So... Hi, I'm new here, nice to meet you all. From reasons that i don't understand myself i decided that i need even more things to distract me from studying for my school, so i started to write this fanfic. The two major problems are that i don't know how to write and is not my native language so i'm not very good at writing in it. Maybe the second one is for the better, thanks to not knowing language i'm writing in i don't see the massive mistakes that i made. Any Noodle here is my ff of what if? in world which Revan did not lose his fight with Emperor Vitiate and instead he traveled in time to circa about year in which Revenge of the Sith takes place.
I hope someone will enjoy my terrible story. An if by any chance you are this person please leave a review and tell me what to improve. I will be very grateful and without further ado here is first chapter of my story.
The Emperor stretched his hands up gathering the fury of the Dark Side to unleash it on Revan. Reformed Sith quickly calculated his options, he was not able to close the gap between him and Emperor fast enough to intercept the attack.
At first Revan decided to try and catch the lightning as he did before with Nyrus but in last moment he realised that Emperor was far too powerful for him to even stood a chance against him in force fight.
In glimpse of a second Revan reached with his mind attacking the sole core of Emperor's being trying to destroy his consciousness and stop him from obliterating now being Jedi.
The moment his consciousness touched Emperor's he heard screams of haundreads, no thousands of voice crying in agony reaching to him, trying to destroy Revan, tearing him apart. He tried to fight them of but there was just to many of them. He felt as his being is getting teared apart, but then one soul busted others away and started whispering to Jedi.
Revan heard this language before, it was an ancient Sith dialekt and what the voice was saying sounded like one of the Sith rituals that Revan used in his times as the Dark Lord of The Sith. But this one was different, words seemed random and the whole intancation was not making any sense. Before Revan was able to investigate this he was pushed out of Emperor mind.
He came back to his body and momentarily lost his balance to how intense the feeling was. The Emperor seemed to be in shock as well, grabbing onto his throne to keep balance. With anger on his face Sith started gathering power once more but this time Revan knew what to do. He screamed to his companions "Meetra, Scourge come here" and he stared recite the weird spell, although he did not knew what was the purpose of this ritual he could feel the will to help from the voice that taught him the spell.
The dozen of bolts springed from the hands of Emperor but they all were blocked by invisible shield that protected Revan and his companions from getting burned alive. Meetra grabbed Revan by his shoulder, so did Scourge, both channeling the Force through Revan reinforcing the effect of spell. As Revan ended casting ritual, pillar of light appeared from above them, crushing ceiling of Citadel filling throne room in blinding light.
Revan felt as he was falling into a never ending void, blinded by this unnatural bright light. After what felt to be eternity, everything went dark and Revan was able to notice that he is lying on stone floor. After that his body was not able to keep him conscious anymore and he passed out from exhaustion.