Pikachu564: I don't want to do it.
Rick: What's he complaining about now?
Spark: I think it has something to do with the 10,000 view thing.
Leafeon: Yep, because Pikachu564 promise that he will post 5 new chapter for the whole week when he get it.
Data: He dug his own grave.
Jude: Sad, isn't it.
Lucky: I'll just read the reviews.
Pddf999: I bet Eva is jelly of Chepi.
Pikachu564: Yea, I haven't added that part yet... You got a third eye pal.
Spark: We just wrote the tension between these Pokemon since you know... they almost died.
Rick: Yea, and they'll have to solve it themselves.
BAKCHEEZAI: Sorry for not being able to read the last two chapters on time, was a little busy with school and other things. Therefore, Imma make a review of the last 3 chapters for you! Yay!
First off, Kirby's and Meta Knight's Pokémon. Obviously Lucario and Echo will be rivals, since both are aura users. Eva and Mienshao would be rivals, I think, because I believe they are both female (I don't remember Mienshao's gender), and they are both one of their trainer's first Pokémon. As for the others, I am honestly not so sure since they can go so many ways.
Second, SUPER ABILITIES (and Mega-Evolutions)! I did not ever expect them to show up here, and that's awesome! Snow Bowl would probably appear as well, being the Mega-Evolution of Ice Kirby, and Flare Beam could work as the Mega-Evolution of Spark Kirby, I suppose. You are going to have to make a lot of Super Abilities up throughout the story, to fit with all of the abilities Kirby has.
Thirdly, the gym battle with Clay. It was epic, as usual, and about time one of the Johto starters evolved.
Lastly, THE EPIC 12V12 OF DOOM. I am really excited for this. 12 versus 12 is a magnitude we would never see from the Pokémon universe. I see you decided to involve Ash and co. after all. Not that I mind at all though. My only request during this battle is to have Kirby battle Meta Knight himself again.
So there is my very VERY long review to make up for the past chapters. Are my reviews getting too long? If so, please do tell me. I would try make them shorter it you say so.
P.S. As for that final part suggestion. I plan to save that for when Kirby gets the eighth badge, because I need time to develop this... story... now... It evolved from a single idea to more ideas to enough stuff to write for chapters. I only wish I could do this for writing in English at school...
Pikachu564: WHOA THAT'S A LOT OF WORDS!
Data: We'll split it. First off, it is pretty obvious that Echo and Lucario are against each other, and you can predict it, it doesn't need to be excatly right.
Jude: Second, Pikachu564 will need to create a bunch of Super Abilities since there were seven of them. (Monster Flame, Ultra Sword, Flare Beam, Snow Bowl, Grand Hammer, and both Super Cutter and Super Spark were cut out die resembling Sword and Beam.) and if he's gonna make a super abilitie for each typing, he'll have to create 171 unique combinations Super Abilites.
Leafeon: Third, it has been 22 chapters since they hatched.
Pikachu564: Lastly, I'm killing my own soul because of this, so it better have to be epic, and I am gonna make Meta Knight and Kirby Fight.
Spark: Its really that painful
Rick: Trying to make sure some battle aren't short at all.
Pikachu564: Whatever, lets get it started!
Disclaimer: I don't own Kirby or Pokemon. Let us begin.
{Pokemon Language}
"Human Language"
[Pokemon Thoughts]
'Human Thoughts'
"Kirby's Language (Both Pokemon/Human)"
Chapter 45: Confessions.
Narrator: After beating the Driftveil, Kirby prepares to have a 12v12 battle against Meta Knight, but his Pokemon must work out a internal conflict between Echo, Blade, Eva, Chepi, and Rose.
Echo and Blade were walking down the Pokemon Center's hallways, and are about to meet up with Pikachu.
{Why do you think Pikachu wants to talk to us?} Echo asked Blade. The grass and poison type Pokemon sighed and looked at Echo seriously.
{Its about the conflict between us and the girls Echo.} He answered. Echo ears lowered and he sighed out.
{Oh... right.} He whispered quietly.
{Shhh, we're almost there.} Blade warned. Echo looked ahead with his ears up and entered the Pokemon Center's relaxing space. Echo looked ahead at the couch and found Pikachu talking to Oshawott and Tepig. Blade and Echo walk up to them then got on the couch. Blade faced Pikachu seriously and laid down.
{So, what is it?} He asked. Pikachu looked at Tepig then gave a firm nod.
{I called you here so we can find out why Chepi, Eva, and Rose are angry at you.} Pikachu answered. Blade just sighed out and looked at Pikachu annoyed.
{Isn't it obvious, they're mad at us because we almost died to Conkeldurr.} Blade answered. Echo gave a sad sigh and Oshawott grunted.
{Why don't you talk to them then.} Oshawott argued. Tepig shook his head and looked at Oshawott with annoyed eyes.
{Aren't you paying attention. Every time Blade and Echo try to interact with them, Rose would simply teleport away from Blade, while Eva and Chepi would either ignore Echo, or simply hit him.} Tepig told the otter. Oshawott looked away with a smirk, trying his best not to laugh.
{Then why don't you guys find yourselves some new girlfriends.} He mocked. He was suddenly smacked with a vine, set on fire with small sparks of fire, and two sparks of lightning hit him. He fell to the ground until Blade gave one last smack to send him away. Blade looked over to Pikachu with irritated eyes.
{Did you invite him?} Blade questioned him. Pikachu looked away with Tepig with a annoyed smile.
{He got out of his Pokeball right before we left and followed us.} Pikachu answered. Echo looked at Oshawott with a glare and his cheeks sparking.
{I would never replace Eva or Chepi, they're my friends!} Echo told him. Oshawott just laughed at the comment but got zapped by Echo again and was left burned to a crisp. Blade and Pikachu sighed out in disappointment while Tepig shook his head.
{I guess Echo will have a harder time understanding this.} Pikachu whispered. Echo was about to talk back until he felt a small shock inside him.
[Echo, there's someone behind you.] A voice inside him spoke. Echo looked around for a bit then decided to listen to the voice. His eyes turned bright blue and he looked behind him. He found three blue aura standing behind a wall, standing completely still.
{Guys, there are three small sparks behind that wall.} Echo said. Blade looked at Echo surprised and his eyes widened when he saw Echo eyes light blue.
{Echo... your eyes.} He said out loud. When Echo turned around, his eyes turned back to normal and the Pikachu had a bright smile.
{What about my eyes?} He questioned. Blade just turned his eyed and grunted.
{Never mind, lets find out who is spying on us.} The Seed Pokemon whispered. He got off the couch with Pikachu and Tepig following him and Echo lastly. Pikachu ran up to Oshawott and started to drag him along the floor. The otter got back up while Blade looked back at Echo and narrowed his eyes. [No doubt about it, that was Fenrir helping Echo out.} Blade thought. He was near the wall and got out his vines fast before getting on the other side and wrapping the three characters behind it.
Echo, Tepig, and Pikachu surrounded the three and were ready to launch their attacks at them. {Who are you, and why are you spying on us?!} He interrogated. Echo and Pikachu cheeks sparked up to give little bit of light and reveal Eva, Rose, and Chepi wrapped with Blade's vines.
{Eva? Chepi?} Echo questioned. Both Pokemon looked at Echo surprised while Rose to Blade.
{Ho-how did you know we were here Blade?} Chepi questioned. Blade looked over to Echo and grinned.
{It wasn't me, it was Echo who found you.} Blade answered. Echo just smiled at the accomplishment and looked at Eva and Chepi seriously.
{Eva, Chepi, we need to talk.} He told them. Eva and Chepi just stared at him before Blade released them except Rose. Echo walked away from the group with Eva and Chepi while Blade looked at Ash's Pokemon.
{Can you give us a minute guys.} Blade asked. They nodded and walked back inside Ash's room quietly and closed the door. Blade was still holding onto a struggling Ralts who was trying to teleport away. {Rose.} He called out. Rose simply looked away and continue to struggle.
{Please let me go Blade.} She said. Blade tried to keep his cool and took one deep breath.
{Rose, please listen to me.} He begged. Rose just looked at him curiously and sighed in defeat.
{What is it.} She asked.
{I'm sorry about what happen to me against Conkeldurr... and I'm sorry about the past.} He said. Rose looked at him surprised while Blade released her from his vines.
Flashback... around the time when Helios was captured...
Blade and Rose were traveling within Lostlorn Forest. Blade had finish fighting against a Whirlipede and they were relaxing near a small river. Rose was tending to Blade's wounds and was preparing a small meal between the two.
{You did great out there again Blade.} She spoke softly to him. Blade just grunted and looked away.
{I beat him, but I'm not strong enough.} He told her. Rose applied the last bandage and went to prepare their meal.
{But your already really strong Blade.} She argued. Blade just looked at Rose with a blank stare and a smile.
{Yea, but I need to get stronger. I don't want to lose you like I lost Pikachu and Chepi.} Blade told her. Rose face turned red while she carried two cooked Pecha Berries to Blade. {Thank you.} He gratitude. He ate the Pecha Berry satisfied and gave loud sigh. The full moon was up with the night sky full with stars. Blade and Rose were about to sleep, but Rose was still standing with her face deep red.
{What's wrong Rose? Aren't you tired yet?} He asked. Rose took a deep breath and her face flustered red.
{Blade, can I have a moment with you.} She requested. Blade stood up and gave her a nod.
{Sure, what is it?} He asked. Rose was looking at Blade in his eyes and was shaking a bit.
{Blade... can... no... will you... huh... um.} Rose stuttered in her words while Blade just remained quiet. Rose gave silent cry and she held her hands together tightly. {Will you please be my... my...} She tried to say. Blade eyes turned to a glare and shook his head.
{I'm sorry Rose, but I'm not looking to befriend or partner up with anyone yet, not until I find Pikachu and Chepi.} He told her. Rose looked at him depressed and lowered her head. Tears started to collect in her eyes and continued to shake a bit.
{O-o-o-okay.} She muttered out. She turned around to avoid seeing Blade's eyes and laid down. The Bulbasaur just looked away and closed his eyes with a glum look.
[Sorry Rose, but I can't accept your feeling... at least not right now.] He thought. He gave out one last sigh before falling completely to sleep.
End of Flashback...
Rose just stared at Blade surprised while Blade just looked away.
{I'm sorry I didn't accept your feeling back then and I'm sorry that I almost died to Conkeldurr!} He apologized again. Blade took a deep breath and looked at Rose seriously. {Rose... I will be your partner.} He said with his face red. Rose just stared at Blade then gave a tiny laugh. Blade gave a loud grunt and laid down with his face red. He closed his eyes and shook his head. {That was way harder then I expected.} He whispered. Rose walked up to the dinosaur and gave a small kiss on his forehead to make him open his eyes and look at her. He saw a small smile on her face and water falling out of her cheeks.
{Yes.} She told him. Blade just stared at her before giving a smile and stood up.
{Come on, we need to get to Kirby's room before he realizes we're not there.} He suggested. Rose gave a nod and got on Blade. He was about to run back towards Kirby's room but then looked back and got Rose confuse.
{What's wrong?} She asked.
{I wonder if we should wait for others to come back.} He replied. Rose looked over to where Blade is looking and smiled.
{Yea, lets wait.} She answered. She got down and laid her head besides Blade's head and gave a soft sigh.
With Echo, Eva, and Chepi...
Echo was looking back and forth at Eva and Chepi, who had there heads turned away.
{Come on, please listen to me!} He begged. Eva just glared at him with Chepi and they both growled.
{You think we would listen to you after you left without telling Kirby or me?} Eva questioned. Chepi nodded and stepped up.
{Or after you almost died to Conkeldurr!} Chepi added. Echo just looked away with a frown and sighed.
{But I'm alive, aren't I?} He told them. This earn a slap from Eva's vine and a series of stars from Chepi. Echo just grunted and his cheeks sparked up. {Come on, I said I'm sorry! What else do you want me to do?} He questioned. Eva and Chepi stared at each other then back at Echo,
{Don't leave without telling us then.} Eva demanded. Echo gave a nod then looked at Chepi.
{And please don't risk your own life.} She added. Echo gave a small smile and nodded.
{I can do that, but do you forgive me?} He accepted, but wondered too. They gave him a nod, until Chepi looked at Eva then back at Echo.
{Echo, can you answer a question too?} Chepi questioned.
{Yea, just ask away.} He said. Chepi lower her head with a feint blush on her face and closed her eyes.
{Can you please tell us how you feel?} She requested. Eva looked at her surprise while Echo looked at her confuse and tilted his head.
{How I feel, on what?} He asked. Eva looked away and pouted.
{About us, Echo.} Echo just rubbed his head with his paw and just remained confused
{You're guys my friends of course.} He answered unsure.
{No, that's not what she means.} Eva uttered. Echo just stared at them then sighed.
[What do they want me to say?] He thought. He looked at them seriously and sighed. {I don't know what you guys want me to say... but I'm gonna go back inside Kirby's room. You can join me if you want to.} He said. He ran back towards Blade's direction, leaving Eva and Chepi behind with uncertain emotions.
{Is Echo really this dense?} Eva questioned. Chepi shook his head and lowered his head.
{He wasn't like this in the orphanage. He would always tell people how he felt about them. He even confess to a Skitty once over there but got rejected.} She informed. Eva looked at her surprise but saw her smile and a couple of tears. {But even after that, he was still joyful and would tell his feelings.} She added. Eva gave a soft sigh and looked toward the direction Echo ran.
{Well, whatever it is. I really hope that he figures out how we feel about him.} Eva uttered then started to walk towards Kirby's room with Chepi by her side.
After Echo, Eva, and Chepi met up with Rose and Blade, they went back inside Kirby's room. They fell asleep on Kirby's bed and peace had return to them...
Pikachu564: I'm gonna be tortured if we get 500 more views,
Leafeon: I wish you worked better on this chapter.
Pikachu564: Shut it! I don't know much about freaking romance!
Spark: I just want to see the 12v12 battle.
Rick: Yea, but it says here Kirby gonna capture a new Pokemon before fighting Meta Knight.
Jude: I wish you luck Pikachu564.
Data: He will be in peace.
Lucky: He's dying.
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