Author's Note:
Okay I have read your reviews and I am going to answer the questions by QueenCupcake101. Here is what she typed if you haven't seen it
"This was good but a little confusing. Did Kim pressing the button cause all the swat to come? And what do you mean jacks REAL dad?"
I know it was confusing but books have confusing things that happen right? This chapter was meant to be confusing. The chapter name unraveling {I think} gave it the confusing spice of it. {I can't believe I just typed spice}.
Now the question "Did Kim pressing the button cause all of the swat to come?" First I'm guessing the button she's talking about is on her iPhone. But I reread the chapter over and I did put why the swat came. I'll show you
"Jack's POV:
My dad did this didn't he? Since I haven't killed Kim he is trying to kill me. My dad walks out from behind all the cops and swat. He points directly at me."
If you don't believe me it's in the chapter before this. And I know I put Jack had 4 days to Kill Kim and it was only two but come on? My story right?
And what I mean by Jack's REAL dad is I mean his dad that is actually related to him not Gregg. Like when Jack wasn't a vampire I just didn't put Jack's dad in that chapter. Now the question is "How did Jack's dad get there?" Well in this supernatural book I got it says when you're in need of help you dream of that person back from the dead just to help you and he did of course.
Oh and one last thing. I just figured out that someone already wrote/is writing a story called beauty and the beast. It actually sounds better than mine. :/ So I changed the story. Could think of anything else so there it is.
Hopefully I answered all your questions and if I didn't please, please PM me. If you didn't know how just go to my profile and click PM type your question and I'll answer it when I can. BYE! :D
~DREAM. CREATE. INSPIRE~