Hello everypony! I'm sorry to say that this is not chapter 20 but it is a REALLY important message, so please read it. But before I begin, I'd like to acknowledge the help I've had in getting this far. First, I'd like to thank you all so much for your continued support. I'd also like to give a special thanks to Deviant Artist Angelectra for you're wonderful advice! You'd never know how grateful I am for it. Next, I'd like to give a huge hug to my outstanding co-author: Author97! Without you, my grammar would surely be catastrophic. And one final thanks to Fanfiction Author bluecatcinema! Without your wonderful comment, I would've given up long ago. Okay, now we can begin the important part. It has been pointed out to me that I've made a few oofs in my story, and I reread and notices further issues with it. So, I've gone ahead and fixed them for you all. For those of you that don't want to go back and reread everything, I've made a list of all of the changes down below. So let's get to it!
First: It has been mentioned that I had too much info in the first paragraph of Chapter 1, so I spread out some of that info throughout the story.
Second: In that same paragraph, there's a lack of context to what's going on. This is because the first sentence is saying: "Hey! This is what's going on but before we get to that. This is the story of how we got there." Which is also the explanation to Nightshade's lack of motive.
Third: The spontaneous pregnancy. Yeah, I've put the reasoning behind it in the foot note of Chapter 1.
Fifth: Chapter 8 was a duplicate of Chapter 7 so I went back and changed that slight problem.
Sixth: In the backstory special, Nightshade appeared to be acting very strange. That was because Duskfire was possessed by a Night Mare (a living shadow) and in the dream realm, that Night Mare had to hide from Luna so it wouldn't be destroyed. The behavior was Duskfire's personality poking through.
Seventh: In the end of Chapter 15, I added in a bit more info to help you understand why Dawnfrost knew Duskfire just then and not sooner.
And Finally: I gave no context behind the name "Solaria." Don't worry you learn why the stranger said that in the next few chapters.
Well, I hope this answered all of your questions. If anypony notices any problems, has any advice, has a request, wants to make any suggestions, or needs information, please leave a comment to let me know. I'd rather have negative comments than no comments.
So until next time, I'll see y'all on the brighter side of everything!