So I've been coming up with ideas for a pjo ff story inspired by the Hunger Games. Basically in the future most of the world has been reduced to desert and the sky is choked in ash so the sun hasn't been seen in years. There's 12 camps, each corresponding to an Olympian, and Olympus itself. Annabeth's friend is Luke, who talks a lot of rebellion and taking over Olympus. One day she meets Percy, and the two hit it off and get to know each other. Then the camps are all firebombed, and the surviving refugees are hurried off to an emergency camp (Camp Half-Blood) where Luke enlists Annabeth and anyone else he can to organise the revolution.
If I do make that story, I need a beta. If anyone has writing experience on this site and wants to beta read my chapters, that'd be great.
I'm also considering rebranding this story. I just don't like the name very much, and I feel like I could draw in a wider audience if I did something different. A name like "Percy Jackson and the Cliché's Curse".
Anyway, thanks for all the support these past few chapters and earlier chapters. I really appreciate when people review because people telling me I'm amazing is my only motivation to live
Lol im kidding
But please review
Welcome to Highschool:
Annabeth pov:
It was the first day of my new school. I was excited, but at the same time nervous. Overall, I didn't really know what to think. I hoped it wasn't bad.
I got dropped off at the gates and walked in. It was a large brick building. On the front was the sign: HIGHSCHOOL OF LEARNING
Underneath the sign was the school's slogan: WE TAKE YOUR CHILDREN AND ALSO YOUR MONEY
"Annie!" Someone shouted. Annabeth turned around. Walking towards her was a crazy fucking emo kid. She had lip piercings and shit. Her hair was black and spiked like Johnny fucking Depp and her eyes literally flashed with lightning like she was call the might of holy fucking jesus down on your ass. She was Thalia Grace, the grace short for great fucking god.
"Oh my god, Thalia." Annabeth said. "Don't call me that you emo hag."
"It's your first day, Annie!" Thalia said in a very depressed way (She was emo after all). "To celebrate, I got special matching earrings for us."
She took out some blue pentagram earrings out of her pockets.
"Oh my god, Thalia." Annabeth said. "Stop being such a fucking emo Satanist you kid."
Thalia grinned sadly. "It's so convenient that we're starting school together Annie."
"DON'T CALL ME THAT THALIA YOU PSYCHO HAIRED EMO ASS LOOKING BITCH TWAT EMO!" Annabeth yelled.
The bell rang, so it was time go inside. "I hope I don't get too depressed when I see you at lunch." Thalia said to Annabeth in her emo way as she left.
Annabeth went to the office. The office administrator was an annoying-looking woman with really smooth nails. She probably filed them with baby bums.
The annoying woman looked at Annabeth. "The person showing you around the school is coming now."
Annabeth was all like: "Well what if I don't want to be shown around the school?"
The annoying woman put on some annoying makeup and said in her annoying voice: "I will administrate you right into the bin little missy."
Annabeth was intimidated, so she stood back. "Ah," said the annoying woman. "Here she is now."
An Asian girl walked up to Annabeth. She wore so much makeup that it was a surprise her face hadn't drowned her yet. She looked Annabeth up and down and stuck out a hand to shake. Annabeth went to shake it, but then the girl pulled back. "I changed my mind." She said. "I don't have the willpower to touch you, you dumpster fire."
Annabeth stared at her.
The girl stared back and fixed her hair, which had come undone from the stress of having to say those words. "I'm Drew Type, but I love stereos, so you can call me Stereo Type. My friends think I'm a slut. My enemies think that too." She shrugged and fixed her hair some more. "I'm not a slut, I'm just a whore."
Annabeth nodded sagely.
Drew said: "Let me show you around my territory."
"Ok." Said Annabeth.
She took Annabeth down to the cafeteria first. "This is the cafeteria." Drew said, whilst fixing her hair. "These are my friends." She pointed at a group of jocks and cheerleaders who all looked unhappy. "And those are your friends." She pointed at a group of nerds with big glasses, freckles, and buck teeth.
Drew fixed her hair some more. Annabeth saw Thalia, that fucking emo bitchass punk, waving at her.
"And that's Percy Jackson. He's my boyfriend." Drew said, pointing at a really hot guy with black hair and green eyes who was obviously deliberately ignoring Drew.
Annabeth caught her breath when she saw him. She suddenly had a flashback to her childhood…
Annabeth was walking along, enjoying her day. She went to the playground to go on the swings, but there was a boy with black hair and green eyes sitting on them, taking them up. Annabeth was upset because she wanted to go on the swings, so she went up to him and asked: "Could I use the swings please?"…
"…but he didn't hear me." Annabeth finished telling Thalia, who was gasping, hands over her emo mouth. One of the hands had an eye tattooed on it, so it looked like she had a third eye where her mouth should be. Stupid emo.
Annabeth shook her head. "So yeah, ever since that trauma I've hated him and wanted nothing to do with him."
Thalia nodded. "He's my cousin, but I can't believe he would do something like that. I'm considering disowning him now."
Annabeth shrugged. "If I was him, I would."
Luke Castellan, Annabeth's boyfriend, approached the table. "Hey Annabeth." He said. "Hey Ebony." He said to Thalia.
"My name's not Ebony." Thalia said in a depressed way.
"Right." Said Luke. He looked at Annabeth, ignoring Thalia. "Hey baby. Isn't that Percy Jackson guy such a shitty person that no one likes? I'm so much better than him."
"Oooh yeah, Luke." Annabeth said. "I love you so much."
Luke grinned and said. "Wow, I'm awesome."
Annabeth just smiled at him dreamily. Thalia did the same.
"Fuck off Ebony." Luke said.
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Annabeth was at home. She was crying and she had a razor in her hands because the truth was she was actually really depressed and suicidal. She slit her wrists sometimes, but she didn't get scars because it would be bad if her parents found out. Or her friends.
Then Annabeth went to bed. As she was in bed she texted Thalia.
(Annabeth = italics. Thalia = Bold)
hae gerl how r u
o rly g00d u 1nt3rrupt m3 dur1ng mie s4t4nist rich yul
o sry anywae u no dat percy kid
y3p
well I was finking hees kind a coot so mabe who knows what happen?!
Wut
Anyway am verily tired so tomrrow will sea at school night emo punkass bitch
Nite
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Annabeth was at school. She got to her locker and found that the next locker over belonged to none other than…
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Percy Jackson!
Annabeth dropped her books. Percy immediately helped her get them. Their eyes locked for a second too long, and Annabeth got all flustered. After he helped her get her books, she was like: "You sicko, I don't need help! Go back to your swingset you douche!" She ran to class.
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Percy POV:
The minute I saw her my heart stopped.
I fell over dead.
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No that's not what really happened.
I felt like she was the most beautiful girl I'd ever seen. She had long blonde hair and stormy grey eyes like storms that were very stormy. She looked like a California girl, but I didn't for one second think she looked like a dumb blonde. She looked SMART and EMPOWERED and if she wanted she could KICK MY ASS!
I just knew I had to get to know her more…
But where do I start?
Ok so that's the end of part 1 of the high school chapters yes this is a two-parter (maybe three but unlikely).
As said before in the first AN I would really appreciate if you reviewed. Reviews are my motivation to continue writing this story, so readers or people who like this and want to see more, please review in order to keep the story going. Thanks.