at him .
" Survive ? Survive what ? " asked Lincoln .
" Ohh right , right you dont know . You will fight against my assasin " said Mr . W to him .
" You see you and youre sisters have been captured by my organization , who recently received a very important mission from one of my sponsors and that is to destroy the succesor of Batman " said Mr. W again to him .
" And why would i wanna fight youre assasin ? Why not just give the order and kill me here and now " asked Lincoln .
" I could do that , but this will be much fun dont you agree ? But if you still wanna play it that way , maybe i should give the order right in killing youre sisters " said Mr W to him .
Hearing that his sisters might get killed Lincoln snapped and charged at Mr . W to punch him the face but one of the soldiers punched really hard Lincoln in the stomach that he collapsed on the ground .
" You sure are a very energetic one aren't you ? But understand this kid dont have a chooise here youl fight my assasin either youl like it or not , if you wanna save youre sisters of course , just do as i say and maybe i will let youre sisters go home . You tell youre men to get the girls so that they can spend some time they have left with there brother " said Mr . W as he started to leave the prison cell letting Lincoln on the cold ground.
" Yes sir " said the soldier to Mr. W .
Meanwhille ...
In another prison cell Lori was really worried for her sisters and brother , she hopped everything will be alright . Just then one of the soldiers came inside the prison cell and grabbed Lori by her hair to come with him .
Each loud sister was grabbed by a soldier and forced to come with them , not knowing why this is happening to them . Finally they arrived in a large room shocked to see there only brother laying down out cold on the ground with many soldiers beating him really bad .
They were given the order to punish Lincoln for trying to attack Mr. W . His sisters couldnt move at all , they could only watch with tears in there eyes seeing there only brother beaten that bad even Leni with her memory lost cried for him . From what she was being told Lincoln always supported her in her dificuldificult times .
" Phew , that was alot of work . Come one lets go and let his sisters yo deal with there brother we did what we where asked to do " said one of the soldiers .
All the other soldiers understood and left the large room . After that Lincoln ' s sister camed in a hurry to treat the wounds he received from thoose awfull soldiers .
" I dont understand at all , what did Lincoln do to thoose men ? " asked Luna .
" Whatever it was , they didn't cared about him they just punched and kicked him " said Luan to her other sisters .
Luna was about to speak again when she saw Lori in tears .Seeing her brother all beat up with no way to defend would upset everyone .
" Lori , dont worry about him . He is much tougher then he looks " said Luna to her ssister trying to stop Lori from crying .
" Luna is right , plus he would never want to see each one of us sad " said Lucy backing up her sister .
" Well one thing didn' t changed at all in him " said Lola .
" Ohh whats that ? " asked Leni .
" That he always is getting us into so many problems " said Lola to her other sisters .
" But he tried to protect us this time , just like the time he saved Lori and Leni " said Lucy .
" Well i guess he is still looking after us , so this time i m gonna forgive him " said Lola again .
" Anyway we need to find a way out of here , or who knows what might happen with us " said Luan .
" But how ? " asked Leni .
" Leave that to me " said a voice who was heard . Looking down the loud sisters saw there brother Lincoln trying to get up on his feet , but he falls back again .
" Lincoln youre okay " said Lana to her brother .
" Dude dont scare us like that ever again " said Luna to him . All of the loud sisters started to help Lincoln get back on his feet which he aprreciated the help from his sisters .
" Sorry , i screwed things up really bad this time " said Lincoln to them .
" Will discuss about this back home , first thing for us to do is to get out of here " said Lisa .
" Ohh , do you have a plan Lisa about this wholle situation ? " asked Luan her little sister .
" I wish i could say yes , but i am still thinking " said Lisa .
" Dont worry guys i have a plan " said Lincoln who was going at the main door of the large room and started to speak :
" Hey you " said Lincoln to the main guard at the door .
" What do you want ? " asked the guard .
" I wanna tell you that youre face is probably the most ugliest thing i have ever seen in my entire life said Lincoln with a straight face to the guard who looked like he was about to explode from the bad comment Lincoln told him , even his sister couldnt believe what lincoln just said . Did he wished to be punished again that was what his sisters were thinking at the moment , wondering if this was his plan .
" Take that back , if not youl get beaten again " said the guard to him .
" Make me " said Lincoln to the guard still having his big smile on his face . With that being said the guard opened the door and just as he opened , Lincoln grabs him by the neck and smash his head realy powerfull on the wall surprising even his sisters not just the guard .
" Let go of me " said the guard to him .
" Sure , after youl give me youre gun " said Lincoln to him .
" Bitch , you are so gonna regret this " said the guard to him giving his gun . Lincoln then punches in the face the guard who is left on the floor , whille he looks at the door to se if there are many more other soldiers around .
Seeing no problem , Lincoln signals to his sister to come , thing they did not looking backk at all . On the hall Lincoln and his sisters were trying to sneak away without being seen .
" That was probably the most stupid yet lucky plan you have ever got " said Lisa to him .
" Yeah dude what were you thinking ? " asked Luna .
" Hey it worked , now can you stop complain until we get out of here, youre very annoying at the moment " said Lincoln to them .
" Still the same sharp mouth , man sometimes i hate when you start speaking " said Lori to him .
" Guys quiet , guards up ahead " said Lincoln to his sisters .
" So what are we gonna do ? " asked Lucy .
" Stay here whille i take care of them " said Lincoln but his bruises started again to hurt , worrying his sisters when they saw the pain there brother was suffering .
" Dude take it easy , you are still hurt " said Luna to him .
" No way , not until i get you all out of here and thats final " said Lincoln to his sisters with a serious look on his face .
" Umm ... guys we have a problem " said Luan to her siblings showing that a very tall man covered with muscles appeared in front of the guards , it was none other then Bane .
" Damm look at the size of him , he is huge " said Lana .
" Maybe we should find another way out" said Luan , but just then Lincoln jumped in front of the guards and Bane shocking his sisters .
" Lincoln are you nuts , what are you doing ? " asked Lori .
" No just using myself as a bait until you guys can leave this dangerous hall that will turn into a battlefield . Dont worry about me this is not gonna take me that long , now go " said Lincoln to his sisters .
" Lincoln get back here right now " said Lori looking really mad at him , but he not responded back at her .
" Okay big guy , wanna get out of the way before i break youre teeth " said Lincoln with a huge smirk on his face whille also trying to ignore the bruises who were making him feel worst .
" Youre very funny little man , but if youl give up now , maybe i wont break you into so many pieces " said Bane to him .
" Then do it , i dare you " said Lincoln to Bane .
" Fine by me , you shall face the power of Bane then " said Bane to him .
Seeing that there is not way to make Lincoln change his mind the sisters leave him alone with Bane hopping everything will be alright whille being followed by the guards next to Bane .
" Please be carefull Lincoln " said Lori to herself watching behind at her little brother .
" Ready Bane if that is youre name " said Lincoln to him .
" Ready " said Bane starting to run towards Lincoln who was still smiling knowing that he wont get out here in one piece , but he was glad that his sisters wont see this .
Bane tried to punch Lincoln in the face , but Lincoln dodged the attack and tried himself to punch him the stomach but that not even make Bane shake .
" Is that all you got ?" asked Bane .
" No just ... that was the only thing Lincoln was able to say when he was punched in the face with blood coming from his mouth by Bane almost knocing him down on the floor .
" Hmm , that was shocking to see you still on youre feet " said Bane to Lincoln .
Wipping the blood from his mouth and with a smile on his face Lincoln started to speak :
" You have got to be kidding me . You call that a punch ? . Even my ex -girlfriend can strike a punch much worse then yours and belive me she is much more scary and dangerous then you will ever be "said Lincoln to Bane .
" Hahahahaha youre very funny kid , now i am so gonna enjoy breking that cocky smile from youre face" said Bane punching his fists , ready to attack again .
Meanwhille...
The Loud sisters were trying escape the guards who were after them . Sudeenly they noticed a room with the door open made them go inside .
The guards where about to enter the room when they saw who was inside they retreated back , making the Loud sisters confused .
" Okay ... that was weird why did they retreat ?" asked Lana .
" Who cares , at least were saved "said Lola to her twin sister . None othe Loud sisters noticed that behing them a female ninja was taking out her weapons ready to attack them .
Back with Lincoln and Bane ...
Lincoln looked really bad covered in blood having to fight with Bane . He hated the fact that he left his costume and gadgets at the Wayne Mansion .
" Come on Bane , is that really all you got ?" asked Lincoln .
" Okay tough guy you dont seem to give up so ... that was the only thing Bane said to Lincon when he started to run towards him grabbijng his neck and smashing every wall with Lincoln being sen by many guards and soldiers , how Bane is breaking every wall with Lincoln .
After Lincoln feelt every wall being breaken down with his back , he finds himself in some sort of a fighting gladiator arena .
The lights turned on and Lincoln saw many people looking at him and Bane . Most of them were cheering only for Bane and making bets how much can Lincoln survive with Bane .
" Had enough ? " asked Bane .
" No way , i am just warming up " said Lincoln to Bane hopping that his sisters are safe . Getting really mad Bane was about to hit Lincon again when Bane saw Mr . W on a large tv screen and stopped his attack .
" Congrats Mr . Loud for not dying whille you fighted with Bane " said Mr . W to him .
" You again , when will you understand that no matter how much youl beat and torture me i wont stop until my sisters are safe " said Lincoln .
" You mean thoose girls up there " said Mr . W to Lincoln pointing to look up . Lincoln looked and was shocked when he saw his sisters knocked out cold and tied up on crosses , covered in blood .
" You maniac , just wait until i will get my hands on you for hurting my family " said Lincoln really mad .
" Dont point fingers at me kid , my assasin did that to them not me " said Mr. W to Lincoln .
" So you want me to fight with youre assain really bad ? Fine i will on one condition . f i win you will let my sisters go home " said Lincoln .
" Very well , but only if youl win said Mr . W to him pointing to Bane to retreat back and let his assasin deal with Lincoln . Bane understood and left the arena , having a smile on his face knowing that this kid he fighted so far will be dead .
In the arena appeard a female ninja , which Lincoln kinda hated he has to fight with a girl , but he nedeed to save his siblings no matter the cost .
" Mr . Loud , let me introduce you to Lady Vengeance " said Mr . W .
" I dont care at all what her name is am gonna destroy her and save then my family "said Lincoln to him . And with that Lincoln started to run and punch Lady Vengeance even if his body was hurt really bad .
Lady Vengeance was dodging every attack Lincoln was delivering to her with no effect at all . She throws shuriken stars at him which he dodged some and some teared his clothes .
" I have to finish this real quick "said Lincoln to himself as he tries to kick her in the head with his foot , which she stops the atatck with one hand on hers . The crowd was screaming like wild animals at the fight they were seeing .
" Dammit , there so noisy i cant focus on the fight with all the yelling " said Lincoln again to himself .
" Gimme a break " said Lincoln seeing Lady Vengeance grabbing his foot and throws Lincoln the other side of the arena hitting again another wall .
But Lady Vengeance was not done with Lincoln as she was trying to hit him with her foot . Lincoln dodged that atatck but was shocked to see the power of that kick breaking the wall .
" She is no amateur thats for sure" said Lincoln .
Next to him Lincoln saw some shuriken she used against him and decided to grabb some of them to help him out . Throwing some of the shuriken at her was not helping at all she dodged almost every one of them , until one hit her mask .
Seeing that a shuriken touched her mask , Lincoln started to believe that maybe he can still win this fight and save his sisters .
Lincoln in that moment runs towards her and grabbs Lady Vengeance by her hand about to punch her straight in the face which she dodged not before Lincoln ripps off her mask .
" Well at least i ripped her mask off , maybe that counts also in this fight . Lady Vengeance was with her back at Lincoln until she turned around , making Lincoln at that moment really damm shocked with his eyes large open .
" No way " said Lincoln .
" Is something wrong Mr . Loud , do you give up ? . Dont you wanna save youre sisters anymore ? ! " said Mr . W at him .
" This must be a nightmare , L... L ... Lynn ? " said Lincoln still in shocked to see that the person that he was fighting until now was none other then his missing sister Lynn Loud Jr .
To Be Continued ...
Next time on Brother of the Night : Behind the Mask part 2
Lincoln is lost , what he can do to save his sisters now . Wil he still fight with Lady Vengeance or will he give up ? Find out next time .
And this was chapter 8 of Brother of the Night . Hope you like it , dont forget to review on it and sorry for my grammar in this story . Until next time The Storyteller993 is out . Peace and be safe .