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Chapter 5: The Mighty Brute Falls. Dodoria Meets His Fate.

Gohan and Krillin darted narrowly through the rocks, trying to lose the raging, pink menace hot on their tails. Dodoria crashed through cliffs as though they were nothing, his attention solely focused on the two fighters and the namekian child. The trio could feel the energy surging off of the warrior as he got angrier and angrier.

"When I get my hands on you, not even immortality would be able to save you!" Dodoria screamed in rage. He shot energy blasts of energy in front of him wanting to hit atleast one of his targets.

One of his blasts hit Gohan square in the back, causing him to drop the last namekian. The child plumetted towards before being caught by Gohan once more.

Krillin flew alongside the pair as more energy blasts filled the area around them.

"Gohan, cover your eyes!" He yelled, whipping backwards to face Dodoria. "Solar Flare!"

A bright light emerged from Krillin, momentarily blinding Dodoria, but giving the trio enough time to take cover.

Dodoria circled around the rocks, frantically searching for the fighters. He had to bring them back to Lord Frieza to answer for his humiliation.

Growing impatient Dodoria shot into the sky above the valley and stared down.

"Ya know?" Dodoria said. "It's a helluva lot easier to look for corpses."

He fired a large blast directly downwards, seperating the waters below him and leveling the surrounding rocks.

"That should be enough." Dodoria said, descending down to water level. He looked around at the destruction around him and began to realize something. "Geez nothing could've survived that. And I was supposed to bring 'em back." With one final look around, Dodoria took his leave, blasting off for Frieza's ship.


The trio of fighters floated high up in the sky, shocked at the level of destruction he caused.

"We gotta get out of here, Gohan." Krillin said. "Who knows if he'll come back? Or worse, Vegeta finds us."

"Right. Let's head back to Bulma and tell her what we discovered." Gohan said.


Back At The Cave

Bulma was situated in the bath of her pop-up house that she brought along. She was starting to doze off when a familiar voice popped into her head.

"Hey Bulma." Yamcha said. "Long time, no see."

"Yamcha?" Bulma said. "Is that you?"

"Yeah It's me." Yamcha replied. "Listen I don't have much time to talk as King Kai is a busy person, but I wanted to let you know that Goku is on his way to Namek."

"Goku's coming?" Bulma said ecstatically.

"Yep. He left not that long ago." Yamcha confirmed. Bulma heard a loud crash before Yamcha spoke again. "Hey I gotta go. Things are getting a bit crazy here. Catch ya later." With that, the connection and Yamcha was heard no more.


Dodoria was blasting back to Frieza's, keeping his eye out for any stray namekian villages on his way back.

With our scouters gone finding the Dragon Balls is gonna be a pain. Dodoria thought to himself. Luckily this planet isn't all that big.

Before Dodoria could get another thought out, the flat of boot connected with his temple, sending him crashing into the water below.

As he crawled out onto the shore, he noticed someone standing directly in front of him.

"What's a dog like you doing so far from his master, Dodoria?" Vegeta said, staring down at the alien. "Did he send all this way to sniff me out? Or was it something else?"

Dodoria crawled out of the lake and faced down Vegeta, a cold look in his eyes. "Like Lord Frieza would waste his resources looking for an insect like you, Vegeta."

"Oh so it was something else ? That just means there was something very valuable to him that he would send one of his best men." Vegeta said. "And speaking of resources, you appear to be missing something, Dodoria?" He took the scouter off of his ear and held it in front of him. "You can have this if you want it, it won't be doing me any good."

Dodoria was apprehensive at first, but then reached out to take the scouter. Suprisingly, Vegeta gave up the scouter with no trouble and allowed Dodoria to affix it to his ear.

"Why thank you, Vegeta." Dodoria said. "But you know I can't leave you standing. You may just be a bug, but you are a real pain to Lord Frieza."

Before Dodoria was able to react, Vegeta was in front of Dodoria, his fist plowed into the soldiers chest. The force of the punch sent Dodoria flying into the water. When he resurfaced, Vegeta was high above him, a purple glow surrounding his hands.

"GALICK GUN!" Vegeta yelled, a purple beam emerging from his hands, straight into the water below.

The blast hurled Dodoria out of the water onto dry land. He was barely able to move, but managed to try to crawl away. As he reached out to pull himself forward, Vegeta crushed his hand beneath his foot, causing Dodoria to scream in pain.

Vegeta placed his hand in front of him, a large ball of yellow energy beginning to form. "So any last words, mutt?"

"V-Vegeta, wait!" Dodoria pleaded in fear. "I-I can t-tell you what h-happened to your planet."

The ball of energy instantly vanished, leaving Vegeta staring straight at Dodoria. "I'm listening."

"I-It wasn't an asteroid that destroyed it. It was L-Lord Frieza." Dodoria said. "He was scared that you Saiyans might have revolted and overthrown him."

Vegeta stared shockingly at Dodoria, before his face turned to rage. "All this time I was working for a coward! I wasted twenty years of my life to him!" Vegeta charged a final blast and aimed straight for Dodoria. "I'll show him who he truely has to be scared of." He fired of the blast before speeding out of the area, leaving Dodoria to be obliterated in the aftermath.