Street Magic OLD VERISON

by Shadowjumper3

Emily Whitefield was a street performer with superpowers. Orphaned she lived on the streets of Mission City. But one day, she saves Major William Lennox. What she doesn't know is that he works with the Autobots. Soon, she gets wrapped in the raging war between the Autobots and the Decepticons. Follow her journey to find who she really is and how she helps the Autobots.

30. To Rewrite or Not? That's the Question

Hi everyone! I have an important question/announcement to ask you all in regards to this story. I've been considering editing and possibly rewriting Street Magic and I wanted to know what you would think if I did decide to rewrite it. Let me explain why I have been considering this.

The plot is rather confusing throughout the whole story, which I find really frustrating and I would rather have a solid plot for my stories. Going from where I had started to the very end was confusing even for me. Additionally, it just seems really rushed each chapter and I admit there are numerous grammar and writing errors in each chapter. Jazz and Emily's relationship is another thing I've been questioning whether or not it was a good choice, which now I've been thinking it wasn't.

I started Street Magic when I was a junior in high school, four years ago in 2015 and now that I'm in college, I look back on it and I really don't like how I wrote it back then. I really want Street Magic to be a good story, with a good plot and characters and such but I'm also afraid if I do rewrite it, you all amazing writers and readers will hate me for it since you seemed to really love the old version. All in all, I would love to know what your opinions are on this so please leave a review and let me know whether or not you would like to see a rewritten and edited version of Street Magic.

Thank you!

~Shadowjumper3