My A/N More things to go over; actually, there's just one thing to go over, magic135, thanks I got plans for Yui in later chapters and I hope you'll like them, as for Saki and her friends I don't know what I'll do right now. Okay before we start, sorry it's taken me so long to update I've get a lot on my plate with school, work, and writers block causing me to fall behind in most of my stories. Reviews are a factor as well, few reviews = little motivation, but I will continue my stories until they are finished.
P.S. Lala and Rito will sometimes react to reviews since it is 'her' story :)
Lala's A/N Rito is laying on his bed reading a book on plants when the door to his room opens suddenly, "Hey, beast!" A pink haired girl in pigtails shouts as she enters, "What did you do to big sis?" She asks harshly with her hands on her hips.
"Nana?" He looks over to here, "I haven't done anything to Lala." He says sitting up and setting the book down.
She glares at him, "Then why does she seem so depressed lately?" She asks, "Big sis has been sitting at her computer, looking very sad for several days now." She says.
Rito stands up, "I guess I should check on her then." He says walking to the door.
"Okay, just don't try any 'funny' stuff, because I'm watching you Yuuki Rito, always watching." She says as Rito walks out.
Hmm, that's weird. I think I've heard that line somewhere before. He thinks as her enters the sisters place, "Lala, are you decent?" He asks knocking on her door before opening it, "I'm coming in." He says as he enters. He looks around and sees Lala leaning on her desk starring at her computer screen, "Hey, Lala. What's going on?" He asks.
Lala lifts her head and looks at him, "Oh, hi Rito." She says then looks away, "Rito, do you think I'm a bad story writer?" She asks.
"What? Lala what makes you think that?" Rito asks shocked.
"My last chapter only got one review, I don't think readers like my story." She says sadly lowering her head.
Rito puts a hand on her shoulder, "Don't be silly, Lala." He says to her getting her to look at him, "Just because your story doesn't get a lot of reviews doesn't mean they don't like it." He tells her, "I mean, I like your story and I haven't reviewed it yet." He says turning away while rubbing his neck, "Besides, I like hearing you read it to me." He says with a light blush.
Lala smiles and sits up, "You do?" She asks to which he nods, "Okay then. I finished chapter four early this morning, do you want to hear it?" She asks.
"I said I do." He says sitting down.
Lala's FanFiction
Chapter 4
The following Sunday, Rito is sitting at the front door putting his shoes on, "I'm off then." He calls.
Lala then walks up behind him, "Where are you going, Rito?" She asks.
"I'm going over to help Dad with his work." He answers looking over his shoulder, "He always asks me to help when he's in a pinch. If I say 'no' to him, he won't give me any monthly allowance, so I don't have much of a chose but to go and help." He says standing up.
"I see." Lala says. She then follows Rito outside unaware they are being followed by an odd looking fly, "What does Rito's Papa do?" She asks.
"Dad is a..."
Meanwhile in an apartment labeled 'Studio Saibai' a young man walks up to another man with spiky black hair holding some papers, "Sensei, I'm done with the background." He says handing the papers to his Sensei.
"Alright, good work." He says taking them from him. The door bell suddenly rings, "He's finally here." He says setting the papers down, walks to the door, and opens it, "Hey! Welcome, Rito. We don't have much time. Come on in." He then notices Lala standing next to Rito and just stares at her.
"Nice to meet you, Rito's Papa!" She says with energy. She then looks at him head to toe, "So this is Rito's Papa, huh? You don't look like Rito very much." She says stepping back.
"Rito... What's going on." He asks with a serious expression.
Rito looks at Lala annoyed, "I told her not to come, but..."
"Idiot! If you were gonna bring a girl over, you should've said so first!" He says with a goofy grin, "Nice to meet you too, I'm Rito's Papa." He says letting them in, "So, you're Lala-chan. I heard a lot about you from Mikan." He says as they walk further in, "Well, an alien is staying at our house. The world sure is becoming more and more universal!" He says as he walks her to his work area.
Why is my family so frank about aliens? Rito thinks as he walks behind them.
They enter his work space where his three assistants are hard at work, "It's a dirty workplace, but go ahead and look around as you please!" Saibai says.
Lala walks further in, "Wow, it's really dirty." Lala comments looking around.
"Lala-sama, that's impolite." Peke scolds her maker.
Saibai then leans over to his son, "She's a cute girl. I envy you, Rito." He tells him.
Rito looks at his dad, "What are you talking about?" He asks.
Saibai just smiles and puts his arm around Rito, "Don't pretend to be innocent. I heard from Mikan that the two of you sleep together every night." He says.
Rito steps away, "Huh!?"
"Maaan, being young is so nice." Saibai says like a giddy school girl.
Rito glares at him, "You're misunderstanding the whole situation! I gave Lala a separate place to sleep! But in the morning, she's always in my bed naked... Huh? No! I don't mean it like that!" He says trying to explain the situation.
Saibai just smiles, "Don't be shy. It's good to be so full of spirit!" He says. Then turns his expression serious, "But... be sure to be responsible of what you've done as a man, okay?"
Rito glares at his father getting in his face, "It's not that!" He growls.
Saibai then grabs Rito and sits him down, "Now, let's get to work... Rito! Ink this page!" He says handing Rito some pages.
"Listen to me, Dad!" Rito says just before he starts. Moments later, ...Dad's manga is deep as always... and he has three series going at the same time. No wonder his schedule is so packed. He thinks looking over at his dad after inking several pages.
Lala walks over to Saibai, "Rito's Papa, do you want me to help you too?" She asks.
Saibai turns to her, "Oh, Lala-chan. Thank you for the offer, but can you draw pictures?" He asks.
"Yes, I can." Lala says grabbing a piece of paper and a pan, "Ta da! Look, it's Rito!" She says showing a crud drawing of Rito causing his father to laugh loudly, "Huh? Is it not good?" She asks looking at her picture.
Rito stands up and grabs Lala, "Lala! You'll just be bothering Dad's work, so just go to the other room and go have some fun." He says pushing her to the other room.
"Eh..." Lala enters the other room with shelves of books, "Waah, there are so many kinds of books." She says wide eye looking around.
"They're probably used as a reference to draw pictures." Peke says.
"Looks fun!" Lala says picking up a book and opening it, "I can probably learn anything about the earth from these." She says flipping through the pages.
"Lala-sama, can you read them?" Peke asks
"Yep! I've learned most Earthling letters." Lala answers. "It's the planet where Rito was born, so I need to learn more stuff about the Earth." She says.
"...I think I'll pass." Peke says uninterested.
"Uwaaaaah, I can't take it any more!" A man yells in the other room.
"Idiot! If you have time to whine, speed up!" Saibai's voice and be heard.
Lala pokes her head out, "I Can't do it... I can't do it like you Sensei..." The man says with his hands on his lowered head.
Lala walks up to Rito, "Rito, what's going on?" She asks.
Rito turns to her, "Ah... Things aren't progressing very well." He informs her.
"The deadline is midnight tonight, but it'll take another six hours to finish with our current pace... Losing four hours... It's pretty bad." Saibai says very seriously.
Lala looks over at the other two assistants, "We had other work to do this time, too..." One of them tells the other.
"Shit, if only we could work at the same speed as Sensei..." The other says.
"I don't really get it, but if your hands move faster, will it be better?" Lala asks them.
They turn to her, "Hrm? Yeah, it will, but..." One says but stops as Lala pulls out she 'phone' and a wand like object with black wing appears out of no where, she then walks to the man's chair.
Rito notices Lala, "Hey, Lala! What are you doing to everyone's chair!?" He asks as she attaches metal arms and hands to the back of the chair.
"Modifying them a little." She says moving to the next chair.
"Modifying!?" He asks, I... I got a bad feeling about this. He thinks as she works.
Lala finishes, "Right! Here we go!" She says activating them.
The arms then attach themselves to the assistants, "Th-this is... Amazing! I can draw really fast!" They says as they draw fast and I mean really fast,
Saibai looks on in admiration, "Oooh! Good job, Lala-chan!" He thanks her, "Right, we can do this! Guys, let's put in our last spurt!" He says sitting down and getting to work himself, going at his top speed.
"Roger!" The assistants shout picking up speed.
Rito looks on in astonishment, Lala's machines are doing well... so apparently things do go well once in a while. Then I guess they won't be needing me anymore. He thinks as Lala starts cheering them on, "I'll go ahead and make coffee for everyone..." He tells them walking to the kitchen, unaware he is being followed by a fly.
Rito is in the kitchen making coffee while being watched by the fly that's near the door. Suddenly, the door opens violently hitting the fly, "Rito! We're done!" Saibai shouts coming in holding the finished work.
Rito turns to him, "What? You're done... already?" He asks shocked.
Saibai just nods, "Yeah! thanks to Lala-chan, we easily met our deadline in record time!" He tells him grabbing him by the shoulder, "Thanks to Lala-chan and her machines, we can draw up a whole volume each day." He says with a laugh and a grin.
They then finish the coffee and walk back into the work space to find it empty except for Lala, "Hey, Lala. Where'd the others go?" Rito asks.
Lala looks over at them, "They left a few minutes ago saying, 'we quit'." She says with a smile, "Is it earth custom to say, 'we quit' after a hard days work?" She asks.
The two Yuuki boys stare at her in shock, "No, that's bad!" Rito yells.
Lala looks at them curiously, "What's bad?" She asks.
"They quit! That's what's bad! Now how am I going met my other deadlines later this month without extra hands?" Saibai yells in a panic rubbing his scalp hard with his hands.
"If you need manual labor, I can help with that." She says pulling out her phone and walking out of the room. Father and son look at each other. She then returns, "Your new assistants will be here later today." She says with a smile.
"Really!? Thank you Lala-chan." Saibai says bowing. He then turns to Rito, "Lucky brat." He whispers.
"What?" Rito asks turning to his dad.
"I said, you're free to go, thanks for all your hard work today son." He says turning away.
Later on the way home, "Hey Lala. Who did you call to replace the three assistants?" Rito asks.
"Zastin and the others." She answers with a skip to her step.
Figures. Rito thinks.
The next day Rito is running towards school, "I can't believe Lala left without me." He says running past in intersection and almost hits someone, "Whoe!? Sorry... Run-chan?"
"Oh, good morning, Rito-kun." She says stepping and posturing herself. "You running late too?" She asks.
"Yeah, Lala left earlier without me." He says rubbing the back of his head, "Hmm, where's Kyouko-chan?" He asks looking around.
"She had to leave early, you know for class rep stuff." She says with a smile, Actually, she called Lala-chan to meet her before school so I can get some time alone with Rito. she thinks to herself.
They walk and Rito tells her the events that transpired the day before, "...So know Zastin is working for my dad." He tells her as they enter the school.
"Classic Lala-chan, I'll give her that." She says just before they enter the classroom. Everyone is in, but a new desk is at the back of the room near the center.
Rito looks over at it, "I wonder why there's an extra desk." He says out loud.
"Good Morning, class." Honekawa says as he enters and the class sits. "Now, before we begin, I have an announcement." He says taking a breath, "It would seem that we have a new transfer student." He says then turns his head, "You may come in now." He says.
The door opens and a boy with white hair on his head and black hair on his neck walks in. He walks to the front and then scans the room with his hot pink eyes and locks them on his target, "Hello, my name is Ren Elsie Jewelria and I have come to make Lala Satan Deviluke my bride." He says with manly confidence.
Lala's A/N "So, what do you think?" Lala asks after she finished reading.
"It was good, shorter then your other chapters, but it was still good." He says sitting up, "But I have just one question." He says holding up his index finger, "What was up with that fly?" He asks.
"Oh that, it was Priuma's spaceship." She says like it was nothing.
"Who's Priuma?" Rito asks.
"He was one of my husband candidates before he disappeared from the galaxies eyes." She says. She then looks away and puts her index finger on her chin, "I wonder what ever happened to him." She thinks out loud.
How should I know. He thinks, "Lala you should go see Nana, she's been worried about you." He says standing up.
"Okay, maybe we all should take a bath together." She says as she walks past Rito.
"I'll pass on that." He says as he follows her out.
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