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Inspiration: Skyrim Cops
((That's all! Story START!))
"So im glad your all enjoying the first universe but for now well stick to it, as to not… I suppose cock block you" He says with a small snerk getting an eyeroll from Weiss and some of the more mature members of the audience while the others snicker.
"So were still gonna watch Juane?" Ruby asks with a smile as she was turned on the seat and looking at their current host. Some of them were still weary of the character but the others decided to go with the flow they suppose. Not much they can do.
"Yep… though this time hes… well hes law inforcement. Hes a Guard for the various holds and is called on disturbances much like your own police force does."
"So hes a cop then…" Mercury asks with a groan. Hes had his own run ins with law enforcement and they were never usually good.
"Still a noble profession. Keep the peace" Ozpin says as he sets his mug down. Some had wondered where he even got the thing but they pushed it to the back of their minds at the moment as they wanted to see their friend as a cop.
"Yep… without further ado… lets get started" he says as he bangs the projector. When it didn't start, he bangs it again. To no avail. He stands and walks to a door he conjures before coming back with a Warhammer and hits it with it as it starts. "Need to get a new one" He says taking it back to the armory and sitting down as it sarts.
(-Skyrim Cops Opening-)
Attack in Progress
Middas, 2:30, 7th Day of Hearthfire
"Okay weve got some kind of domestic disturbance insidance here." Jaune says running in, dagger drawn towards a man who seemed to be firing arrows at a man. "Woah Woah Woah stop right there, put down the bow sir." He says making no motion to step closer yet as he held the dagger in hand, the elf firing another arrow into the man. "Drop the bow or ill be forced to stab"
"Its nice to see Jaune taking charge of the situation even if it is through the threat of violence" Ren says watching how he handled himself as a police officer, his hand stroking his chin in thought.
"Home invasion it looks like… I could be wrong" Blake says leaning back, having seen many crimes taken place and this certainly smelled like a home invasion.
"Im not even going to ask how you know this Blake because I already have an inkling" Weiss says giving the girl a raised eyebrow.
"Shes obviously not going to incriminate herself Schnee" Mercury says waving his hand nonchalantly.
Another arrow goes into the man with the rags from the Elf. "Okay let me just" He says putting the bow on his back and turns to face the guard.
"Well he listened at least" Ruby says smiling that Jaune was a protector of the peace and defender of the helpless.
"What are you thinking partner, when an Imperial Guard tells you to put down the bow, that's what you do" Jaune says keeping his dagger drawn. "And you on the floor, Shuddup"
Ruby Deflated almost at his words but kept her head held up high in hopes that hell stell be a good guard. Maybe he was just having an off day.
"Well this Jaune is much more… demanding then our current one." Yang says noting how he held himself with confidence, getting a resigned Hey from said blond in the room.
"Well he Is a guard… he has to be" Pyrrha says getting a nod from JNPR.
"I'm Sorry, I was just wanted to make sure- I didn't want him to attack me." The Elf admits fully calm now.
"Nooow where getting somewhere" Jaune says as he peeks over at the man who just looked like a porcupine with so many arrows.
"What in the world did he do? Steal an heirloom? Only about four or five arrows should have done the trick?!" Ruby says at the complete overkill that the elf showed to what she assumed was a burgler, or perhaps a murder.
"He was climbing through my back window" The elf says as he tries to explain his side of the story.
"So it was a home invasion" Blake says with a small smirk, finding some satisfaction in knowing she was right.
"Blake, I like you, but that doesn't mean I approve of your more… criminal activities" Weiss says as Blake gave her a sheepish look in return. She was still somewhat ashamed of her past and how much crime she knew.
"Okay let me ask you a question. This isn't a relative, co-worker, casual Acquaintance or village idiot?"
"Fair question to ask if your investigating. It could pe a despute or the like" Ren says, getting a nod from Glynda and Ozpin, who were watching at the moment with intrigued looks.
"Village idiot" Emerald says looking at Mercury who at the moment wanted to throttle the mint haired girl before a glare from Cinder kept him down.
"I've never seen him before in my life and here he comes climbing through my window and into my house" He says easily as Jaune nods at this, Dagger still drawn through it all. "And put a couple arrows in him"
"A Couple Arrows?" Jaune asks with a raised eyebrow noting how many arrows were actually in the man before his own version came along.
"A couple arrows?"
This got a snicker from some of those in the audience that had just watched an echo appear. "Hey two minds think alike" Yang says with a snicker before they got back to the show.
"Uh huh. Two or Three yes sir"
"That is way more then two or three" Weiss says with a huff as she crosses her arms.
"I'm willing to bet you shot this man with almost every arrow you had in the house am I right?" He says as the man on the ground kept groaning from the pain and blood lose. "And you on the ground, shut your mouth"
"Why aren't you helping him!" Ruby asks raising her hands as she watches.
"Actually, with that many arrows embedded in the intruders back, its more then likely hell die long before he could remove all the arrows." Ozpin says getting a nod from Cinder, she knew what the human limits was, and with that many arrows, hed bleed out really quickly.
"I mean… he could at least try" Ruby says with a soft murmur.
"yes sir, then I shot him with a dozen more I borrowed from Emerald across the road."
Everyone looks at Emerald at this who was watching before looking at the others when she noticed them string. "…What?" She asks trying to shy away from the stares before they looked back at the screen.
"Uh huh, good thinking. I'm gonna have to take you in"
"WHAT FOR?!"
"Involuntary Manslaughter"
"Well that was fairly inevitable. He may be defending his home but that was excessive and well… burglary doesn't quite carry the same weight as outright murder." Glynda says pushing up her glasses as she watched with intrigued interest.
Maybe she can get their own Jaune to have this same kind of confidence and demanding.
"IT WASN'T INVOLUNTARY"
"Dude Shut up! Your just digging your own hole" Roman says raising his hands in exhasperation. He had seen how often people tend to end up in trouble simply because they simply couldn't keep their mouths shut, and now was one of those times.
'Moron' Neo says holding up a sign. This got a nod from the other members of team CRME.
"Alright then Murder, Murder one"
"Can we go back to the other one?"
"Um… didn't you just admit to killing someone in cold blood simply because he broke into your home." Blake says as she watches the man dig himself into an even digger hole as he kept talking.
"Let me check the manual. No, No we can not"
"Well… its nice to see that this Jaune can be a somewhat competent police officer." Ruby says with asmile as she got a nod from some of the other team members.
"Yeah! though I think he should've attempted to attempt to help the poor guy" Nora says as she leans bsck in the theatre chair.
"And leave the man alone to do whatever he pleased while helping?" Weiss asks with a raised eyebrow, which got a nod from the others. She indeed had a pont.
(-000-)
Immigration Checkpoint
Fridas, 9:30, 4th Day of Hearthfire
The scene opens up with two guards standing infront of a skeleton. "I believe my papers are in order" The skeleton says handing over the papers to the guard. The guard began to look over the papers as he chuckles.
"WOAH" Says some of the younger members of the veiwers. That was a walking skeleton. Sure they had skeletal grimm but they had some more structure then a simple walking skeleton.
"How is he alive?!" Jaune asks recoiling.
"How Is he Talking?!" Emerald says also creeped out by the skeleton.
"That's a common thing in this world. Necromancy falls under the school of summoning. And No I will not teach you Necromancy, the Dead should stay Buried." Raphael says as he watches with a snicker.
"This guys a nord" says Sun as he continues to flip through the papers
"Wait what? He was a Nord?" Yang asks squinting at the screen as if trying to see it, but she couldn't. all she could see was the skeleton.
"Hey doesn't that sound like Sun?" Asks Ruby, getting a nod from Blake.
"He always was against the white fang" She says with a small smile, remembering the Imperials who were fighting against the Fang.
"You mean he used to be a nord" Says the second guard, Neptune as he looks at the skeleton who listens to the banter without care, hes heard it all before.
"Hey its Neptune too!" Weiss says with a smile as well as she got a snicker from Yang.
"No" Sun says casually flipping through the pages.
"Hes not a skeleton?" Neptune asks as he looks over at the pages that his partner was holding.
"No" Sun confirms as he looks over everything, Date and place of birth and the like.
"So hes still considered a nord then? That's so strange, you thinh that theyd have changed his race to skeleton, but at the same time I can see why, hold onto something that resembles your humanity" Ren says getting a nod from Ozpin.
"It keeps you surprisingly grounded, to keep in mind what makes yourself, yourself" Ozpin says knowing the feeling of almost loosing yourself.
"How long you been using Walters?" Asks Neptune already knowing what it was. Magic Potions that deteriorated the body but kept him alive.
"Woah so those potions healed him but it deteriorartes your body in the long term… talk about a double edged sword" Ruby says, rubbing her neck slightly as she watches on.
"Three Years" says the now named Walter before he began to cough his non existent lungs out. Coughing more until he recovers with a soft groan.
"How is he coughing without lungs…?" Pyrrha asks who got a shrug from everyone else, they didn't know either, and were in no way wanting to find out.
"Its taking a toll on you my brother" Sun says handing the papers back as he groans, taking them back.
"Yeah tell me about it" Walters says climbing back into his carriage.
(-000-)
"So Jaune, Sun and Neptune are cops in all this…" Blake says with a smile, she could see the parallels. They always doing the right thing.
"Well its nice to see people will always try to keep the peace, no matter what universe their in" Glynda says with a smile as she hums.
"Their still hopeless dorks" Yang says with a cheesy little grin.
"Ohhh big time" Agreed RWBY and JNPR besides Jaune who let out an indignant Hey!.
"Alright… well do three more before an intermission." Raphael says smacking the projector again"
Cool! Chapter two is out! What do yall think? Good? Bad? Let me know in reviews! Tell me how im doing reactions wise and if im staying true to character.
-Preview-
"The Covenant have found Earth. They owned New Mombasa. Anyone that could have driven them off are dead or gone. I'd Say that makes for desperate times. Me and my team?" Ruby turns to the camera and smiles.
"Guess were the desperate measures" She says flashing the visor to Opaque before turning to follow her squad.