Just A Game? (A Vampire Academy Story)

by A.Estrella

Rose Hathaway is a 21 years old and is a guardian for her best friend Lissa. She has had no sexual interaction before but has had a couple of boyfriends… this gives Liss new ideas when she hires a 'somebody' for Rose to get her out of her comfort zone. but when Rose is mysteriously kidnapped why does this 'somebody' try and find her? could it be more than just a game?

7. Chapter 7

Sorry this isn't a chapter! I know I know don't shoot me! But I need to talk about some things. I have gotten a few reviews from guests who are over criticizing my work.

So as a writer I make mistakes and its okay to criticize, but by over criticizing I mean someone told me flat out to delete this story that is sucks. Another person told me it didn't go as she thought it would so she's not following the story anymore because I didn't write what she wanted me to write. (not sure if it was a guy or girl it was a "guest") it is NOT okay to JUDGE! It IS OKAY to criticize in a HEALTHY way. Okay? Okay.

So since we covered that, do you think I should continue this story? And if even one of you says yes I'll be at my email waiting for the reviews on the "chapter" and I will start writing immediately, As in seconds after you comment.

Love you all! –xoxoxo11

Thanks to all of the loyal readers out there you mean the world to me?