And we are finally back with chapter 9 of Brother of the Night ! Thank you for the patience so far , good or worst il glad that many of you like my story . And with that being said let me give you a warning that this chapter will not be very long because i had to work much more this couple of months and this the best ic ould do at the momwnt but promised next chapter will be long . But before we start let me start answering at youre reviews on chapter 8 and will see ya all next time so be safe and peace . Bye and see ya all next time .


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"When there is no enemy within, the enemies on the outside can do you no harm" - Batman .

Chapter 9 : Behind the Mask part 2

Lincoln was turned into stone not moving any kinda muscle , no he was lost and shocked alot to see that they enemy he was fighting trying to save his sisters was none other then his sporty sister Lynn Jr.

" This must be a lie "said Lincoln to himself .

" Come on hero , show us what youre made of" said Mr . W to Lincoln with ahuge evil smile on his entire face .

" No . No way you psycho , you cant make me hurt my sister and i wont even raise one hand anymore against her you hear me ?! said Lincoln really mad at Mr. W .

" Wrong you will fight , if you want youre sisters to be saved said Mr. W back to Lincoln .

" I have a better idea . if youl release my sisters i promise you can do whatever you want with me , just dont hurt them anymore , let them go back home "said Lincoln to Mr. W .

" Youre not the one that makes deals around here kid , i am . But if you really say youl do anything then fine i will release them if you agree that tommorow morning you are gonna let me execute you in front of the entire city showing who Batman really is said Mr. W throwing into the arena the his costume that surprised Lincoln a little to know that this guy had his costume .

" Dont worry about how i got the costume , i only want to know if youl agree to my offer "said Mr. W to Lincoln .

Looking one more time at his sister Lynn then at his other sisters Lincoln spoke again :

" You have a deal "said Lincoln to Mr. W . That was all that Mr. W wanted to hear as he pointing to Lady Vengeance to stop and retreat back , thing she just did .

Later that day ...

The Loud sister finally woke up and hound themselves back inside another prison cell . Looking around they noticed Lincoln there only brother sitting in a corner looking really sad and upset at himself .

"Dude , what happend you look like you seen a ghost" said Luna to him .

" Yeah , i kinda did "said Lincoln with a little smile on his face that was fast noticed by his sisters , especially Lori .

That Night ...

When night fallen down and his sister fallen asleep on the cold floor minus Lori who keept on looking at her brother who was still in the same corner . She decided to come closer to him and starts to speak :

" Lincoln , something is bothering you alot . You never moved from that spot and for some reason i feel like youre hidding something from us "said Lori to him which grabbed his full attention .

" I guess i really stink as a hero "said Lincoln .

Hearing this made Lori really upset and she asked why does he thinks that way about him . Having some time left with his family , Lincoln told his big sister what happend a couple of hours ago , what she heard was really hard to swallow after hearing who is Lady Vengeance and what Lincoln has to do to save everyone .

" Lincoln , youl find a way to deal with this . You did it when you fighted against Blight and won "said Lori to him .

" That was different , but deep down i still feelt like i lost when Leni lost her memories "said Lincoln .

" No matter how much i try , i fail . I failed protecting mom and dad because of my selfish reasons to run away instead of protecting them , i let Leni get hurt and ended up losing her memory about us and Lynn turned a villain "said Lincoln to his sister .

" Lincoln everyone makes mistakes . You should not let them get to you , like i said you will find a way to save all of us , like last time said Lori grabbing her brother's arm which surprised him a little .

" Why ?" asked Lincoln almost breaking down in tears .

" Huh ?! "said Lori back to him .

" Why do you believe in me so much ? What makes you have hope like that ? You never showed me this kinda affection when i was little and we all lived in Royal Woods "asked Lincoln .

Lori was left spechless , she wanted to tell Lincoln how much he means to her , but this was not the time or place to tell him about her feelings for him . No that will have to wait for later on , but she had to bring an answer to him so she said :

" Because you once called yourself " the man with the plan " and i still believe you to be the man with the plan " said Lori to her brother . Hearing this made Lincoln feel a little better and was starting to wonder that maybe Lori is right , he really is the man with the plan and he always found a solution to almost any kinda problem the louds have encountered .

" Thank you Lori " said Lincoln with a smile on his face whille grabbing her hand this time around which made Lori blush a little ,but she returned back to reality and spoken again :

" So when will they free us ?" asked Lori .

" After my execution " said Lincoln .

" No i wont allow it . This time i am gonna save everyone , even if it's the last thing i will ever do "said Lori to herself .But Lori knew very well , if she wants to save everyone she will need a plan .

Just then Lori noticed Lincoln 's costume and came up with an interesting idea .

" Lincoln i have a plan that will save all of us " said Lori to him grabbing Lincoln 's attention . Lori started then to speak :

" Mr. W thinks youre Batman right ?" asked Lori.

" Yeah " said Lincoln .

" Well tommorow morning at youre execution youl appear , but Batman wont " said Lori to him .

" I dont get it " said Lincoln .

" Well when Mr . W will take you to the arena i will make my appearence as Batman . That way all the underground bosses will think that Mr. W cheated them , and when that will happen everyone will start a asking for there money " said Lori .

"Ohh , then a fight might start between them which will give me the oportunity to save Lynn and everyone else , whille you distract them " said Lincoln .

" Indeed " said Lori .

" Usually i would be against this plan , but since the situation is not very good i will accept only on one condition " said Lincoln to his big sister .

" Which is ? " asked Lori .

" Be carefull , i lost already two family members and i hurt two sisters of mine . Do please be carefull " said Lincoln .

" I will " said Lori and with that the plan was made . Lincoln turned around so Lori can change into Batman .

Next day ...

The Loud siblings were being waken by two soldiers that grabbs there brother . Being busy they didn' t noticed that one loud sibling sneaked out dressed as Batman .

" Good luck Lori and please be carefull " said Lincoln leaving the prison cell , looking one more time at his sisters .

To be continued ...

Next time on Brother of the Night : Behind the Mask part 3 Final .

Lincoln is waiting for Lori ' s plan to begin . But can she do it by passing a powerfull enemy that is none other then Bane who stands in her way . Find out next time .