Episode 1: part 2.
Luis was walking through the debris of the crash plane. He looked and saw spider-man pass out on the ground. He runs up to him realizing his mask was off. He flips him over in shock.
Luis: PETER!
1 week earlier...
Luis: what do you mean you're busy?! Peter, you tell me that every time I call you!
Peter: I'm sorry, it's my intern job! Mister stark said he needed me today! In fact I'm running there now!
Luis: Peter, the last time you came to Keystone was 3 months ago! 3 months!
What happened to monthly visits?!
Peter: you don't understand! I'm trying to make Mister Stark proud! That's why I been so busy! To show I'm a hardworking person!
Luis:...fine. Just make sure we can hang out next month. Also, you really ask him to pay you the way you're doing it!
Peter: okaygottagobye! *beep*
It's been like this for 2 months. Ever since Tony Stark asked Peter to be his intern, he's being reclusive. We'd use to talked through FaceTime but he hasn't been able to do it lately. Ned told me he quit robotics. My friend Peter Parker the TECH GEEK quit robotics! I don't know what goes at the job. But I don't like it...
6 days and 1 hour later...
a ferry got cut in half. Spider-man was there along with Tony Stark. But after that he was gone. Luis was kinda surprised. Heroes shouldn't just leave. Unless Stark did something. He couldn't focus on that now, he sitting on the tallest building in Keystone city. Looking around for anything crime to be stopped. He was still trying to get the hang of his powers. But, there always a problem. He was about to go home and sleep when...
[Look up...]
He looks up in the sky and sees sparks flying from a plane and Spider-Man...face is...on it? He quickly speeds to the nearest hardware store and borrowed a pair of binoculars. He finally see Spider-Man fighting a man with wings. He sees it soaring over New York, disappearing from his sight. He hears a slight boom.
[Follow...]
He speeds outta keystone, racing towards the bellowing smoke. He prepared for whatever in the crash. Walking through the debris of the crash plane. He looked and saw spider-man pass out on the ground. He runs up to him realizing his mask was off. He flips him over in shock.
Luis: PETER!
He presses his head against his chest, hearing a heartbeat.
Luis: oh thank god. Pete! Buddy! Wake up!
His eyes slowly open, his shock was seeing his friend somehow here, when he lives 20 miles away. He looks down and sees some sort of suit.
Peter: h-
Luis: we'll talk about that later. We need to get you to a hospital!
Peter: no I'm okay, I'm just really really sore...I'm a fast healer.
Luis: are you sure? I mean you just survived a plane crash!
Peter: please just help me home.
Luis: alright, but I swear if you passed out on me. Straight to the ER!
It's stung when Peter tried to laugh. Luis pulls him up and he grabs him to make sure he doesn't fall. They walked away from the crash site.
Peter: Ned knows.
Luis instantly turns his head at Peter who has a nervous smile.
—
Luis and Peter talked the next day. Peter explains everything that happened in the last 2 months. The bank, the elevator in DC, the ferry and the plane. He was amazing by all of this.
Peter:...at least I managed to stop toomes.
Luis: so what happened to Ned?
Peter: I think he got in trouble. Before I hung up I heard him tell someone he was...looking at porn...
Luis:...you owe him big time...
Peter: how fast can you go?! I told you about me plus you been on the news as long as I been.
Luis: take a selfie of you.
Peter takes a photo of himself, Luis points at the picture which shows in the photo he was behind Peter holding a "this fast" sign.
Luis: I know it's cool. But, we're getting off task here. Listen I'm pretty sure Iron man gonna want to talk to you. All I'm saying is I want to confuse the hell out of him! After you guys talk...
—-
Peter was shocked at the deal Tony Stark was giving him. He was honored, but that's not why he became Spider-Man. He's Spider-Man because he help people who aren't able to defend themselves.
Peter: Thank you Mr. Stark...but I'm good.
Tony was surprised by this, he didn't expect those words coming out of him. He was hoping that he would say yes.
Tony: I'm sorry? You're good? What do you mean you're good?
Peter: I-I mean I rather just stay on the ground for awhile... friendly neighborhood Spider-Man. Somebody has to look out for the little guy.
Tony: you're turning me down? I mean you think about this, look at that...look at me... last chance, yes or no?
Peter: No.
Tony was felt a little proud of Peter's answer but a little disappointed that he wouldn't he join them on the team. He looks at the suit he made for Peter and looks back at him.
Tony: okay. It's kinda of a Springsteen I'll work class hero by better day. Uh Happy will take you home.
He presses a button cause the suit to go down and sealing wall. Peter turns around curiously.
Peter: that was test, right? There's nobody back there?
Tony: yes, you've passed! Skedaddle there.
Peter: okay bye mr. stark. See ya, happy. My ride almost here.
Happy/Tony: what?
Peter: just like you Mr. Stark I know people. It's been an honor, I hope we can talk again.
Luis zooms in the room which surprises Tony and Happy. He shakes hand with Peter and zooms him out of the building, leaving tony in curiosity. Pepper walks in the room.
"Where's the kid?!"
—-
Hi! Luis again! Can you believe it?! My friend is fricking Spider-Man! I decided to tell Ned since he knows Peter's secrets. It's nice to know that I ain't the only one with powers. But that's the problem...
I'm not the only one...
Luis was at Peter's apartment, May left to get groceries. The two were currently building a lego set courtesy of Tony Stark.
Luis: So you turned down his offer on becoming an avenger. Now he wants to come over on the weekends.
Peter: well yeah, he wants me to be an actual intern. I get to help him around the compound, I don't know I think he wants me to be his assistant mostly.
At least now I can go back the way my life was before the trip to Germany.
Luis: yeah you showed me that on your camera. How did you think that was a closet?
Peter: I-I just assume-
Luis: you didn't even look to check if it was!
Peter: but at least I got to see it once I got my suit on. I still can't believe I took captain America's shield! Oh my god...he knows spider-man from queens.
Luis: Pete, you're acting like he gonna go door to door to find you.
Peter's phone rings he looked at the contact photo was Ned. Answering the phone.
Peter: Hey Ned what's up?
Ned: dude! Turn on the news you got to see this!
He grabs the remote and switch the tv on, seeing a man flying and glowing attacking Oscorp. Police were running frantically away. The 2 boys quickly try and I mean try to put on the their suits, while going out the window. Luis grabs Peter and zoomed towards Oscorp. They see the electrifying man destroy parts of the building.
Man of electricity: look at what you done to me Oscorp! You did this to me!
Another bolt struck the building, Peter and Luis dodge the falling concrete.
Luis: I just realized. How in the hell are we gonna fight that thing?!
Peter: umm...just distracted him so he doesn't destroy the rest of the building.
Luis:...great plan...
He speeds up the building. Karen, Peter's A.I comes to life unaware of the situation that is happening.
Karen: Hello Peter.
Peter: Hey Karen! I need help right now! See that man of electricity?!
Karen: I see everything you see.
Peter: I know! But I really need to figure out what to do. My friend is in trouble!
Karen: unknown resolved situation.
Peter jumps down on the street and grabs a sewer grate. Swinging it around and launches towards the man, effectively causing him to crash down. But a bust of lightning flashes. The man disappeared. Peter leaves the scene, Luis follows. They're both in a alleyway.
Luis: what was that?! We just tried to fight a man who was like thor!
Peter: I have no idea who that was!
Karen: Maxwell Dillion.
Luis jumps from the voice.
Luis: what was that?!
Peter: this is Karen, my suit's computer. Mr. stark put a lot of tech in here.
Luis's phone started ringing. His face had nervous on it.
Luis: hi mom! No I'm at Dante's shop! ¡Pues María es mentirosa! ven a recogerme para que pueda probar que estoy aquí. Oh? Okay...
My mom coming to pick me up at Dante's. I gotta go, will talk later!
Luis speeds out of New York and back into Keystone. Switching back to his normal clothes he stands in front of Dante's store. His mother pulls up.
Luis's mom: Hola hijo, ¿por qué estás sin aliento?
Luis: I just ran down to corner store to get some skittles.
Short explanation, my hero identity is a secret, in case you haven't realized.
Only Dante, I mean come on! He made the suit. So when I'm out fighting bad guys. My family thinks I'm at Dante's make sure it's nice and neat.
Not a bad excuse. After I was done dealing with mom. Peter was trying to figure out who Maxwell Dillion was...
Peter and Ned were in the school cafeteria the next day explaining the events from the previous day. Ned was surprised by the news Luis has powers.
Ned: how come I'm the only one who didn't get powers? Can I at least get a cool name?
Peter: Ned, that's not even what I'm talking about! By the way, cyber would be a great name. Actually, I need my guy in the chair again. Can you look up this name for me?
He hands Ned a piece of paper. He has starry eyes from the excitement. He like helping Peter's partner in justice. He began searching, Later around 8 o'clock , they meet back at Peter's.
Luis: Okay, explains to me, why it was okay you told him who I am? No offense Ned.
Ned: I'm good, also I found that guy you were looking at. Maxwell Dillion use to work at Oscorp. What's even crazier he was the tour guide when we went on the field trip.
Peter: oh yeah! But what happened to him?
Ned: I don't know it was on the news. But they just said a incident happened.
Luis: got a address?
Ned: 1250 3rd Ave...oh my gosh I sound like I been doing this years! This is exciting, like that time we hacked your suit!
They thanked Ned for the help and starts to heading out the door when May stood in front of the door surprising them. She was suspicious, ever since she found out peter was Spider-Man ( who tried to lie and say it was a well made costume for Halloween. Even though it's March) she worries for him, cause already knows that she won't be able to stop him. Only just to be safe.
May: so where you boys going? Luis, don't you live across the bridge?
Peter: uh...Luis and Ned were headed home! Me and Ned were going to walk him to the bus stop! Don't worry Aunt may."Nothing is gonna happen."
May:...Okay. Be carful please.
They quickly dashed out the door, Luis grabs them and speeded towards the address. Once arriving Ned rushes over to a trash "get rid of his lunch".
Ned: So cool.
Luis: so how we doing this? I mean I never fought a fricking guy who generates electricity!
Peter: um...Ned you stay here and we will be back. Uh...you and me, we'll go check if he's there.
Luis: what are we supposed to say? Hey Mr. Dillion, you're in trouble so you're coming with 2 teenagers?
Peter: don't have to say it like that...
They headed up to the apartment questioning themselves. Why are they suddenly going after someone so powerful? Luis only catches petty crimes like carjacking or drugstore. It's seems like this week just gave them a whole 180 on them. They reach the apartment, but the door was already busted in.
Peter: Hello?!
Luis: pizza delivery!
Peter:...
[Go in carefully...]
They slowly walked in, empty and torn up the apartment was. It was cleaned out anyone who lived here was long gone. They looked around and to find any evidence that he was here, Luis finds it in the bedroom.
Luis: uh..Peter? I think he was just here...
He peeks inside the room and sees scorch marks everywhere. Still fresh that you can smell the burns. They were about to leave when sparks started appearing in the air.
[Run...]
Luis pushes Peter out of the way, only for him to get blasted by lightning sending him towards the wall. He sees the man, he was glowing blue and slightly transparent.
Luis: max?...
He just stares at Luis, Peter was in defense mode. Luis gets of the ground.
Luis: I'm Velocity and that's Spider-Man. We're not here to fight.
Peter: we just want to talk.
Maxwell: I don't want to talk, I want you out of my apartment!
Luis: we just want to help!
Maxwell: Help? Help! Osborn said he was helping me! But I was just his guinea pig!
He sends another shock blast launching them through the wall. Recovering from the blast. They looked up and see him hovering over them. They quickly run away with him following.
Peter: great plan! I'm being sarcastic!
Luis: Like you fought anyone this powerful! I would just quickly tied them up!
They run into a alleyway, quickly climbing the fire escape. As they were running across rooftops. Karen came to life with her sensors beeping.
Karen: Peter I'm detecting your heartbeat rising, reporting to Mr. Stark.
Peter: Nonono! Crap we have to deal with this quickly!
Luis: throw another sewer grate at him!
Peter looks around and see a door leading towards the rooftop. He runs and uses his super strength to tear it off. Tossing towards Maxwell, who incinerated into ashes. Luis in fear runs in circles at superspeed.
Peter: what are you doing?!
Luis: I'm trying to make tornado!
Peter: you need more space!
Maxwell strikes a bolt at Luis, causing him to trip, which he tried to break his fall his arm swung and lightning flew off his arm, striking Maxwell causing him the crash and knocked unconscious.
Peter: holy shit!
Luis was shocked he was never able to do that before. He hears sirens and they looked and see the damage they caused. There was a hole in the wall on the building, scorch marks everywhere.
Ned: psst guys! Down here!
They see Ned who's hiding on the side of a staircase.
Ned: we have to get out of here! Please bring me home right now.
Luis: ok give us a sec.
They grab Maxwell and Peter webs him to the side of the trash can. Luis quickly zoomed it by the police and grabs Peter and Ned bringing them straight home.
He returns home back in keystone. He checks the time it was 9:32Pm.
It hard sneaking in late. I just sneaked through the basement and put my suit under the dryer. No looks under there. Everything good I go to my room a-
Luis who just shut the door to the basement, see his mother, grandparents and 2 sisters sitting in the living room. He sits down and the family goes to the other room. Leaving her and Luis to talk.
?: Luis!
Shit...excuse this whole conversation in Spanish, so translating to English.
Luis: (I was just in the basement washing clothes!)
Raquel: (no you weren't cause I was just down there! You can't lie to me!)
Luis: (Okay! So I was a little late than normal! I went to Peter's!)
Raquel: (He lives 20 miles from here! Why were you in queens?!)
Luis: (cause my friends are there!)
It went silent. Raquel knew her son had trouble living in keystone. The teachers said he was quiet and recluse. But lately he's been happy and coming late.
She moved her family out queens so they can be safe after the alien invasion.
They didn't get far. but with the money she had, she bought a house that her kids and parents live in. The girls fit right in. Except Luis. She been doing everything she can to make sure they can live happily.
Raquel: look..we'll talk more tomorrow. You just go and relax in your room.
Luis looks at her and slowly walks upstairs.
Raquel: what am I going to do with him?
Grandfather: Cariño, solo tienes que darle tiempo.
Raquel: I know dad. But he had lot of time...
Luis was in his room and got on his laptop. There was 2 messages from Peter and Ned.
Guys look they already posted stuff about u! -Ned
So-called heroes cause the mess! -The Daily Bugle
$20,000 in property damage in Queens! -New York Tribune
No one said being hero doesn't mean no consequences. Wow just realizing how much damage we did, I know this sounds bad. But thank god they don't know who did it. I wonder what peter wants?
Hey V, Karen my the talking computer. She may have told Mr. Stark about what happened...she can also record what I'm doing.
Long story short...
He need to meet us...
Tomorrow...
-Pete
Uh oh.