Disclaimer: Hello, I present you my first fanficti. This story is inspired by Israel pena's story "team Akatsuki " and I thought why not start with a story that inspired you . So enjoy this first attempt to write a fanficti , review and most importantly give me some hints to write something better. Keep in mind that my Grama isn't the best, so there are probably some tipos and grama mistakes.

Chapter:1

There was darkness, nothing, not even a sound, no heat no frost no smell nothing. That is what Nagato felt after he was sield away by Itatchi's Susano. The only thing that Nagato could do before he was seald away was to give a heartfelt speech to Naruto. Now he has nothing, just his memories and this endless voide .

"So this is the afterlife huh? " Nagato ask no one in particular. He gave his best to move, just a bit, something, anything. But alas nothing happened. Nagato thought about his life, his mistakes, not just his decision as a leader but as a person. A picture formed in his head, a picture of Konan.

A smile form on his face. He wished he'd see her again, just a small smile from her. He continues to think, and the picture around Konan image grew. Not his family ore ther friend were around Konan but six persons. Six persons who were there allies, there subordinates, but became there new family.

Sure, they were criminals but after they spend some time, they bonded. It was humerus, to see sasori and deidara's fighting for the meaning of art, scolding Hidan for his mayhem, Kakuso's talks on how to improve the financial position, kisame's eagerness for a good challenge and Itatchi's calm personality. All in all, it seemed like a weird kind of family.

"Seems like a wired punch of people "

Nagato sight " yeah they were ..." A moment later Nagato moved his eyes to see In this eternal darkness something white. It could have been a mask ore a hovering face with read eyeballs. It was a terrible face of a beast, like it would be ready to shred anything to pieces. But Nagato did not show fear, hell he did not feel anything over the time of him being dead.

"What are you ?" Nagato asked not really caring for an answer

" I am a ... Thing which could help you " the voice answer, this time the mask's 'jaws' seemed to move.

" yeah what would th-" Nagato's voice was cut off like he lost his vocal chords.

the voice chuckled " magic, now listen to what I'm about to say. I come from a different world called 'Remnant'. There are three main Species: the dominant humans, the oppressed fanus who are humans with animal 'extra' parts you could say and finally the Grimm who look something like me but are more like mad beasts and the enemies of everything alive. Anyway the world is governed by many different factions, which are now moving towards a fate which is most annoying for me and deadly for most. Now I want to change that. How ? Simple, I cannot intervene directly ore send people to do my bidding, what I can do is to Sommen a force which will shake the game in hops for a different outcome. That's were you come into play.

Nagato rolled his eyes, that sounds all very good but what would he gain out of it? He is done with life, he did his part. Plus, he could just be imagine things at this point .

" how about I give you you're family back ? " that got Nagato's full attention " I can't give you your real family back , but your old team. What's the name again ? Akatsuki? Well mostly all, the plant, snake and the maniac with one eye were never really a part of your family. "

Could this be really be true? Could Nagato really his family back ? He wallowed in the memories of his time back. Sure, they were not related by blood but were family non the less.

" I am not sure what your group were ore is planning to do in Remnantand I don't really care. Either you are criminals ore heroes is dose not matter. Simply do your part and make an impact on the world. Do we have a deal?"

Nagato did not think long about his decision. Simply the fact he could see Konan and the others were enough for him to sacrifice his Rinegan. After a moment Nagato nodded his head.

The voice seemed pleased by Nagato's decision " excellent, now to some minor details, you are not allowed to talk about me and you and the others will be reborn in this world as late teens. Got it?"

Nagato wanted to object but his voice wose sill silenced

"Perfect, well than, good luck in this world. Try not to die before you do your part " the next moment, the mask disappeared and Nagato felt his voice returning. The next moment Nagato felt as if he was falling, wind seemed to whistle around his ears , Nagato look around for any kind of hints that he was falling but the pitch blackness swallowed any kind of possible hints.

Then out of nowhere, his face met with something hard and the darkness around him disappointed. After recovering from the impact, he looked around and realized he was in a forest with strange colors, like he was in the middle of fall.

Looking around he saw six individuals which he quickly recognized as his fellow teammates and Konan, even though they seemed like they were in there last teens. all of them seemed to have arrived earlier because all of there eyes were set on him.

The first one to talk was Konan who ran twoard him, calling his name " Nagato! You are alive! I can't believe it!" They hugged tightly, which was uncommon for either of them. But since they were separated by death, it was ok to make an exception.

After Ther embrace Nagato looked deep into her eyes while both Of them having a smile and Konan a slight blush on her face. There moment was interrupted by a blue hand on Konan's shoulder. " mind introducing us to your friend Konan ? " Kisame spoke not realizing he just interrupted something.

After Konan regained herself she turned to Kisame and the other members of Akatsuki and introduce the newcomer. " this is Nagato, you all know him as pain our leader " the moment Konan said that you could see the fear in Kisame's eyes after realizing his error.

In the background, deidara leaned over to sasori and whispered " he's totally screwed now isn't he " sasori just rolled his eyes. " we'll see "

Kisame however though fast and quickly shifted the attention of Nagato to a more pressing matter " so , I thought all of us were dead I was pretty sure I was the only one left alive until, well I died. Is this something like the afterlife?"

Nagato thought a moment and started to gather with the other members "alright everyone, before we decide what to do next, I want a status report. Is everyone here ? "

" not all " Kakuso answered " the idiot Hidan is still not here "

The moment Kakuso ended his sentence a black portal open a few feet above the ground with a big boom. A moment later, a screaming Hidan was lunged out of the portal and landed face first in the ground. Hidan quickly spun around and started to scream at the portal " hey! You fucking sperm stain of a face! I'm not don wi-" he was cut off by his scythe which was ejected from the portal and hit him square between his eyes with the hilt . After that , the portal disappeared.

" never mind "

Hidan stood up and turns around, realizing that he won't alone "O Hey! All of you are here " his eyes wandered to Nagato " who's this guy? A new member " after saying that he saw the Rinegan in his eyes and quickly put tow and tow together. " you know what, never mind ".

Nagato sight, but inside he smiled. He missed this childish behavior. " anyway moving on. Status report "

Konan was the first to answer " we are all in a wired forest, after our supposed death, wearing our clocks and appear to be in our teen . Early 17 I guess "

" my eyes are more intact than usual " said Itatchi

"Samehada likes me again, even though we are going to have a little talk " the last bit wose more direct to the sword on Kisame's back which nervously shivered

" need more clay, everything else is ok" Deidara said showing the mouths on his palms

"no puppets and just a fleshy body" Sasori stated with his arms crossed clearly pissd because of his missing of everything important. The fact that Deidara stood beside him with a smug grin on his face did not help his situation.

" I have all of my hearts and Hidan is still immortal " Kakuso stated with Hidans separated head in one hand. "WHAT WAS THAT FOR!" Hidan yelled in his sorry state!" The last time we saw each other was the time you ran after that kid and than used me in a ritual and killed one of my hearts"

"and what if I was not immortal? " Hidan questioned angry.

" a risk I was willing to take " Kakuso said with a matter of fact tone.

" ok, Kakuso fix Hidan. The rest of you let's think about our next step." Nagato said " do you know why we are here ?"

" we all herd a voice after our dead which offered us a second chance, if he 'make an impact on the world' " Itatchi said in his all to well known voice.

Nagato thought about this, it's true, they were suppose to do a impact on the world, but what exactly did that mean? An impact can happen if you assassinate an important person, causing mayhem ore becoming a sign of hope like Akatsuki who were supposed to be the pillars of peace.

While Kakuso worked on Hidans neck we said "whatever we do, the first thing we need to find a city and get some money, we need food and a place to sleep "

Kakuso wose right, so Nagato order them all to move out. They walk through the forest and discuss there next plans. Nagato wanted to reform the Akatsuki, since they are supposedly in a new world, they have no name for themselves and Nagato wanted them to have the title of a criminal organization. Also since this is a new Akatsuki , the members were not supposed to call him leader ore pain, but Nagato.

Deidara made fun of Sasori because his supposed 'eternal art' were nowere to be seen. Kakuso tried to explain to Hidan that he could not go around killing anyone who looked at him funny. Kisame discussed his worry with Itatchi, that in this world he would be grouped together with the fanus race. Itatchi talk to his friend and assured him that no one is going to treat him differently and if anyone is mean to him, he can punch him in the face .

Leading the walk was Nagato who kept a keen eye on the area, next to him Konan and behind him the voices of his ... Friends. Deep down , maybe this is what he wanted. A new start with people he could trust and could never have a boring moment with them. Especially the warmth of Konan by his side .

after a long walk they arrived at a city with Technologie, Objects and buildings. After a Moment of amazement they realize the were getting the attention of people. Probably because they basically wore all the same cots.

kisame slightly leaned towards Nagato " maby we should finde some other places were we don't get so much attention.

" well maybe we could- " Nagato stopped in mid sentence wen he saw a little girl tugging on Kisame .

"excuse me "said a little voice. All members looks at the little girl, who appeared to have little boar like fangs coming out of her mouth. The little girl gave her best to stammer something but failed at it. Kisame slowly bent down on her level and spoke in a calm voice " can I help you?"

A moment later, a women with bigger boar fangs came to them and put her hand on the little girls shoulders "excuse my little girl, she wishes to be a hunter some day, but some classmates made fun of her recently and told her that fanus are to stupid to become hunters. Ever since then she runs around to fined a fanus who took the job of a hunter "

kisame looks at the woman " wait wha-" but was cut of by the girl who regained her voice and spoke like she was in a frenzy " hunters are so awesome, they are the heroes of the world , they Save everyone , everyone loves them ,they have super weapons and are just cool. "

" sorry little girl bu-" Kisame cut of Itachi " we are not just any hunters " he pulled out samaheda " we are the greatest of them all!" Kisame stroke a pose for the girl which made Hidan and Deidara laugh, even Itachi chuckled.

The little girl had stars in her eyes and Nagato mind started to form . " thank you , thank you, thank you, you are the best, I bet you will be a legend in the future " the little girl squickt and startet to run in some direction. The mother thanked Kisame and follows the little girl.

Kisame put back his sword and turns to the others " well that was fun" . Hidan and Deidara hat smiles on there face

" didn't know you had a soft spot for kids " Itachi amusingly chuckled. " but what the girl said was quite interesting. A job which is well respected and seems to be a job for fighters .

"'Hunter ' what are they hunting? " Konan asked.

Sasorie replieyed " probably the 'enemy of everything alive 'like that ...thing told us "

"and it is a job " Kakuso stated .Nagato gave the final word " alright, let's figure out what we have to do to become 'hunters'. "

"I could help with that " said a voice no one herd before.