Author's note: Hey here's the next chapter, sorry that it took so long to update. I'm going to try and make this a bit longer. I don't own Tangled at all.

Tangled pt1:

Pascal runs onto the window sill and hides behind a flowerpot and blends in with it.

"HAH! Hmm, Well I guess Pascal's not hiding out here." She walks away and Pascal Chuckles.

Rapunzel giggled, "I looked right at him." Flynn looks at her strange.

A strand of hair suddenly wraps around his tail and is yanked up to face her, "GOTCHA!" she yelled scaring him and she says as she lowers him down.

"That's twenty two for me. How abouttwenty three, out of forty five?" this causes Pascal to frown.

"Okay, well, what do you want to do?" she asks him and he points outside.

"Yeah, I don't think so. I like it in here and so do you." He sticks his tongue out.

Some of the littler kids start giggling. While the adults just smile.

"Oh, come on Pascal," she says as they head back in, "it's not so bad in there." Music then starts to play.

"7a.m. the usualmorning line-up, Starting the chores I sweep 'til the floors all clean"

Flynn whistles, "Wow."

Rapunzel gives him a look.

Blondie is squealing on the inside seeing their interaction hoping that they would kiss already.

Polish and wax, do laundry and mop and shine up. Sweep again, and by then it's like 7:15."

Flynn laughs until Rapunzel holds up her frying pan threateningly causing him to hold his hands up.

The King and Queen look at this wondering, 'Are they going to become a couple?'

They look over at Blondie and are shocked when she nods her head as if she heard there thought.

"So I'll read a book, or maybe two or three. I'd add a few new paintings to my gallery. I'll play guitar, and knit, and cook and basically. Wonder when will my life, begin."

The Queen looks to be close to tears some of the villagers notice and feel bad.

"Then after lunch, it's puzzles, and darts and baking. Papier-mch, a bit of ballet, and chess."

Flynn starts laughing at how she fell while doing Ballet. Rapunzel glares.

"Pottery, and ventriloquize, candle making. Then I'll stretch, maybe sketch. Take a climb, sew a dress, and I'll re-read the books. If I have time to spare, I'll paint the wall some more, I'm sure there's room somewhere."

"Ooooohhhh." Little kids say admiring her art.

"And then I'll brush, and brush, and brush, and brush my hair. Stuck in the same place I've always been. And I'll keep wonderin' and wonderin' and wonderin' and wonderin' when will my life begin? Tomorrow night, lights will appear just like they do on my birthday each year. What is it like out there where they glow? Now that I'm older, mother might just let me go…Rapunzel looks at the painting she has been working on during the song, of her looking at the floating lights and she sighs."

The Queen is starting to want to cry even more and so does the King.

Flynn was groaning about how the song took too long.

Three shadows run across the top of the Castle in Corona and Flynn Ryder appears around the side of one of the towers, staring out to the kingdom.

The Guards glared especially the Captain and his horse Maximus.

"Wow! I could get used to a view like this."

"Rider," One twin hissed, "Come on."

"Hold up." Said Flynn, "Yep, I'm used to it. Guys I want a castle." He says with his hands on his hips.

Rapunzel laughs and Flynn glares at her.

"We do this job, you could buy your own castle." The one twin says and then grabs him by the back of the shirt.

Flynn gets lowered into the castle where the Princess' crown is kept. One of the guards Sneezes.

"Oh, hay fever?"

"Yeah." Then he realizes what just happened.

"Hey, wait!"

"You probably should think about replacing the guards or even moving the crown when you get it back." Blondie says to the King and Queen who nod agreeing with her.

Flynn and the twins are now running to the woods, "Can't you picture me in a castle of my own? I mean, I certainly can. Oh, the things we've seen and it's only eight in the morning. Gentlemen, this is a very big day." Flynn tells the twins while they were running.

"Something tells me that it is a big day for you now." Blondie says causing Rapunzel to laugh.

"This is it. This is a very big day, Pascal." Rapunzel giggles. "I'm finallygoing to do it. I'm going to ask her."

"RAPUNZEL! Let down your hair."

The royal couple that were her real parents glared at the screen.

"It's time." Rapunzel squeals and Pascal straightens, "I know, I know. Come on, don't let her see you."

"Rapunzel, I'm not getting any younger down here."

"Coming, mother." She then pulls her up.

"Hi, welcome home, mother." She says as Gothel is coming through the window.

"Oh, Rapunzel. How you manage to do that everysingle day, without fail, it looks absolutely exhausting, darling."

"I'll say." Flynn says and Blondie giggles.

"Oh, it's nothing."

"Yeah I'm sure you're not breaking your back or anything." Blondie says sarcastically.

"Then I don't know why it takes so long."

The King and Queen grew even angrier at Gothel.

Flynn looked a little shocked that she said that.

Gothel laughs, "Oh, darling. I'm just teasing."

"All right...so, mother. As you know tomorrow is a very big day."

"Rapunzel look at that mirror. You know what I see? I see a strong, confident, beautiful young lady." Rapunzel smiles thinking her 'mother' was talking about her.

"Oh look, you're here too." Gothel starts laughing, "I'm just teasing, stop taking everything so seriously."

The Queen was trying to control her anger.

"Okay, so mother. I was thinking tomorrow..." Gothel was admiring herself in the mirror but notices something on her hand showing her age.

"Flower, mother's feeling a little run down. Would you sing for me, dear? Then we'll talk."

"OH! Of course, mother." She hurriedly grabs all the stuff she needs and has Gothel sit down and then she begins to sing very fast.

"Flower gleam and glow, Let your power shine, make the clock reverse,"

"Wait!"

"bring back what once was mine."

"Wait!"

"Heal what has been hurt, Change the fate's design."

Gothel brushes her hair very fast as she possible can.

"Save what has been lost bring back what once was mine."

"Rapunzel."

Everyone except Gothel was laughing.

"So, mother earlier I was saying tomorrow's a pretty big day and you didn't really respond, so I'm just gonna tell you, it's my birthday! Tada!"

"No, no, no, can't be. I distinctly remember: your birthday was last year."

"Uh yeah because they are every single year Einstein." Blondie says rolling her eyes.

Gothel stares at her in shock as almost everyone else in the room were laughing hysterically.

"That's the funnythingabout birthdays. They're kind of an annual thing. Mother, I'm turning eighteen. And I wanted to ask, what I really want for this birthday. Actually what I want for every birthday..."

"Rapunzel please, stop with the mumbling. You know how I feel about the mumbling. Blah, blah, blah,...blah. It's very annoying. I'm just teasing, you're adorable I love you so much, darling."

Rapunzel looks towards Pascal who urges her to do what she was planning on doing.

"Oh, I want to see the floating lights."

"What?"

"Oh,...Well I was hoping you would take me to see the floating lights." She moves the curtain revealing the painting.

"Oh, you mean the stars."

"That's the thing I've chartedstars and they're always constant. But these, they appearevery year on my birthday, Mother. Only on my birthday. And I can't help but feel that they're, They're meant for me.'

"They are." The King and Queen say smiling.

"I need see them, Mother. And not just from my window. In person. I have to know what they are."

"You want to go outside? Oh, why Rapunzel."

Rapunzel sighs, Blondie sends her a sympathetic look.

Gothel begins to sing, "Look at you, as fragile as a flower. Still a little sapling, just a sprout. You know why we stay up in this tower"

"I know, but..." Rapunzel gets cut off.

"That's right, to keep you safe, and sound, dear." As she said that she rubbed her face on Rapunzel's hair as if she was talking to the hair instead of her.

"Guess I always knew this day was coming. Knew that soon you'd want to leave the nest. Soon, but not yet."

"But…"

"Shh, Trust me pet, Mother, knows best." She bumps the wall and the lights go out and she sings while messing with Rapunzel.

"Mother knows best, listen to your mother."

"It's a scary world out there. Mother knows best. One way or another, something will go wrong, I swear. Ruffians, thugs, poison Ivy, quicksand. Cannibals, and snakes, the plague."

"No!" Rapunzel shouts.

"Yes." Gothel says frighteningly.

"But…"

"Also large bugs, men with pointy teeth. And stop, no more, you'll just upset me. Mother's right here, mother will protect you. Darling here's what I suggest."

A spot light spot light comes onto Gothel at the top of the stairs, "Skip the drama, stay with Mama. Mother, knows best. Mother knows best. Take it from your mumsey."

Everyone is started when Blondie starts cracking up, "Sorry everyone time I hear that part I laugh." She says continuing to laugh before finally stopping.

"On your own, you won't survive. Sloppy underdressed, immature, clumsy, Please, they'll eat you up, alive. Gullible, nave, positively grubby. Ditzy and a bit, well, hmm vague. Plus I believe, getting kinda chubby."

The King and Queen gasp in shock that Gothel would say that.

"You should never call a girl fat." Blondie says matter of factly mostly looking at all the guys in the room.

"I'm just saying, 'Cause I wuv you. Mother understands, Mothers here to help you. All I have is one request." She stops singing.

"Rapunzel?"

"Yes?"

"Don't ever ask to leave this tower, again." She says darkly.

"Yes, Mother." She says dejected.

"Ahh, I love you very much, dear."

"I love you more."

"I love you most." She kisses Rapunzel's forehead and sings, "Don't forget it, you'll regret it. Mother knows best."

Rapunzel's real parents just wanted to cry at this point.

Rapunzel is lowering Gothel to the ground back outside, "Rapunzel, I'll see you in a bit my flower!"

"I'll be here."

We are now back with Flynn and the Twins who are running in the forest and they stop for a moment near a tree with their wanted posters.

Flynn looks at his and gasps, "No, no no. This is bad, this is very, very bad, This is really bad."

The Twins are staring at him as he turns it around and he says, "They just can't get my nose right."

"That's what you were freaking out about?" Rapunzel says slightly shocked.

"Hey I care a lot about my looks and that poster will seriously make someone self-conscious." He complains.

The Guards and their captain are rolling their eyes.

"Who cares?" one of the twins says.

"Well it's easy for you to say. Look, you guys look amazing."

They are then chased by Palace guards on horses and are then boxed in.

"All right, okay. Give me a boost, and I'll pull you up."

"Give us the satchel first."

"Wha..? I just...I can't believe, that after all we've been together, you don't trust me."

They give him a blank stare.

"Ouch."

One twin is standing on the other's twins shoulders as Flynn climbs up them and then he reaches the top.

"Now help us up, pretty boy."

"Sorry, my hands are full." He holds up the satchel and runs away.

"What?" he feels where the satchel was originally finding that is was gone, "RYDER!"

"Okay how did you do that?" Rapunzel asks.

"Simple I grabbed it while I was climbing." Flynn says smirking.

The twins who were in the back of the room growled but backed down when Blondie shot them an evil look.

Flynn is running for a bit but then is starting to be chased by a bunch of guards and the Captain says, "Retrieve that satchel at any cost."

The white horse neighs to the brown horses and the neigh back.

Flynn manages to lose all but the captain.

"We got him now, Maximus."

Flynn grabs a vine and swings, he manages to knock the captain off Maximus and starts to ride on him.

"Go! Heyah!" Flynn shouts holding onto the reins but Maximus comes to a abrupt stop"

"Come on flea-bag, forward."

Maximus stares at the satchel and tries to snatch it.

"No."

"No, stop it." They are fighting over it and it suddenly flies away from them and lands on a branch that's on a tree hanging over a cliff.

They both race to get to the satchel on the tree an Flynn gets there first.

"HAH!" the branch breaks.

"AHHHHH!"

"WHINNEYY!"

Maximus gets up off the ground and starts looking for Flynn by sniffing the ground.

Flynn is hiding and then discovers the tower, he hears Horse whinnies in distance so he begins to climb it.

He sighs, "Alone at last."

CLANG!

He got hit by a frying pan that is being held by Rapunzel and he was knocked out.

The guards started laughing as Flynn pouts remembering that.

"Agh!" Rapunzel squeals fearfully and runs away to hide. She slowly approaches but there's no response from Flynn.

Pascal motions head, Rapunzel moves Flynn's head. She looks back at Pascal who turns brown next to the face with pointy teeth.

Rapunzel finds that his teeth are straight, she stares at him and then he wakes up.

"Huh?"

CLANG! She hits him again.

Half the room starts laughing hysterically.

Flynn is just pouting.

Author's note: Hey sorry that this chapter took so long. I was very busy. I have half of the next chapter typed up right now so it should be coming soon. I'm trying to update as many stories as I can and posting new ones. Please check out my voting poll and R&R.