She was one with the Sea Rewrite available under the same name

by quiet princess

"You're like the sea, wild and unpredictable. You have no moral compass, so what could you even know?" Was something her father once told her, it was until her life dropped her into a hole she couldn't climb out of, that she lived by that principle. Jasper/OC. Terrible summary, because I'm not good at this, but give it a shot. [[Story is being rewritten]]

8. Chapter 8

I will be rewriting this story entirely.

I started writing it in 2015 as a way to expand my English knowledge and I am not happy with how the plot has been shaped and how unavailable the character seems to have grown to the Cullen's and other characters. And while I understand, that for some, it may be a great plot line/lead, to me it feels like I'm trying to force something.

I had a vision for this story and I lost it after I took a prolonged break from writing and fanfiction in general. As such, I will be rewriting this story so it is more comfortable for me and possibly, for the reader, in hopes that it feels less forced.

Any opinions, reviews, etc. would be greatly appreciated. I will aim to post the current rewritten chapters within May or June, hope you guys have a good week, thanks to those who have stuck around.

The rewritten ver. will still be called; "She was one, with the Sea"

Thank you all for sticking around so long, I appreciate it very much, hopefully I'll be able to interest you guys with the rewrite as well.