Pikachu564: In a way, I blame myself on this.
Spark: How come?
Pikachu564: I created such a mystery :D
Rick: Shame on you shut up, Lucky, read the comments please.
Lucky: Okay.
Pddf999: if Kirby wins can he do his victory dance
Pikachu564: This was before the ending battle, but yeah, you saw the dance either way. Next.
Pddf999: I think the pokemon should be togakiss.
Pikachu564: A Togekiss as Hera might be nice. And we have Vi for that reason, to give us the egg.
Spark: She came in handy after all.
Jude: In a way, Vi is more useful character to give Pokemon from other generations.
BAKCHEEZAI: And that was the climactic finale of the massive battle. You finally did it! I was kinda expecting a tie this time, but I'll take the result anyway. My only complaint is that I felt Meta Knight went kinda easy on Kirby this time, seeing how he got absolutely thrashed by Kirby's Super Fighter ability. But then again, that would call for a Part 4, which means I have to wait.
Also, this one's kind of a nitpick, but Meta Knight being shocked is OoC in my opinion. He has always been known as a pretty calm and collected knight.
Aside from that, great writing throughout the fight, and keep it up!Looking forward to find out about Kirby and Eva's past.
Pikachu564: I should really keep with my reviews, but thanks for everything, I changed Meta Knight's reaction a bit, and yes, it was easy for Kirby to defeat him, but he was Dark/Fire, so he fainted due to Type advantage. next. (Also, doing part four would only be Meta Knight against Kirby if I wanted to do it.)
Pddf999: you know the readers will need to know about that oshawott
Pikachu564: NO ONE NEEDS TO KNOW ABOUT THAT OSHAWOTT!
Spark: Dude, chill, we just want to know why you added the otter,
Pikachu564: No, next.
BAKCHEEZAI: So that is how it all began. Kirby's journey in the Pokémon world with Eva has gone a long way since then. Got a question though, why does Eva know so much about Pokémon? I find that unusual. Has she had a trainer prior to Kirby?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing Kirby catch the Krokorok adding to his ever-expanding family, and beat the next gym, adding to his (hopefully) ever-expanding gym badge collection (I really doubt that there will be a next season of this in another region, but who knows.)
Keep the good writing up,
BAKCHEEZAI
P.S. I want to know about the Oshawott too. ;)
Data: I thought it was common knowledge that Pokemon knew about themselves more better than humans.
Jude: Me too.
Pikachu564: I don't know, I thought they did, I mean, they are Pokemon themselves.
Spark: Moving on, I never said Kirby was gonna capture Krokorok, Ash caught it. (sadly... but meh...)
Pikachu564: If Kirby was gonna capture it, then I would have wrote about it, but he didn't, and don't worry, I will try to continue after Unova, Hopefully. But anyways, on to the story!
Leafeon: Its my turn to create the intro. :D
Pikachu564: Maybe next chapter.
Leafeon: Aww boo.
Pikachu564: Just start it. AND I WON'T TELL YOU ANYTHING ABOUT THE OSHAWOTT... for now.
Chapter 51: Silent Argument.
Narrator Guy: I'm back, don't know what happen, but after the capture of Krokorok, our heroes are training in a near by forest, to prepare for the next gym battle.
Ash was talking to his Pokemon while both Iris and Cilan were relaxing and Kirby faced his. "Okay guys, we're gonna try a bit of teamwork right now." Kirby told them. His Pokemon just stared at each other confused then at Kirby.
{What do you by that Kirby?} Rammus asked. Eva just sighed and looked at Rammus.
{He means that we're gonna train 2 versus 2.} She explained.
"That's right, it was Ash's idea. So pick a partner, we're gonna have you battle each other." He said and walked up to Ash.
{Alright, let's start grouping each other.} Eva told everyone and everyone circled up. {Rammus, you're with Zoey.}
{Yeah! I get to stay with honey bun!} She celebrated and hugged him. Rammus gave a loud grunt and lowered his head.
{Please kill me.} He whispered in embarrassment. Zoey only laughed at his reaction and licked his cheek.
{Let's do our best.} She told him and the dog gave a nod.
{Sky is with Helios.} Eva announced next
{Alright pal, let's show them how strong we are.} Sky told his friend and the larva gave a nod.
{Okay.} He simply said.
{And finally, Echo and I will be together.}
{Awesome, lets do our best Eva.} Echo told her and she nodded. Kirby walked up to the group and gave a nod.
"Okay Ash, they're ready for our training session." Kirby told him.
"Alright guys, lets train real hard today." Ash explained. All the Pokemon gave a cheer and got in position.
"Okay, Helios and Sky versus Tepig and Oshawott?" Kirby questioned. Ash gave a nod and looked at his Pokemon.
"Oshawott and Tepig, I choose you!" Ash yelled and both Pokemon stood by each other in front of him.
"Sky and Helios, get ready for battle." Kirby ordered. Sky landed on front of him and Helios jumped to his side.
"Cilan, can you referee?" Kirby questioned.
"Why of course." He said and stood up. He walked up to the group and raised his hands.
"Let this training session begin!" Cilan yelled.
"I'll start, Tepig, use Flame Charge on Sky, and Oshawott, use Aqua Jet on Helios!" Ash ordered. Tepig surrounded his body with fire while Oshawott coated himself in water and both launched themselves towards the other duo,
"Sky, fly away, and Helios, String Shot onto his leg to escape with him." Kirby ordered. Sky quickly took to the air and Helios shot a String Shot onto his leg, but accidentally pulled Sky back down towards the ground with him. Sky eyes widen when he was pulled down then was hit with a powerful Flame Charge and Helios tackled with a Aqua Jet. Both tumble backwards then stood up again. Sky glanced over to Helios and was confused.
{Why did you do that for?} Sky asked. Helios looked at Sky and sighed.
{Accident.} He said. Sky grunted at the mistake then looked at the opponents again.
"Oshawott, use Razor Shell! Tepig, use Heat Crash!" Ash commanded. Oshawott grabbed his scalchop on its stomach and it started to glow brightly. A light blue aura also appeared around the scalchop and Oshawott swung the scalchop once. When he did, the aura around the scalchop stretches and hardens behind it, forming into an energy blade, while Tepig jumped into the air and becomes surrounded by a sphere of yellow-orange flames.
"Helios, jump on Sky and use a Flamethrower Shield around him and Sky, use Aerial Ace to crash into them!" Kirby ordered. Helios String Shot himself onto Sky's back and the bird took off. Helios released five streams of fire around each other to create a giant fire ball. Sky speed up swiftly through the air and Helios was struggling to stay on his back until Sky went full speed and the bug flew off his back. The shield went down and Sky was confronted with a large crash on his back from Tepig and two slice attacks from Oshawott. Sky fell to the ground with a loud grunt then stood up.
{Helios, what are you doing?} Sky yelled.
{Fast.} He replied.
{What do you mean I was too fast?!} Sky screamed at him. Helios just looked away and shook his head. Kirby just stared at them conflicted then put his hands up.
"Can we take a break." Kirby asked Ash. The trainer gave a nod and Kirby ran up to them. "What's is it with you two?" He questioned. Sky was glaring into Helios eyes then turned around and walked away.
{It's nothing, we just need to talk. Just train without us.} Sky told him with Helios following him. Kirby just stared at them walk away then signaled Rammus and Zoey to come up and fight. Both Sky and Helios were alone under the tree and refuse to look at each other.
"Zoey and Rammus, get ready for battle!" Kirby told them. Both Zoey and Rammus came up and stared at Ash.
"Okay, Krokorok and Palpitoad, I choose you!" Ash threw out and both secondary evolution Pokemon came out. All four Pokemon stared at each then rush towards them.
After Training...
"Okay guys, lets that a break." Kirby told them. Every Pokemon slumped down in exhaustion and gave a sigh of relief while Kirby walked towards the other duo. He saw Sky sitting under the tree by himself with a furious face, but Helios was nowhere to be found.
"Sky, where's Helios?" Kirby questioned. Sky ignored to look at Kirby but smacked his beak.
{He left.} He whispered. Kirby looked at him confuse and got close.
"Come again?" Kirby asked him. Sky looked at Kirby annoyed at slapped his wings to get on a tree''s branch.
{I said, he left.} He repeated himself. Kirby eyes widen and hopped after Sky and grabbed him.
"What do you mean he left." Kirby interrogated him. Sky was looking away from him then sighed.
{We had a argument.} He answered.
"I didn't think Helios was capable of arguing." Kirby thought. "So what happen?" Kirby asked. Sky looked at Kirby and sighed.
Flashback...
Kirby was training Eva and Echo against Pikachu and Tranquill while both Sky and Helios were still under the tree in silence. Both Pokemon were thinking about what happen then Helios looked at the sky.
{Helios, why did you pulled me down.} The Tranquill questioned, breaking the silence, and making Helios look at him.
{Weak.} Helios told the bird. Sky glared at his friend and growled.
{So it's my fault that I was too weak to pull you up?} Sky yelled. Helios shook his head then looked away again. {What about when you were on me? Why did you fell of so easily?} Sky questioned. Helios hissed at the bird and glowered him.
{Fast.} He argued. Sky pointed beak at the bug and laughed.
{And you're calling me weak. You're complaining that I'm going to fast for you to hold on?} He mocked. Helios released small spored of fire and faced away.
{Stupid.} He whispered. Sky narrowed his eyes and got close.
{What did you call me?} He questioned. Helios faced him and release a large amount of fire.
{Stupid!} He yelled in face. Sky turned his wings bright blue and got it next to the bug's face.
{Take that back.} The bird told him. Helios just stared at the wing then looked at Sky's eyes.
{Leaving.} Helios could only say and turned around. He walked away from the bird slowly and disappeared into the woods.
{Whatever.} Sky whispered and closed his eyes.
Flashback Ended...
Sky was looking away at Kirby while the puff ball thought about it.
"Did you see where he went?" Kirby asked. Sky pointed to the left and Kirby jumped off the tree. He ran to the group and grabbed his bag.
"What's wrong Kirby? Its almost lunch time and you seem to be in a rush to leave." Cilan told him.
"I have a situation to deal with, but there's is no time to explain. Return Rammus and Zoey. Echo and Eva, follow me." Kirby ordered. He returned the couple back inside their Pokeballs and both Eva and Echo got on Kirby's head and he started to run.
"Wait for us Kirby!" Ash yelled and ran after him with Pikachu on his shoulder.
"Don't run so fast." Iris yelled and followed the two into the woods.
"Don't leave me behind!" Cilan screamed and ran after them. Echo was looking behind him but then looked towards the tree and found sky sitting on the branch still and then out of site when he entered the woods. Everyone kept running in the same direction until Cilan looked up ahead and gasp. "Stop!" He yelled and everyone skid to a halt.
"What is it?" Kirby questioned. Cilan pointed ahead and Kirby found a danger sign on it.
"A danger sign?" Ash questioned. Cilan took out his GPS and looked at the area they are at.
"I knew it, we're in Scolipede territory." He explained. Kirby eyes widen and he looked at Echo,
"Echo, Eva, I need you to send a message for me to Sky." Kirby requested.
{What is it?} Echo asked.
"Tell him to get over here, Helios is in danger." Kirby told the mouse. Echo nodded then got off of Kirby and ran back towards the camp site with Eva.
"What are you gonna do Kirby?" Iris asked. Kirby took out a light blue orb and looked series.
"I'm gonna try to find Helios." Kirby answered and tossed the orb in the air and opened is mouth, but Iris caught it and Kirby glared at her. "What are you doing?"
"Are you crazy?! You can't go in alone!" Iris yelled. Kirby tried to reach for the orb but Iris just put her hand high and Kirby just grunted.
"Well what am I suppose to do?" Kirby argued. Ash kneeled down to place his hand on Kirby and smiled.
"Let's wait for Sky instead." Ash suggested and Kirby sat down with a frown.
Helios...
The larva was crawling through the forest slowly with his head down without noticing the large Megapade rising up behind the bushes and glaring at the bug.
{Looks like someone doesn't know the meaning of 'Danger'.} One of the Scolipede told to his fellow members as they gather around Helios. One stepped in front of him and stopped him in place.
{Move.} Helios told them. Every Scolipede laughed at his command then one of them to lower their head to eye level.
{Try to make us move then.} It threaten. Helios release small fire spores from his red horns and looked at the Scolipede into its eyes.
{Gladly.}
Sky...
Sky was looking at the cloud and was grunting to himself.
[He'll be fine. Kirby went to get him back, and this whole thing will be over.] He thought. Sky lowered his until he heard bushes moving and looked over it.
{Who's there, show yourself!} He yelled. Both Eva and Echo came out of the bush and looked up at Sky. {Oh, its just you two.} He realize, but realize something. {Where's Kirby?} He asked.
{We have a problem Sky. Helios went into Scolipede territory.} Echo reported.
{And we need you to come with us and save him.} Eva added. Sky looked down and shook his head.
{I don't know.}
{What? What do you mean I don't know?} Eva questioned.
{I want to save him, but I'm against it too.} He answered.
{Helios is in danger and you're just gonna let him get hurt?} Eva wondered. Sky decided not to look in her eye but saw Echo climb up the tree.
{But isn't Helios your best friend?} Echo asked. Sky just looked over to the forest and closed his eyes.
Multiple Flashback...
Helios was sunbathing on the ground near Kirby's house while Sky was flying around. He spotted the Torch Pokemon sleeping on the ground and flew towards him.
{Yo.} He said and woke the bug up. He looked at the bird confuse and saw the smile on its face. {How are ya?} He questioned. The larva just shuffled around and close his eyes.
{Fine.} He answered.
{What are you doing?} He interrogated.
{Sleeping.} He replied. Sky just tilted his head and saw next to the bug.
{Do you mind if I relax with you?} He questioned. Helios just shrugged his shoulder and sighed.
{No.} Sky got comfortable then closed his eyes. Helios looked at the bird and chuckled under his breath.
Helios was on Sky's back and they were traveling across the sky together.
{So, what do we do now?} Sky questioned.
{Peace.} He simply said. Sky just looked ahead and nodded.
{You only say one word don't you?} Sky questioned. Helios shrugged his shoulder and kept looking at each cloud.
{Not really.} Helios argued.
{Oh wow, two words. That clearly a change.} Sky mocked. Helios rolled his eyes
{Sure.} He mocked. Sky scoffed at that and looked at him.
{Hey, don't get sarcastic with me.} Sky told him.
{Do you ever think we're ever gonna beat Kirby, just the two of us?} Sky questioned. Helios looked over to Blade and Echo and gave a nod.
{We can.} He simply said and Sky grinned.
{You're right, I shouldn't get my hopes down, so let's train together to beat him.} Sky motivated and Helios gave a nod.
Sky remained silent, but he stood up and looked at Echo.
{Lead me to them.} He told them. Echo got off the tree and ran with Eva next to him while Sky flew off and followed them from above.
Back with Kirby...
He was waiting for his Pokemon to come back and was gritting his teeth.
"Come on, where are you guys?" Kirby eagerly waited when he head a bird cry.
"Is that Sky?" Iris questioned. He looked behind him and found Sky flying above Echo and Eva.
"Finally." He whispered and ran up to them. "Nice job you two." Kirby told them and looked at Sky. Echo and Eva went next to Pikachu and looked at Kirby.
{What's the plan.} Sky questioned. Kirby ran up to Iris and snatched the sky blue orb back and looked at Sky.
"We're gonna go in and save Helios alone." Kirby explained and swallowed the orb.
Transformation in Process...
Kirby jumped in the air, but he fell down on a feather. He happily jumped on it for for a few seconds then jumped really high and started to spin around then transform with his red-pink blushes on his cheeks turn to short, red stripes and a Native American Chief hat that hat yellow, green, maroon, and tan feathers on and started to fly.
Transformation Complete.
"You guys go back to the camp site. We'll be back.." Kirby told them. Cilan grabbed Kirby's shoulder and shook his head.
"Kirby, its too dangerous to go in by yourself!" Cilan yelled. Kirby looked at Cilan threatening and pointed sharp feathers at him.
"I rather die then let any of my Pokemon get injured." He told Cilan and the connoisseur back up with his hands up against his chest. Kirby turned back to look at Sky and gave a nod. "Let's go Sky." He flapped his wings to lift himself up then went off into Scolipede Territory with Sky behind him.
Scolipede Territory...
Kirby and Sky were flapping their wings violently, trying to find the white furred Pokemon on the ground. Both continued to search until a loud explosion was heard ahead of them. Both Kirby and Sky gave each other nods and flew towards the explosion. They found five Scolipede on the ground and ten in a huge circle. Sky looked in between them and found Helios barely standing with faint purple on his face.
{Helios!} Sky yelled. Five Scolipede turned around to face the bird while Helios opened one eyes to see his friend.
{Looks like he brought back up.} One of the Scolipede said and face them.
{Four on that green bird, and four on that pink ball. Two of us will stay here with the larva.} One of the Scolipede commanded and each spread out.
"Sky, we're going to battle on our own, so spread out and get ready to battle." Kirby warned and the bird nodded. Kirby flew away from Sky and had four Scolipede follow him while Sky confronted four other Scolipede.
{You're gonna feel pain like your little friend over there.} It said and Sky glared at them.
{I'll show you pain! Aerial Ace!} Sky screamed and swooped down towards them. He struck each one with with a swift strike then flew back up. One of them fell to the ground with his eyes swirling while others winced in pain.
{You little punk. Scolipedes, Hyper Beam!} One of them yelled and each of them charge a black orb between their horns. The release a strong beam of energy towards Sky, who gracefully dodged it and faced the Scolipede.
{Air Slash!} Sky's wings glowed light blue and he flaps them violently, releasing multiple light blue glowing saw disc-like energy blades from his wings and striking two Scolipede down to the ground. [One left.] He thought and flew around the Scolipede's heads. It was looking at the bird carefully and its eyes glittered.
{Sludge Bomb!} It shouted and shot out a large purple ooze from its mouth and struck Sky's back. {Steamroller!} It continued and it spun really fast and rolled towards the falling, unconscious bird.
{WAKE UP!} Helios yelled out and Sky opened his eyes. He flapped his wings to fly back up and to avoid the rolling Scolipede. It stopped itself from rolling further out then turned to look at Sky.
{Toxic!} It release poisonous ooze from it mouth and Sky turned back around.
{Steel Wing!} He screamed. He turned his wings bright steel and put it i front of his body to block the ooze then opened his wings back up. Sky flew up higher in the air, then turns around. He flew straight down towards the Scolipede as his body surrounded itself in a clear aura with white energy around him. Scolipede eyes widen and was about to run, but Sky flew towards it at top speed. {Sky Attack!} He yelled and went through the Scolipede and flew back up. The Megapede eyes shrunk before it fell slowly to the ground and created a loud impact. Sky stared at the fainted Megapede then looked over to the two Scolipede around Helios.
{He defeated them.} It whispered to the other Scolipede.
{I see, and that puff ball easily beat them without and trouble.} The other added. Both stared over to Kirby, who had all four Scolipede stack in a pile and was looking at them. Both Scolipede gave each other a nod and stared at the struggling larva.
{Let's end him quickly!} The Scolipede suggested and both lifted their legs up. Sky's eyes widen and flew straight down.
{Nooooooooo!} He shouted and his body was surrounded in bright white light. His wings enhanced into a large form and a long, ribbon-like wattle grew from his head and down past its shoulders and his tail grew bigger. Sky flew towards Helios faster and swiped him up from Scolipede quickly and got next to Kirby. The light died down and revealed a new Pokemon in front of Kirby.
"Sky... you evolved!" Kirby yelled with excitement. Kirby took out his Pokedex and scanned Sky.
Unfezant, the Proud Pokémon and the evolved form of Tranquill. Male Unfezant threaten their opponents by swinging their heads. Gender is Male. Ability is Super Luck, Raises the critical-hit ratio of moves. Move set, Gust, Quick Attack, Air Cutter, Air Slash, Roost, Detect, Razor Wind and Sky Attack. Learned: Featherdance, Heat Wave, Giga Impact, and Tailwind. Egg Move set, Hypnosis and Steel Wing, unlocked.
Sky stared at his new formed for awhile then felt Helios move on his back. He saw the bug get off of him and looked back at him.
{Helios, you can't fight in your state.} Sky warned. Helios shook his head then looked at him seriously.
{Finish them.} Helios told his friend and Sky gave a nod.
{What do we do Kirby?} Sky questioned. Kirby thought about a plan then grinned.
"Follow my lead." Kirby ordered. Both flew around the Scolipede then surrounded them. Kirby gave a nod and swiftly flew towards them. "Aerial Ace!" He yelled. Sky swiftly followed up and flew towards them.
{Aerial Ace!} He screamed and both crossed the Scolipede and lifted them up. Kirby turned around with Sky and started to exchange blows onto both Scolipede while created a large tornado around themselves. Both Scolipede stayed in the tornado while Sky and Kirby went on top of the tornado.
"Wrath of the Heaven!" Kirby yelled and gave a powerful kick on one of the Scolipede's head and Sky did the same on the other one to bring them back to the ground. The slammed them to the ground and the tornado seized itself with both Kirby and Sky flying back up. Both Scolipede were on the ground with swirling eyes and Both Sky and Kirby landed back on the ground. Kirby reverted back to his original form and looked over to Helios. "Are you alright?" He asked. Helios gave a nod and coughed.
{Poisoned.} He said and Kirby gave a nod.
"Right. Sky, let's go back to the camp site." Kirby ordered and the puff ball got on Sky's back with Helios in his hands. Sky took off and flew towards the camp site.
At the Camp Site...
Everyone was waiting for Kirby to come back until the saw a large bird flying towards them.
"What Pokemon is that?" Ash questioned. Cilan was looking at it carefully and smiled.
"Its a Unfezant!" Cilan answered. Iris looked at its back and found a bit of pink on it.
"And Kirby's on it." She added. Ash and Cilan looked at Iris confused then paid attention to the bird back and found Kirby riding on top of it.
"It is Kirby." Ash realize. Echo and Eva just stared at Sky's new form then saw it land safely on the ground. Everyone ran up to Kirby quickly and the Puff Ball placed Helios on the ground. Kirby grabbed his bag to get out five Pecha Berries and smashed them in a bowl. He walked up to Helios and sat next to him.
"This will make you feel better pal." Kirby told him and the bug swallowed the medicine quickly. Helios gave a sigh of relief then looked at Kirby.
{Thanks.} He simply said.
"Don't thank me, just don't leave again." Kirby told him and the bug nodded. He looked over to Sky and crawled to him slowly. Sky stared at the bug and saw him lowered his head.
{Sorry.} He could only say. The Unfezant just shook his head and placed his wing on his chest.
{No, I'm sorry for everything Helios. It was my fault you ended up in this situation.} Sky apologized. Helios and Sky just stared at each other then laughed softly. {Let's just agree to put this behind us and start working together.} He proposed. Helios just nodded at the idea and got on Sky's back.
{Train.} He simply said and and Sky took off at top speed. Kirby just stared with a smile and Ash walked next to the Pokemon Trainer.
"So, your Tranquill evolved." Ash questioned. Kirby gave a nod and looked at Ash.
"Yep." He could simply say and started to walk towards the table. "Come on, I'm extremely hungry and I need to eat something." He informed and Ash followed him. Echo was staring at the two and smiled.
{Glad they worked things out.} He could simply say and walked towards the table too.
Pikachu564: Done!
Spark: Sky is at his final evolution stage!
Rick: Epic, now about that Oshawott.
Pikachu564: The Oshawott will be in a future chapter I'm planning. It involves the Dragonspiral Tower and that's all I'm gonna tell you.
Leafeon: Boo!
Pikachu564: Shut up! Now the next chapter will be about the the 6th Gym Battle against Skyla.
Data: Nice way to end it.
Jude: I don't know, I might get excited for it.
Pikachu564: Be quiet. Now lets end the chapter. Lucky, if you will.
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