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"Oh, no!" = spoken out loud
'Oh, no!' = thought in head
- insert song name here - = play or switch to the song
"I am here!" = All Might (Hero Form)
"I am here" = All Might (Normal Form)
"Save" = Unknown
I do not own "Boku no Hero Academia"
Izuku stood tall, just as All Might did, and he watched as the setting sun cascaded over the deteriorated form of All Might as he spoke, "You, are worthy to inherit my power"
"…Huh?"
"Due to your heroic actions, that saved a child in need, that no one else, even the heroes, were willing to save. You inspired me to take action, so that is why I believe you are worthy to inherit my power" The sickly All Might explained as he pointed to the boy in question.
"B-But, how can you inherit someone else's power? I'm not your son. Since most powers are carried on through family, how would I possibly be able to wield your quirk?" Izuku confusedly questioned.
"Well, let me explain something that has been kept a secret for generations, so once again you must tell no one" All Might said, but before Izuku could answer other than a simple head nod, All Might continued, "This power, is called…" All Might struck a pose as if he was handing a legendary weapon to Izuku, "…One for All" He stated as his hand began to glow with an electric and overpowering energy.
Izuku simply stared in awe at All Might, who even in his weakened form, still looked powerful in his own way, and determined as his eyes glowed with a bright blue hue, "This power has been passed down for generations, and you would be the ninth wielder. Over every generation, the holder has worked hard and increased the quirks power. With me, the eighth holder, strengthening it the most and becoming the symbol of peace, this quirk is the crystallisation of all the past generations refining it" All Might explain as he looked up towards the sky in a triumphant show of pride.
Izuku was absolutely frozen in place, as he hysterically thought about how such a powerful quirk would come to exist. He could only stare up to the magnificent man, that although he looked frail and lanky, was actually the incredible number one pro hero and symbol of peace, All Might.
"What do you say?" All Might simply asked as he turned his head back down to face the stunned Izuku.
Izuku shook the doubt from his head as he looked All Might directly in the eye and energetically said, "Yes!"
"An instant reply, I would expect nothing less" The smaller All Might said, as he let out a laugh, that was less deep than his hero form and was rougher, but sounded more genuine…
… then he accidentally coughed up an amount of blood.
Izuku worriedly fussed over him for the next five minutes, to make sure he was okay.
Izuku was assure All Might was fine so he went home. He got home from the second slime battle in one day and was immediately greeted by his fretting mother, because apparently the stunt he pulled was all over the news. She hadn't changed much over the years, she had gotten shorter due to age and now only stood at 5ft 5 inches, but other than that, she was still her caring, slim figured and pretty self. Some might say she had only grown beautiful over the years.
Izuku assured his mother that he was fine, it kind of reminded him of how he just fretted over All Might, but after he was done, he went to his room and spent almost an entire hour writing in his self-quirk analysis book, updating it about his new forms appearance and abilities. He actually didn't see his full forms appearance until he watched the news, where they had a short clip of him in his new form. All he saw of his form before, was his sharply black scaled legs and tail. The clip entailed a full show of where he mightily flapped his wings and the whole after effect of the immense wind pressure. The villain was obliterated, rubble went flying, the seven-foot-tall and muscular hero Death Arms fell on his butt, and the camera shook a lot, all while winds that were so strong you could visible see them, rushed all throughout the alleyway and exploding out of the cramped space. All together it was quite impressive, even Izuku had his jaw open at the mighty spectacle of his stunt, but what Izuku really payed attention to, was what his full form looked like, since he was actually pretty curious. Luckily you got a full view of the smoothly black plated humanoid dragon. Izuku also noticed while playing the clip, that near the end, there was a small blur as the camera finally fell over, that Izuku expected was All Might coming in to save the slimily leg pinned Izuku, but the blur was too quick to be sure.
He hypothesised the form's existence before, since he had evolved his wings on several occasions, but he never did it with the whole of his body, mainly because he believed he would damage some part of him with the intense power that laid within him. Also, because he hadn't evolved his wings in so long, he didn't know that the severe pain he used to feel when doing so, he didn't feel anymore. His quirk had once again adapted more to his body. He probably should have been more vigilant on that and realised he could use the new form sooner, but it doesn't really matter now.
Self-Quirk Analysis Start
Izuku Midoriya
Age: 13 years
Height: 5ft, 5 inches (Same height as Katsuki Bakugou)
Description: A determined boy who wishes to be a hero, but due to suffering with insomnia, he doubts his truly exceptional abilities. He has short, wild, and curly, dark green hair, with bright green eyes that are filled with an unfading light and a slim and lean figure due to years of light training. He is considered tall for his age.
Optional quirk enhancements: Enhanced eye sight, causing slit pupils. Enhanced hearing, causing slight but noticeable pointed ears. Minor wings, with a wing span 8ft, folded only being 2ft (Smaller versions of Form Zero's wings).
(Optional quirk enhancements are alterations Izuku has decided to keep as permanent features)
Power: 4/5
Speed: 4/5
Technique: 5/5
Intelligence: 6/5
Cooperativeness: 5/5
(Power = Destructive ability)
Form Zero: Fighter
Full Form Obtained: 7 years ago
Height: 5ft, 9 inches
Time Limit: 5 hours
Affect: Gives form of a humanoid lizard, enhances Izuku's senses, makes Izuku taller and more muscular, also giving access to a pair of large wings and a strong tail.
(Search 'Form Zero: Fighter' on Pinterest or 'Half Dragon Silver Fighter Plate Sword' on Google)
Description: Izuku transforms into a dark green eyed, lizard man with a very lean figured body that is covered in a rough and leathery, deep grey skin, with a dense stony armour on the front of the chest, forearms and top of the tail. The abs and pecks being like light brown chiselled rock, the forearms being like big and heavy black stone bracers, and the top of the tail having a smooth black stone plating. The tail is strong and blunt, with a full length of 5ft. The wings are large with smooth, black skinned, muscle stuffed ligaments, a deep grey webbing made to catch air, and a wing span of 12ft, folded only being 3ft. This form is slowed down due to its extra muscle mass and heavy armour, but the increased strength helps compensate.
Inner power accessed: None
Form One: Evolution
Full Form Obtained: Today
Height: 6ft, 1 inch
Time limit: Approximately 35 seconds
(Second slime villain fight was surprisingly quick)
Affect: Gives form of a demonic humanoid dragon, enhances Izuku's senses, makes Izuku much taller and empowers Izuku with a small portion of a force that resides within.
(Search 'Form One: Evolution' on Pinterest)
Description: Izuku transforms into a bright green glowing eyed, draconic man with a slim and nimble figure that is completely covered, aside from the wings, in a smooth and obsidian-like, pitch black, armour plating that is very light and durable. With a sharp featured, long, draconic head, and six slim horns protruding from the back. The torso is smoothly plated, while the legs and arms have the armour tilled up them. The feet have keen talons, but the fingers are only slightly pointed. Nightmarish wings that are like very large, long, and strong, pitch-black arms with a palm at the top of the wing, which has large, long, finger-like structures stemming off, separating the wings dark green durable webbing into sections, and with a manipulatable wing span of 16-24ft, which can be folded to one fourth of their size. A deadly tail that is long, slim, and strong, covered in a keenly edged plating layered down it, with a full length of 8ft. This form is very fast, due to its light build and empowerment. The empowerment also makes the large wings feel surprisingly weightless.
Inner power accessed: Minor
Quirk- Unknown
(My mother never wanted me to go to the doctor, so it has never been identified. When I asked why, I could tell my mom never told me the truth. On paper it was written down as 'Different form' which isn't the actual name of my quirk)
Abilities
Powers Pride: A natural awareness of my own quirk's inner power and a natural confidence in my own quirk's inner power, sadly it does not affect one's own self-confidence. The natural confidence can be overwritten though, by a significant amount of doubt or blinding emotion.
Inner Power: A silent and assured power that resides deep within one's self, it can only be brought out by an intense desire to do so. It seems to enhance the user by imbuing them with an unknown power and forcing it to do so, before the body is ready, results in intense pain and severe harm. Pain due to forced access has decreased due to time and physical ability. More power is likely to have more strain on the body, meaning trying to access all of Inner Power will likely result in death. Inner Power seems to get stronger with the holder.
Growth: It enhances the user by increasing size, muscle mass, and senses, and giving access to a tail and wings. Forcing Growth before the body is ready results only in a feeling and awareness of the body not being ready. Growth seems to get stronger with the holder. Transforming has increased from 5ft 7 inches to 5ft 9 inches.
Increased intelligence: Simple but effective, the ability allows me to acutely observe and figure things out at an exceled rate. This also allows me to easily absorb and store knowledge. Unsure if this is natural or quirk based.
Healing burst: This ability allows the user to heal very quickly and effectively, and leaves you feeling energized. It is able to heal broken bones, but full extent unknown. Like with Inner Power, there must be an intense desire to do so. Unknown amount of times ability can be triggered, but likely limited. Healing causes steam to rise from the body.
Self-Quirk Analysis End
Some time passed after the fourth major incident that happened in Izuku's life. Two days to be exact. Within that short time, the story of how a boy, saved a classmate and showed up several on scene heroes, spread all throughout the city.
Some articles mentioned that All Might was there, but there was no picture of him to publish, and the people present continuously thanked the draconic hero, saying that All Might showed up late and didn't do anything. The main focus was on Izuku and his impressive feat of saving someone, then creating a blast of air with his unique wings that was so powerful, it put out all the remaining fires, knocked-over the close to seven-foot tall hero Death Arms who was stood almost thirty feet away and defeated the malicious slime villain in only one blow. The news described it as a boy who single-handedly took down a villain that six pro heroes could not, and that he had a quirk so powerful, he resolved the whole incident in one shot. All together the story started to boom and Izuku got very popular, very quickly. It wasn't very convenient, and Izuku didn't actually enjoy the attention as much as he originally thought he would.
Years ago, when he faced the army veteran villain, his mother requested his name and identity be kept out of the papers, but somehow, with the new influx of curious people and reporters, they eventually resurfaced this information and found out that he had defeated a villain before. The news labelled him as the next generations hero, even if they didn't know if he was gonna become a hero or not. He was, and he definitely wanted to be, more than most actually. So, no harm no foul, right? Wrong.
To say that his private life was ruined, would be an understatement, since he would be asked on the street, outside his home or anywhere really, questions or for an autograph. Which was kind of weird since he was only thirteen. Some girls even tried to flirt with him because of it, but Himiko was always like some impassable wall, making it extremely challenging for them to even talk to him. Izuku was grateful and found it rather endearing.
The sad part about all of this though, was the fact that at school, people only avoided him more. If they only knew him a little, they would realise he's a really nice guy, but instead they were constantly intimidated by him, even more so than Katsuki's explosive and confrontational attitude. Which was like, 'What?!'
That was all within only two days though, and right now, Izuku was with All Might, at Dagoba Municipal Beach Park, trying to tug a big and heavy empty metal fridge, while the also big and heavy All Might sat on top.
Maybe in another universe where Izuku was less fit and not as strong, he wouldn't be able to pull the fridge that was currently All Might's chair. But, not in this world, because in this world, he was able to slowly but surely pull it over the unclean sand of the garbage covered, scrapyard of a beach, as he encroached upon the stone stairs that led up to the street where a truck was parked that would take all junk to the actual garbage or scrap yard.
The beach used to be a wonderful place to be and Izuku remembered going when he was a child, spending hours playing in the golden sand and watching the waves lap onto the land. Now it was just a glorified dump from where the waves had brought in trash and because nobody cleaned it. It all piled up, so people only made it worse by illegally dumping their rubbish, which apparently included tons of metal and electricals, there was even a couple rundown cars for some reason.
All Might commented on how Izuku was definitely more physically fit than most his age, but he also told Izuku that his strong muscles where specialised in specific areas, and he needed all of Izuku's body to be as physically fit. Izuku asked why and he was told that some of his body wasn't a good enough vessel. Izuku was slightly confused since it was the opposites of what All Might was saying a couple days ago, but he quickly explained that One for All was so powerful and strong that if Izuku's body couldn't handle the energy, then his limbs would explode and be blown off him. The thought minutely mortified him. Also, apparently this was a kind of a test in All Might's eyes. Izuku had wanted to clean the beach before, but the miles that the beach stretched and the easily over thirty-foot-tall trash mounds that complete covered it from end to end, was kind of a deterrent, but now he had a more than one reason to clean the beach and was determined to do it. All Might only set a single section of the beach to clean, which Izuku found kind of confusing, 'Why not just do it all'
Izuku had done light training for years and it had its effect on him, but this new training was like some sort of torture. Worst of all, he wasn't allowed to use any of his forms to help him lift any of the extremely heavy thing. Apparently, All Might had a different kind of training for Izuku's transformations which mainly entailed lifting damn cars or tugging a huge lorry.
It all strained his body to the max and made him use muscles he didn't even know he had, but it didn't stop with hauling, tugging, carrying and throwing heavy stuff around all day. All Might made a fitness plan that was perfectly adapted for Izuku's height, weight and possible muscle mass. It had an eating plan with literally every meal Izuku would eat for the next ten months till the U.A entrance exam, it had exactly what workout Izuku would do every day as a weekly plan that would only get harder as time went on and etc.
But, apparently this still wasn't enough for Izuku, because even while in school he would be working on his grip strength under the table. He didn't work himself to complete exhaustion, well at least not at day time he didn't. Sometimes he couldn't go back to sleep after a nightmare, so instead he worked himself until he passed out. He was able to hide it from his mom easily, but apparently the health master All Might noticed and didn't like it.
Izuku had accidentally collapsed to the ground during a run while the deflated All Might was on a Segway. All Might tried to motivate Izuku at first to get Izuku up off the ground, but he quickly realised that Izuku had tired himself out by over exerting himself. All Might asked why and Izuku told him the truth. He needed to work harder if he wanted to save people. All Might admired the response, but still told Izuku off for overworking himself, telling Izuku to not do it again because the plan was made exactly for him, and doing any more would only have a negative effect. All Might let Izuku leave early, which actually felt like a kind of punishment, but Izuku obliged nonetheless.
Izuku told All Might the truth, but not the whole truth. The full truth is that, although his nightmares, where he watches everyone die countless times, frighten him. Knowing that if he doesn't work hard enough, then it could actually become reality…
…Scares him more than any terror ever could.
Seven months passed and a skeletal All Might drove to the beach only to find Izuku covered in sweat, laying on the cold stone floor, just in front of the stone steps that led down to the… completely spotless beach.
"Oh my… Oh my… GOODNESS!" All Might loudly boomed as he transformed into his hero form in a magnificent as his large and somehow impressed looking smile looked upon the far stretching and beautiful beach that was once covered from end to end in small mountains of pile of scrap and trash.
"Well done my boy! Not only did you clean the assigned section, but you cleaned the whole beach as well! And you did it in only seven months!" All Might turned to the ground laying boy as his already large smile only got bigger.
Izuku struggled to stand up as in between heavy breaths he said, "I… did it" as his legs wobbled, he looked up to All Might, "Thank you…All Might" His heavy breathing started to slow as he began to smile, "You did all this for me. I'm too blessed" Izuku could feel tears prick at his eyes, but they didn't fall.
'You really doubt yourself too much. This was all your own hard work' All Might thought as he brought out his phone.
Izuku looked to the phone that was put in front of his face and what he saw was a picture of himself from seven months ago as he drank some water. Izuku looked down and noticed that his muscles had become considerably more defined and looked like they were so densely packed with muscle that they were going to explode. He still kept his lean figure, but now it was much more pronounced, and he had grown to 5ft 8 inches, which was taller than Katsuki. Izuku's main body wasn't the only thing to improve though, he had more than one form after all, and a good example was the now larger minor wings that he constantly had on his back, just like how he constantly had slit pupils and pointed ears.
"Now, for the award ceremony!" All Might announced as he plucked a hair from one of his iconic golden tufts, "This is something I was once told: Something that you receive because you are lucky, and something that you are given because you are recognised are different in essence. Take that to heart" Izuku met All Might's eyes as he spoke, "This is power that you earned from your own effort" Izuku took on a determined look as he clenched his fist, and All Might moved the hair strand closer to him, "Eat this"
"…Huh?"
All Might explained that Izuku needed to ingest the DNA of the current wielder in order for the power to be passed on. Izuku realised that it actual kind of made sense, hesitantly eating the hair that did not go down his throat without a fight.
After some assistance from some water the hair went down and Izuku felt no immediate change, which he suspected was because it needed to be digested. The theory was confirmed by All Might explaining that the exact thing Izuku suspected, did indeed need to happen. Two and a half hours of running around the beach later, and Izuku could feel something begin to surge inside of him.
He informed All Might, who was now back to his deflated state, and actually looked kind of happy. All Might explained that Izuku needed to clench his butt and shout SMASH, but that sounded stupid. All Might knew best though, so Izuku listened and shot out a powerful punch towards the ocean.
No. No he didn't. He's not stupid. He knows that doing something as reckless as that would get his arm torn off, probably. Instead he concentrated on the new power inside him and surprisingly it was pretty easy to find.
It was completely different from his silent inner power that dwelled deep inside him. This one was like a raging thunder storm with bolts of lightning shooting off left and right, and instead of being deep down, it was like it was right in his veins.
A silent power deep down and an electrical energy inside his veins. They were like a kind of contrast to each other, but one similarity was certain. They were both immensely powerful.
Izuku concentrated on the energy though and tried to see if he could tune it down. All Might just stared in anticipation for a solid five minutes before he became impatient. All Might urged Izuku to use One for All and Izuku felt like he had a decent grip on it.
He pulled his fist back and a green lightning started to spark off of his now brightly red glowing veined arm. He brought his fist forward and as he watched an explosion of air pressure shoot forward to literally split the oceans waves in two for several meters, he knew he messed up. He had used too much energy, and as if on cue, he felt the both sharp pain of breaking his arm, and the dull pain of his arm being severely bruised within an instant. He screamed as if there was no tomorrow and even started crying, but what was weird, was that this actually felt less painful then when he evolved his wing when he was 4.
All Might fretted over him and was freaking out. He quickly transformed into his hero form and crouched down saying he was going to go get Recovery Girl, who Izuku realised as the youthful healing hero. Before All Might took off though, he noticed Izuku wave him off as his arm started to smoke. All Might starred in surprise and watched as the steam rose, leaving behind a totally fine arm.
All Might asked what happened and Izuku explained that his quirk also gave him the ability to rapidly heal in a short burst. All Might breathed out a relieved breath and apologised for rushing Izuku, saying that he should have allowed Izuku to get the hang of it first. Izuku told him not to worry and All Might transformed back into his skeletal state. All Might then said that they should leave it there for the day and that he would need to make some preparations so instead they did a simple workout, but he also told Izuku that he wanted to meet him here early tomorrow, to which Izuku said yes to.
The next day came quickly and when Izuku got to the beach he saw All Might waiting outside his car. Izuku walked over and asked what they were going to do, and All Might said that they were going to go somewhere. All Might got in his car and Izuku followed. The drive was only about twenty minutes and All Might wouldn't tell Izuku where they were going, well that was until they pulled up outside UA High School.
All Might walked under a large archway with big golden letters UA on top. But, what caught Izuku's attention was the absolutely huge building behind it that looked like a colossal glass H. It was impressive and Izuku just stared at it for a couple seconds, until All Might called for him and took him out of his trance. Izuku walked forward and was slightly lost in his own world as he was currently walking on the ground of the famous hero school that he badly wanted to go to since it was the best in the entire world and it was were All Might himself went.
He was only slightly distracted though, and he still noticed the stone slab that was uneven, and if he hadn't had been as perceptive as he was, he wouldn't have noticed it, and would have tripped over it. Izuku kept on his way, and as he got close to the entrance of the school were All Might was waiting, he heard, with his very sharp hearing, a faint click behind him, and when he turned around he noticed the slab had gone back into the ground as if it was never there.
Izuku strained his ears to hear anything that may have been too silent for his ears to originally pick up on, and he swore he could hear almost completely silent gears. Izuku decided to inspect closer and he crouched down and put his ear to the ground and enhanced his sense of touch on his hands, making them more sensitive, which allowed him to follow the sound and soft shifting of gears back to the original slab that used to stick out slightly.
Izuku realised what he was doing probably looked weird, also that All Might hadn't spoke in a while. Izuku got off the ground and looked towards the entrance where he found All Might in his deteriorated form actually smiling, while a small, white, mouse, dog, bear thing in a suit, with an old scar over its right eye, stood on two feet next to him, while it also smiled.
"Uh… I think we both need to explain something" Izuku said as he pointed to the…
…oh my god that was the principle. How could he have forgotten!? His name was Nezu and he was the extremely smart animal principal of UA High School. He was a rare case of an animal getting a quirk and his was an intelligence quirk called High Spec that made him smarter than humans.
All Might went to speak but the principle held up a paw, stopping him, "Don't worry, I'll handle this Toshinori" The animal said as it started to walk towards Izuku.
He stood in front of Izuku and wasn't even up to Izuku's hip. Showing a simple smile, he said, "It's me, Nezu, the one who could be a dog or a mouse or a bear, but more importantly... I'm the principal!"
"H-Hi, I'm Izuku Midoriya. It's nice to meet you" Izuku said as he held out a hand.
Nezu shook Izuku's hand with his paw and when he was done, he peered around Izuku and pointed to the slab Izuku had been previously inspecting, "By the way, what were you doing with the ground over there?"
"Um, I was seeing if it was mechanical or not" Izuku badly explained.
"And why would you think it was mechanised?" Nezu asked as he put a paw to his chin in a questioning manner.
"I heard it shift, so I listened closer and heard gears turning, but I wasn't sure, so I got closer to the floor, felt the gears moving under the ground and followed the gears to the slab that had shifted" Izuku explained as he saw the smile on the principals face get larger while he spoke.
"Excellent!" Nezu exclaimed as he threw his paws in the air, "You're the first one to ever figure out my small test. The slab is connected to a piston that pushes it, to trip up new students or test takers that aren't paying attention" Nezu explained as he turned around to the entrance and started walking towards All Might, "Just as you said Toshinori. Truly perceptive"
They all walked into the building and after a short elevator ride, they were in the principal's office. Nezu sat in his too large black leather chair behind his desk, while Izuku and All Might sat opposite him.
It was explained to Izuku that he would be testing out his new quirk in one of the schools on ground facilities as to keep both himself and his surroundings safe, also saying that recovery girl would be present when testing to heal Izuku in case he gets hurt, but Nezu warned Izuku not to be reckless all because he had a healer on hand.
Time passed pretty quickly after this, and three months were gone in a flash. Currently Izuku was at the beach meeting with All Might before he left for the exam All Might asked how Izuku felt, and Izuku replied that with the help that he had been given, he couldn't lose. All Might chuckled and told Izuku to be careful since the exam was really tuff.
Izuku hadn't been slacking off for the last three months. Instead he had been training to control both his quirk and One for All better. He saw improvements in both. His quirk had improved most over the first seven months, but he still refined them a bit more over the last three. One for All he had learned to control rather well, and he had learned to use only a small percentage throughout his whole body making him faster and stronger, which he could also do for his other forms as well. He called it One for All: Full Cowl. He was able to train his new skill and hone his fighting ability using it. He was able to do this by repeatedly fighting All Might at UA. The first couple times he got his butt handed to him so hard that he was sore for several days after, but once he got the hang of using it and even using his own quirk at the same time, he was able to actually put up a pretty decent fight with All Might at 20%
Izuku was now 5ft 9 inches, Katsuki only being 5ft 7 inches, and he could use 10% of One for All. Form Zero: Fighter was able to use 13% due to the added muscle mass, and it was now 5ft 11 inches. Form One: Evolution was able to use 15% due to just the significant extra height it had to contain the energy, with the form now standing at an impressive 6ft 4 inches and Izuku was able to hold the form for 11 minutes. Apparently, the practical exam was ten minutes long, so Izuku made it his goal to be able to use his ability all the way through it. He was actually able to use higher percentages of One for All, but any higher and the energy began to badly strain his body, so he kept them at reasonable and non-damaging percentages, but if he needed to, he could go to higher percentages though.
A good example of how each form stood up against each other was a huge metal Fridge Izuku had used as a punching bag at UA. With his normal form he was able to put a solid dent in it, as it scooted back a couple feet, his fighter form was able to put a large dent in it, as it flew backwards several feet, and his evolved form just punched straight through the thick metal fridge, so he kicked it instead and basically dented the side inward so bad, from the front it looked like a K.
All Might gave some encouraging words as he left. Izuku felt a lot of things as he made his own way to UA. He felt nervous, he felt confident, he felt calm, he felt excited, but most of all…
… he felt ready.
Sorry if this kind of felt like an information dump, I tried to make this a good chapter and I think it will help a lot of you understand some of the things I didn't explain too well in previous chapters. We'll go to the fighting action next chapter. Thanks to Legion's Gurdian who pointed out I had All for One the wrong way around. I feel like an idiot for missing it.
*sigh* I must really be blind, because eve after re-reading the chapter, I still managed to miss a few small mistakes. So, thanks to HankFlamion18 who pointed out that I had yet again had One for All backwards. Luckily, as I read the chapter for a third time, i also noticed a couple small spelling mistake which I fixed, so once again thanks to Legion's Gurdian and HankFlamion18 who helped improve the chapter with their very useful input. I'd be in dead water if it weren't for the help of the reviews. Thank you all.
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