This chapter was always meant to be replaced, so I've done that now. (5-6-19)


Dear authors:

We are well aware that you like to pair us with original characters. However, if you want to maintain any sense of uncertainty as to which of us your character will be paired with, so as to let it develop more naturally, we highly recommend changing the way in which you write our first meetings.

If she refers to Edmund as having "black hair and brown eyes" and then speaks of Peter as having "eyes the cerulean blue of the ocean on a sunny day and hair the color of sunshine on fields of wheat", or similar language, it is immediately clear she will end up with Peter.

Likewise, if Peter has "blond hair and blue eyes" and Edmund has "midnight black hair and eyes the color of deepest onyx", or similar language, it is immediately clear she will end up with Edmund.

In addition, if her first interaction with either of us is to bicker with him, we have observed that the brother she bickers with is the brother she will marry.

Please consider this.

~Peter and Edmund