Sorry I wasn't able to post but no-one has been reviewing and it makes me think no-one likes it and then i have no reason to continue. but here's a chapter

Eaglepaw woke up to yelling and bangs. She put her paw over her ears. "Would you guys stop talking?" she muttered. The she remembered that she wasn't in her nest, let alone, the apprentices' den. Not even in Thunderclan's territory, in fact. His cage rustled and jolted around as a twoleg picked it up. "I'm sorry, we have to let you go here, we wouldn't be able to get back in time if we drove farther," it said.

Eaglepaw panicked as she realized that she was in a monster. Her eyes filled with fear, and panic. The Twoleg set the cage down on the ground, and opened it. As soon as it did, she took off into the forest, trying to get as far away from the twolegs as possible. She skidded to a stop as she realized that Icepaw and Marigoldpaw were still back there.

She turned around and started to race back when she collided with them, and all three apprentices fell to the ground. They got up and then took off, running through the undergrowth.

Once they were sure that they were far enough, they slowed down, and stopped. They didn't even know it, but they had crossed a scent line. "What are we going to do?" meowed Marigoldpaw, "what are we going to tell the clan? Will they even accept us?"

"I don't know," Eaglepaw meowed, "but I don't want to talk about it right now. The first thing we should worry about it getting home." Eaglepaw's stomach growled. "I think we should hunt before we continue," she suggested. Marigoldpaw and Icepaw nodded and set off, together, in the opposite direction.

As Eaglepaw padded through the forest, the undergrowth changed. It was getting thinner. How in the name of Starclan does this happen? she thought. She jumped a bit in surprise as a mouse ran right in front of her. She pounced right away and killed it. Then recited the prayer for when a clan cat kills prey. When she was done, she was going to head back to the spot where the apprentices stopped to hunt, but a faint scent made her pause. She tried to find the direction in which it was coming from.

After a short while, she found that the scent was coming from a bush, and it was cat scent, too. Not taking her eyes off the bush, she poorly buried the mouse. "I can smell you! So, you might as well come out!" she yowled into the bush. She then noticed, at the same time, that the scent had faded, showing that the cat left. The second thing she noticed was a flush movement behind her, but made no motion to look. She was sure that the cat was behind her now.

She waited for a moment or two, then, in one sift movement, whirled around, and pushed forward with her hind legs. She hit another she-cat and pinned her down. "What do you want?" she hissed. She felt the she-cat go limp and she tightened her grip. "Please that's the oldest trick in history," she meowed, her voice full of amusement. Eaglepaw loosened her grip and got off the she-cat.

The she-cat stood up and shook her pelt. Eaglepaw was able to get a good view of her. She had a dark greenish, color with brown splotches all over. "That was a nice move you did there," she meowed, giving her pelt a few quick licks. "We could use a cat with your skills. How would you like to join….

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