This is my first fanfiction, I'd love some constructive criticism, like how to improve, what to change, etc.
Thank you for reading!~
Roxas yawned, rubbing his tired eyes. He looked around his bedroom, an exact replica of the alternate Twilight Town. He'd spent the night before drinking with friends. Closing his eyes, he saw one of those friends, intertwined with his 'other self'. It was very awkward, being able to know what Sora saw and felt all hours of the day and vice-versa. It had begone to bother the ever-loving Christ out of Roxas. After puberty hit Sora started spending more time with Riku. They become a genuine couple shortly after. Truth be told Roxas was envious of them.
A loud knock pulled him out of his mind and to his feet. He pulled on a shirt as he walked to his bedroom door and wandered into his living room. He was relieved to see the person behind the door was his best friend.
Axel looked around the comfortable minimalistic living room as he waited to be invited in by his absentminded friend.
"You gonna let me in?" Roxas opened the door wider, letting his friend into his living room. "Sorry, I just woke up."
Axel chuckled, shutting the door behind them "Yeah I can tell, you look like a zombie." he said as he occupied the plush chair across from Roxas.
"I guess I did, I don't know." He muttered, distractedly. Axel scanned him, "You okay?" You're making less sense than usual." He asked visibly concerned. "It's um it's nothing, I'm fine." Roxas lied, far too embarrassed to admit his continuing troubles.
Axel sighed, "Well, you're my best friend!" he scratched his neck gingerly "I'm here if you need me. Well, especially now that Isa kicked me out."
"Are you asking to move in with me?" Roxas asked, coyly, Axel nodded, avoiding his friend's eyes. Roxas thought for a few seconds, "I'll need help with rent and the food expenses. I have an extra room you could stay in. Might have to dust a bit."
"Sounds perfect! I have to get my luggage from Isa's first." Axel ran a hand through his hair, "Could I have some help doing that? Isa is probably still mad at me."
"I can get your stuff for you, what all do you need?" Roxas asked, concerned
Axel thought for a moment, "Basically everything, besides the furniture."
Roxas got up from his chair, opening his bedroom door. Axel followed, in tow. "Okay," Roxas muttered while skimming through his belongings for a pair of pants, pulling them on. "go make yourself comfortable in the living room, I'll be back in a few hours," he said while exiting through his bedroom's window. onto the rickety fire escape, and the concrete below.
=~ Meanwhile, at Riku & Sora's ~=
Sora groaned, stifling it with an intoxicating bite on his lover's neck.
"Sora!~" Riku moaned, uncharacteristically. A bewildered expression crossed Sora's face, "That's new." trying to suppress laughter.
"Shut up," Riku muttered as he thrusts deeper into his petite lover. Sora moaned, extinguishing it with another bite on Riku's neck again, cumming onto their bare chests "Oh god! Riku!~" Riku came deeply into Sora's tight ass. He gently pulled out, kissing a now drowsy Sora on his forehead.
Riku got out of bed, entering the conjoined bathroom. The sound of the shower lulled Sora into a deep, dreamless sleep.
Riku sighed, the tepid water calming his tense muscles. He wasn't used to spending hours fucking Sora. It was different, Riku couldn't exactly say why but one thing stayed the same though, the sex was always fantastic!
Riku stepped out of the shower, shivering as he wrapped himself in a towel.
He grabbed a washcloth from their linen cabinet, after dampening the cloth he stepped into their room. Pulling the warm blankets away from Sora's chest as he gently ran the wet fabric over Sora's torso. Rinsing and ringing it out as he placed it on a drying rack. He got dressed, soundlessly. He kissed Sora on the forehead before he opened their bedroom door, noiselessly shutting it behind him.
He grabbed a jacket and his keys on the way out of their apartment. Locking the door before leaving. He hated driving in an overpopulated hellhole like this one but he couldn't leave Sora. Sora didn't want to live anywhere else, all of their friends lived there. Supposedly it was a great community? Riku doubted that.
"Fuck this!" Riku muttered, deciding against driving in the gridlocked traffic. He loathed walking, detested driving even more. After a while of walking, Riku found Roxas walking a few paces in front of him. He caught up, soundlessly.
"Riku? Hey, where are you headed?" Roxas asked, nervously.
"I don't know, I'm just walking," Riku said chuckling to himself,
"Fair enough, how are things with you and Sora?" Roxas asked a slight hue to his cheeks.
"Pretty well, I mean other than, you know," Riku muttered, trying to avoid that side of their relationship.
Roxas smiled, "Yeah, I know. This is my stop. See you in my nightmares!"
"Nightmares?" Riku asked confused as Roxas climbed the stairs to Isa's apartment building.
Roxas ignored him; he didn't have time to talk about this bullshit.
Riku signed, relieved, grateful to avoid the discussion about his and Sora's sex life.
Riku turned on his heel, walking home. Before reaching home he stopped by a corner store and bought a container of coconut oil.
After leaving the store he turned the corner, a block from their apartment building. A streak of black moved in his peripheral vision. He scanned his surroundings when suddenly someone appeared before him. a long cloak, a golden eye.