Dipper glanced around the clearing surrounding the Mystery S'Hack. He decided to take a deep breath before walking into the forest. He walked around the woods for a while until he decided it was late enough and was heading back. As he did so, a branch near him snapped, and after checking, he deduced that a deer had stepped on the branch. Nevertheless, it still freaked him out, so he hurried back to the shack, but then a snarl behind him made him decide that a deer hadn't broken the branch.
The thing hadn't seen him yet, so he took the opportunity, to leap behind a tree. Some insect chirped quietly but the monster leapt on it like it was the loudest thing ever. A small glint appeared on the other side of the tiny clearing and the monster saw it like a sun ray and pounced. Dipper wanted to study it, so he took out the camera he brought. He took a picture. MISTAKE NUMBER 1. Unfortunately for Dip, the flash was on and the light instantly made the thing spin around. He screamed in his puberty voice . MISTAKE NUMBER 2. The monster had definitely heard him now, and smashed into the tree. He ran away panting. MISTAKE NUMBER 3. He already had a sweating problem, and sprinting wouldn't help. He now stunk as well, and obviously the monster's senses were all way sharper than possible. Dipper threw a rock over to the other side of the treeless patch. MISTAKE NUMBER 4. The thing traced from where the rock landed to the altitude, and trajectory back to where the rock was thrown. Dipper ran. One of his shoes fell off. MISTAKE NUMBER 5. The creature trace- " CAN YOU STOP POINTING OUT ALL MY MISTAKES!" Dipper screamed. MISTAKE NUMBER 6. The scream was so loud that anything could have heard him from a mile away.
The monster slammed through the forest, knocking down however many trees it had to. It picked up a branch between its teeth and spat it at Dipper. It hit him in the back and sent him sprawling to the floor. He was in so much agony, he looked at the cuts all over him and slammed his head back. It came and sat directly over him. "What are you?!" Dipper choked. He was bleeding all down his chest. "i aM tHE HUnTeR…" It growled to him, just before getting slapped in the face with a branch, not hurting but stunning it. He just ran.
Mabel looked out the window. She sighed. Dipper had been gone for hours and she was getting worried. All of a sudden, she noticed trees. Tree after tree after tree toppling in a line towards the shack. She was now terrified, Dipper was in a forest with a tree toppling thing. She saw her brother sprint out of the woods but couldn't see his facial expression but was still running downstairs at this point.
Dipper burst through the door and stared out of the window. "Hey Dipper." Mabel chirpily said. He turned around and Mabel's jaw dropped to the floor. "DIPPER! YOU'RE BLEEDING!" She yelled.
"No no, Mabel shh-" At this Grunkle Stan burst into room. "Dipper- WHAT?!" Mabel tried to reassure her brother. " I'll block the door." She moved a small table in front of the door. "There." She smiled to Dipper.
"ARE YOU CRAZY!? A TABLE WON'T STOP THAT THING!" He shouted at the top of his lungs. He sprinted to the window.
"Look! Mabel! The eyes!" He pointed out the window
She looked and couldn't deny what she saw. "Yep. Those are eyes."
"Wait. Why is it not coming out into the clearing?" He questioned.
All of a sudden, the eyes disappeared and the thud of the monster's footsteps slowly faded back into the forest.
Dipper smiled. "Haha! It's going! We're saved Mabel!" He hugged his sister. All of a sudden he turned pale. Very pale.
"Dip? Dipper?" Mabel waved at him. He did a vague gesture to his chest. She looked at the blood all down the front of his chest and gasped at it for the second time. Then, with all colour draining from his face, he collapsed, unconscious.
"DIPPER!" Mabel and Grunkle Stan yelled at the same time.