BTW when a character is thinking in their head will be this: Example.
Episode 1 (Final part)
You know how crazy this is for me? Literally just a week I found my best friend Peter was spider-man. Wow I keep saying that! Then a guy with weird like me! Now I'm meeting Iron man?!
*sad sigh*
What a week...
The school bell ring, Luis leaves and heads over to Peter's. He had his suit on, so he climbed up the fire escape. Peter was waiting for him.
Luis: Peter we need to talk about yesterday! That new ability I have! I'm like Thor!
Once in, he sees Peter sitting on the bed. Tony Stark standing by the door. Luis was about to go out the window. But peter pulled him back in. They started whispering to each other.
Luis: *whispering* why didn't you tell me he was here?!
Peter: *whispering* I'm sorry, you wouldn't come if I told you he was here! I mean he is kinda mad about what happened.
Luis: *whispering* what happened is between you and me! He has no reason to talk to us.
Peter: *whispering* but my suit records everything. So he can see everything.
Tony: excuse me, You kids done yet?
Luis: you can wait another second!
Tony was kinda surprised by Luis's tone of voice. When Peter first met him, he was excited. Luis was the exact opposite. Once they finish talking, Luis grudgingly shook his hand.
Tony: ok first off, what were you 2 thinking?! Peter, didn't we just talked about don't go after things you can't handle!
Peter: ok it might've been a little bit of a bad idea...but me and Velocity had it handled.
Tony: handled? You had it handled? Does this look handle?
He flips up a 3D hologram of the street block of where they were fighting Maxwell. There was all kind of damage. Broken cars, cracked street and nearby buildings had blast marks.
Tony: People could've got hurt. You two are lucky that nobody was around.
They both looked down in guilt. They were so busy fighting they didn't know the damage they had caused.
Okay, I guess I didn't think this through maybe I sorta jumped into this?
Who am I kidding, I dragged peter in something I didn't know how to handle.
Tony: so are you gonna take the mask?
Luis: *loud sarcastic laugh* sure! Not! You can tell the world who you are, but I'm not showing you who I am.
Tony: I already know who you are. I just wanted to see if you were willing to take it off.
Luis slowly peels the mask off, revealing his angry face at tony. He threw the mask down and slumped onto the bed. They sat there in silence. Luis felt worried, he spent months keeping his identity from family. Thinking of worse case scenarios.
Tony: you need to stop going after the big bad. Peter, you barely handle it last time!
Luis: now hold up just a minut-
Peter: nonono. let him finish.
Tony: I told you not to go after toomes. I told to stay being your friendly neighborhood hero. But you didn't listen! Instead you had a alien bomb watch almost killed your friends in that elevator. A ferry got broke in half! You had alien tech and you didn't knew how it work!
Peter couldn't stand it anymore. He may admire tony stark. But even he can have his limits. He stood up with anger written all over his face.
Peter: wait, how? How's it my fault?
Tony: what are you talking about?
Peter: if you have actually told me something was actually getting done, I wouldn't have done anything! You left me in the dark! You could've said " hey underoos, you have to worry about it!the FBI handle it!".
Tony started to feel some regrets. True, he could've told Parker that it was being taken care of care. Looking back, he could see why he thought he wasn't.
Peter: from my perspective, it looked like you didn't give a damn!
Luis: we had to do something because your flying tuxedo wasn't around!
Tony stare at them with irritation, but quickly dissolves. He squeezes his hands together. He took a deep breath.
Tony: you know what? Fine.
Luis/Peter: what?
Tony: if you guys think you know what you doing I ain't gonna stop you. All I been doing is try to protect you! It may not seem like it but I'm trying! You, speedy Gonzales! you just found out he was spider-boy. Suddenly, you think you take on some big bad?! But you what? go on right ahead. I'm done.
He turns to leave, but looks back. Not facing Peter.
Tony: you two are on your own.
He walks out the door. The boys felt proud of themselves, but then the words sank into the their brains. Next, they felt questionable about the events that happened. Luis looked at Peter, between the both of them he was having the most guilt. An idea pops in his head.
Luis: ...want to go to Stan's?
—-
Maxwell was strapped down in a containment unit, using a rubber insulator to keeping his powers under control. He was in a dark room, SHIELD agent were outside the door waiting for transfer to the Raft. Anger by he got stop by 2 preteens. It's all Oscorp's fault and it's workers. people always walking all over him, treating him like shit, before the accident he was the nervous and quiet type. people walk all over him. After the accident, he woke up to the face of Norman.
?:I know that look. Feeling betrayed by someone you used to respect?
Maxwell: what the hell?! Who the-
?: Sh. You don't want them to hear you. I know what you want.
Maxwell: how could you possibly know what I want?
?: Osborn.
Max's breathing got heavier. Hearing the name he just wanted the whole city to burn. The voice began to chuckle. Suddenly, he hears a tiny steps like sand falling against metal.
?: I can help you Maxwell, cause we both have the same objective. I can get you out, But I need some you to take care of one thing.
Max: what do I have to do?
He see roaches crawling out the vent, but on closer look he realized they weren't even organic. The mechanical insect projected an image on the wall.
?: Find him, then I'll tell you the rest.
The unit clicked and beeped and slowly open. Maxwell looked down at his hands which were charging with volts. The agents didn't have a chance to stop him. As debris flew everywhere the image was still there.
The image was Velocity.
—
Stan's Bazaar was a average diner owned by Stan Lee, who had known peter and Luis ever since they were younger. The place had a classic style, but with a modern touch. It was known for delicious meal and homemade soda drinks.
He noticed when they came in and slumped into a booth. He walks up to them.
Stan: what's your taste buds aching for?
Luis: *sighs* just 2 Root beers in the mugs please.
He went back to get them. Luis let the words sink in that tony said. Why the sudden change in routine? How did he suddenly switch from petty crime, ranking from purse snatch to major robbery! Now him and peter thought they could take on super villain.
Luis: why did we do it?
Peter looks up from the table. With a look that say "why wouldn't we do it?".
Stan arrived back with the drinks. He couldn't but noticed the sad looks presented on them.
Stan: what's the matter with you kids? You two usually goes go nuts over these drinks. Something wrong with them?
Luis: they're fine, it's been not a great couple of days.
Peter: I think "terrible" would be a better word.
Stan: tell this old man what's troubling you two?
Luis and Peter try their best to explain the situation. Which was hard since the it had to do with super villains, powers and a millionaire. Long story short.
Stan: ...your cousin think you boys aren't able to handle the store yourselves.
But the truth is you really can't. But you want prove it.
Luis: but he gave up on trying.
Peter: we got ourselves into something that we couldn't even do.
Stan: now don't say that, everyone has a little trouble at first.
Luis: yeah but it just gets worse from there. I mean what's the point in doing it if you're not trusted. I mean we tried, sure a few things got "damaged". but there was nothing we could've done about it.
Stan: you kids have to be patient. Yes, there will be mistakes along the way. Eventually they'll understand you can't control everything. But you'll be able to learn from it. Then there will be trust.
They never thought it like that. Luis and Peter looked at each other knew they were both thinking the same thing. In order for there to trust, there have to show responsibility.
Peter: wow Stan, I guess we never thought of it like that.
Stan: when you live as long as I have, you learn a few thi-.
He turns his head away from them.
Stan: I see you Joe! You still owe me!
He walks away while the teens started laughing. They felt much better after hear from a different perspective. Luis down at his cup. Pondering to himself.
Luis: how come?
Peter: how come what?
Luis: why did one event change us? We tried to take on bad guys that could kill us! Why would we do that?
Peter: I think we both know why.
Luis: what are you saying?
Peter held his breath think of the right words,Then it hit him.
Peter: I can't be your friendly neighborhood spider man if there's no neighborhood. You can't be a protector-
Luis: if there's no one to protected.
Peter: We're protecting the people we care about: May, your mom, Ned and your sisters. They're not the only ones, there's like a thousand people to protect. And we got the chance to do something about it.
Luis couldn't argue there. Peter was right, it couldn't be help taking on bad guys.
Luis: it's like some sorta power instinct. But what about tony?
Peter: Mr. Stark? He's awesome! He gave me the suit, gave me Karen and met the rest of the Avengers (even if I did have to fight them.) why?
Luis: I mean can you really trust him?
Peter: what does that mean?
Luis: I'm just saying I don't trust him bec-
Suddenly the lights went out. In fact, looking out the window the entire street was in blackout. People check their phone, only for them to be dead. Peter pulls his mask out.
Peter: Karen, what's happening?
Karen?
?: I know you're here! I can sense you speedster! You're powers have volts coursing through your veins.
The 2 quick hid under the table. They could see sparks of light coming from the window. Maxwell was outside sucking the energy out of everything. Luis grabs Peter's shirt in fear!
Luis: *whispering* What the hell?! I Thought he was in jail?!
Peter: *whisper* calm down! We took him on before! Just throw lightning at him!
Luis: it was one time! I don't even know how to activate it!
Since it was dark they were able to change into suit, just as Maxwell came busting into the diner. He instantly saw Luis, who was back towards the wall.
Maxwell: yyyooouuuu...
Luis: *nervous laugh* M-Maxie...how's it g-going?
You're on parole already?
—
Tony was at the compound, working in lab on his suit still irritated by what happened today. Working in the lab is a stress reliever. Too bad Bruce wasn't there. Eventually, Pepper came in.
Pepper: tony, the owner who bought the tower want you to finalize the paperwork.
Tony: *grunts* I'll get to it in a sec.
Tony drops his welder and groans in anger. Pepper couldn't stand it anymore. She walks of to the monitor and with a couple of buttons, the entire lab shuts down. Tony looks at pepper with a fake look of "I'm so hurt".
Pepper: why don't you go back over there and talk to them? I know you're still mad you always do this when you're angry.
Tony stops and looks at pepper with annoyance.
Tony: I do not not always do this!
Pepper: You're a creature of habit. You always keep yourself locked up in the lab and work on the suit.
Tony sighs in defeat. They both sit down on the work bench. He explains what happened.
Pepper: you have to admit, sweetheart. You kinda did it wrong. I mean you could at least told him. I mean do you hear the messages he uses to send?
Tony: you listen to them?
Pepper: some of them can make you laugh if you listen. That's all he wants, he wants you to listen and respond to him.
Tony: so what he's rebellious teenager call for attention?!
Tony realizes what the words that just came out. He looks at pepper in surprise.
Giving her a deep kiss.
Tony: you Potts a miracle worker. Friday! Where's peter?
Friday: unknown, his suit is offline.
Tony gets up and starts tapping away on the computer in worry.
Tony: how's that possible? It's basically a walking charger.
What going on?
—
Did you ever get stung by a bee before? Okay, try imagining that but with a hell of a lot more. But their stingers are knives repeatedly stabbing you.
Luis was getting strangled and fried simultaneously by Maxwell. He was yelling in pain. Peter shoots at Max's back, swinging him out the restaurant. Luis finally gasping for air, rubbing his neck.
Peter: you okay?
Luis: *raspy* I'm oKaY. lEt'S GeT hiM!
They ran out the door while Stan tries to figure out how to explain this to the insurance company. Luis and Peter jump at Maxwell only to be blown down the street by a electrified blast. They quickly run into an alleyway.
Luis: oh man this is crazy! He's like Thor without the hammer!
They heard people running and screaming, Maxwell flip a car into the air, which headed towards a couple. They quickly sprung into action, Peter managed to catch the car in mid-air. Luis grabs them and zooms them down the street.
He returns to help peter to put the car down.
Then the realization of the situation hits them! Teamwork. The reason they the had trouble stopping Maxwell the first time was they were doing separate plans.
Luis: I got an idea, he trying to get me right? You get everyone off this block while I distract him!
Peter: alright, be carful though.
Luis run in front of Maxwell, started dodgeing the blasts. He runs to the roof.
Peter leads the civilians away from the Maxwell. Luis grabs a trash can and tossed it at him. Maxwell starts to charge a blast.
Luis: waitwaitwait! Max, before you anything you'll regret. Let's just talk!
He lowers his hands, he sees Luis's face has concern. Sighing in relief, he slowly make his way to the human fly zapper.
Luis: please I don't what to fight. But I can at least try to understand what's happening.
Maxwell starts to glow brighter, nearly blinding anyone near him.
Luis cowers a little.
Maxwell: how could you possibly understand?!
Luis didn't know what to exactly say. But that look, he can recognize it. He knows deep down he doesn't want to hurt people.
Luis: you're just hurting... I know how you feel. There was someone you trusted, I can see it on your face! But guess what, he betrayed you!
Maxwell: he said he was gonna help me...
Peter was watching the conversation from afar, grateful and nervous that Luis wasn't dead yet. But had concerns with what the speedster was saying. Maxwell glow was dying down. Peter guesses his powers must be tied to his emotions.
Luis: believe or not, something similar happened to me. But the answer not revenge! If you hear me out, we can get some to help you. They can fix it!
Maxwell: ...that's what he told me.
His hands started to glow again along with the rest of his body. Luis starts to back up. Maxwell slowly rises in the air again.
Maxwell: he treated like I wasn't even human...I was always a damn battery! I WAS HIS GUINEA PIG!
He grabs Luis by his neck. He looks right into the speedster's fearing eyes.
Raising his right hand that was ready to fried. slowly reach for Luis face as he started squirming.
Maxwell: but he said once I take care of you, he'll fix me...
Peter swing in and kick max in the face, release the teen. As they dodge the blasts that was being thrown at them, they quickly hide behind a van.
Peter: can you throw a bolt at him?! Go all Thor on him!
Luis: You know damn well I don't know how to use it!
Luis takes a deep breath before walking back into the street. Maxwell noticed him but wanted to see what he was trying to do. He stands his ground with his hands behind his back. Quickly aims at Maxwell.
Only for a tiny sparks to pop out.
He quickly runs back to cover. The situation was getting worse. Maxwell flying away with them in pursuit. He was sucking the energy out of anything that runs on electricity. The more he took in, the more brighter he got.
Luis: how do we stop him?!
Peter: I'm working on it! Karen, get out of sleep mode!
The A.I was still powered down from earlier. Maxwell finally stopped in time square, Landing on the red steps in time square. People began to gather around. He sees a fusebox and channeling the energy he contains, taken control of the Jumbotron. His face appears on the screen.
Maxwell: how can you stop me, while people are in danger?
Suddenly their surroundings went dark, only for everything to bright and pop. People's Electronics and digital starts to cackle and pop, max started to glow. The sparks and volts around him started to turn reddish orange.
Luis: I'm no genius but...I'm pretty sure that's really bad...so...WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO?!
He said as he shook Peter back and forth repeatedly. They noticed a little blue spark trailing off him and onto Peter suit. as soon as it came in contact with the fabric it reactivated Karen.
Karen: system restart completed. Hello peter, what did I miss?
Peter: oh my god! You can do that! I mean that's awesome-
Luis stares at Peter with annoyance on his face. Getting back to the problem at hand, Karen does a bio scan on Maxwell. Once it was complete, the results weren't good. Before Karen could respond, his spider sense tingle, Luis heard that voice again.
Save them...
He looks and sees people running from the sparks and one of the billboards was about to fall. He quickly rushes over and moves them outta the way. While peter uses his webs to hold it up. But the web shooters fizz out.
Peter: what just happened?!
Karen:webs came in contact with a electric source. Peter, you webs contain silk. Peter this is like what you're studying in history class right now.
Peter: Ben Franklin! I got it! V, get him to shoot you!
Luis: I'm sorry? What did you just say?!
Peter: Just trust me!
Luis looked at Peter with shock. Who shoots a web to his chest and one to a light pole. He was nervous but trusted him. He throws his shoe at max. turning around with a look that was ready to kill.
Luis: Hey! You want to kill?! Kill me then! Open target right here!
Suspicious of what Luis was doing, but now was his chance. But couldn't do it cause something was wrong. But then the voice started talking in his ear.
?:Do it! Stop him! Knock him out, but don't kill him...yet!
Luis: what's wrong?! Do it! I'm ready! Or...you don't have the guts! Well I guess you're stuck like this.
Maxwell instantly blasted a bolt of lightning at him. Luis yelled out in pain but started to quiet down. He looks down at his chest. The energy was channeled towards the pole. Watching It travel along the webs reminds him of the back to future movies. Once he started to cool down he was reverting back to normal.
He pulls off the web and walks over to the tired out menace. Max had dark hair and looked African American, his face had a scar across it.
Peter: I know someone who can really help you. If you just come with us.
He slowly started to get up, weakens from the drain of energy.
Max: *raspy* no...the only way to help me is...KILLING YOU!
As he started to glow, max grab Luis and flew him up in the air. They were high above New York. Luis couldn't look down, he didn't want to look down. Instead, he was starring into Max's eyes.
Max: the energy... I'd sensed when I attacked you. He told me what kind of power you had. I just didn't believe him. Until now...
In Max's ear the voice talked again.
?:...finish HIM.
Max's grabs Luis's shoulder. He yelled in pain as max smiled. Blue Lightning began swirling all around them. He draining the energy out of him. Max felt the power coursing through his veins. It felt like he could destroy the entire city in one blast. But that all changed as the power started to burned. The lightning around started to turn multiple colors. Red, orange, blue and purple. The pain didn't hurt anymore for Luis. He was in amazing at what he was seeing, unaware that max was about to detonate.
Max: OTTO, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?!
?: a simple experiment... and it was successful.
Luis: Otto?
Max started to have a seizure as he dropped. Luis yells in terror as he falls back to the earth. He wasn't sure if his speed healing would cover this.
Back on the ground, Peter sees a electric explosion where max took Luis. But in relief when he sees Luis falling. Wait. LUIS IS FALLING! he was about to string up a giant web to catch him. But he was out of canisters. Think of different ways to catch him.
Peter: what if I just catch him with my hands! No all the force could break one of my bones! Crap! He's getting closer! He's gonna- what the?
Out of the shadows, someone with a suit that similar to Peter's, but it was black and white with a hood. Quickly springing a web that was exactly like a spider trying to catch it's prayed.
Luis closes his unaware what's happening on ground. Brace for the impact of the concrete. But it never came. He opens his eyes realizing he was caught in the web.
Luis: I'm alive? Holy shit, I'm alive!
sighs in relief as he lays back on the web.
?: wow, usually people are gross out by being caught in web!
He heard the voice, it was a girl. He looks to see her stand over him. She was the one who made the web.
Luis: thank you, you saved my life.
Peter quickly rushes over. He was surprised by the web. But more surprised to see her. She quickly took off leaving them with curiosity. As he pulls Luis out of the web, Tony arrived on scene in shock.
Tony: what the hell happened here?!
Peter: *nervous chuckle*
Luis: justice?...
Tony: *sighs* Friday, please scan the damage.
Friday: minor damage of the area, there is no casualties.
Luis: are you sure about that? *sniff* argh! I think this permanently stuck!
Tony was actually impressed, they managed to fix the situation. At least until the billboard finally broke free of the web and smash into the ground. But then the civilians started to clapped. This surprised Luis and Peter who looked at tony for approval. He nodded and they began waving to the crowd as he hooks up his gauntlet to fusebox restoring power to Time square.
I know what you're thinking. You save people all the time, this ain't new.
True.
But knowing people are thanking you for protecting them. It gives you a warm feeling, like drinking hot chocolate. I would always the second I finish the job. But see them cheering us...
I felt thirsty.
Luis: I need a root beer.
—
After the incident, Tony Stark brought us to the Avengers compound. Sure, I've been here before. But I only got a glance. This place was something outta Wall-E.
Peter: what are we doing back here?
Tony: I've been thinking about what you said that "I don't give a damn. I have to grudgingly admit...you're right.
Peter: I-me-I'm- Did you just say I'm right? Did Mr. Stark just say I'm right?
He looked towards Luis to see if he heard the same thing, nodded in response.
Tony: you're easily flattered, but it's not everyday you prove your idol wrong.
What I'm trying to say is this.
He claps his hands. The room goes dark, revealing a hologram. It was them alongside others. He starts showing videos of them and other people stopping criminals or helping people.
Tony: you probably know already that you two aren't the only ones with abilities. There's a bunch of them out there, but if we don't keep tabs on them. Who knows they could end up in freak show or become psychotic criminal!
Tony changes the hologram to a document. It had the heroes symbols on it.
Looking closer the title for it was called "The Scout Initiative". As they read the paper, it stated to find people who have enhanced abilities and help trained them to use them for the greater good. But, if they want to be rid of the powers. Stark industries could work with them to help find a cure.
Tony: I know you said "I'm good" about the Avengers. But this is different!
You kids get to work with people who are in the same situation as you. You still get to be your friendly neighbor whatever. But the deal is you have to move to the compound for better training of your powers.
Whaddya say?
Peter's eyes was gleaming from the idea, getting to work with Tony all the time and talking to what's left of the Avengers. They need to discuss more about it, but he was on board with the idea. Luis on the other hand, this is a great opportunity to help him learn more about his powers. But as long as he had his friends with him, it would be alright. He looks towards Tony and nodded in agreement.
How do I explain this to mom?
—-
It was nighttime now in New York. Unbeknownst to anyone, a dark figure started to crawling outta the east river. It was Maxwell! The blast seems to have send him crashing in the water. He slowly stand up to regain his balance. His clothes were torn and burnt from the explosion. Second degree burns were scarred all across his dark skin. He was about to fly off in anger when something cold and hard grab him by his waist.
?: Tsk tsk Mr. Dillion, where are you running off to?
The man turns Maxwell around he sees his face. He was wearing a black suit and trench coat. He had four metallic claws attached to his back. He recognized the voice, it was the man who broke him out of jail.
Maxwell: Otto?
Otto: Since you couldn't finish the job. Your services are still needed.
Maxwell: too bad, I'd tried. I couldn't do it. The power nearly killed me! You said you're cured me.
Otto: I said I cured you IF YOU FINISHED THE DAMN JOB!
Otto started to crush Maxwell. he brings him closer striking fear in his eyes.
Maxwell breaks free and tries to fly away only for a sharp pain to occur in his leg. His powers goes dark and falls hard on the ground. Looking down and see a syringe as a sudden drowsiness washed over him. Before his body went limp Otto manage to grab him.
Otto: you are going nowhere Mr. Dillion
There still work to be done...
To Be continue...