# Fixing fan fic #
Bella's POV Everyone watched victoria's head drop to the ground. There was silence, except a dripping sound from the back of the cave."Shit" Laurent cursed then flew out the cave like a bat out of hell."well…this Isabella is the reason why I'm the leader of this group" James smirked before pulling a chair up. Jasper hissed long and low;"Don't…speak…to….my….mate!" he set his glare on James."ohh so scarey major!" James taunted wiggling his fingers."You're a fool" Jasper laughed loudly clapping his hands like a child."I shall enjoy killing you" he added."I think it might be the other way around…pal" James laughed loudly and I winced."I'M away on a little trip, be back in a few days…try not break anything Major" James chuckled and smirked at me, then was silence"Jazz?" I whispered…no response."Jasper?…"I whispered lowly, fear creeping into my growled in response."Jasper…please don't be angry with me!" I cried out, bursting the silence"I didn't mean to lead you into this!, away from the family! And you got hurt! I can never forgive myself!" I cried, my heart breaking. Jasper ran over to me and held me close in his lap."Shhh my mate, I can never be disappointed with you…and there is nothing to forgive!, it was not your fault those bastards found us! I think you have been very brave, please do not cry my mate" he purred soothingly. I sniffed loudly."Now what Jasper?" I whispered into his chest."Now….we wait" he said stronglyA week has passed and we have not been found by the Cullens…and James has not returned. I can séance Jasper getting weaker as the days draw on…were both starving and we cant get out. Most nights we just sit in silence, holding each other…other nights I tell him stories of my human life as he keeps watch. Im wondering if anyone will ever come…I was in the middle of a sentence when there was the sound of vampires running towards us, Jasper crouched in front of me and growled, the two vampires approached was James…and he had a hissed hatefully at the smirked at him."Maria" he spat her name out like poison."Major" she purred "I have missseeeeeddd you" she smiled evily."I wish I could say the same, but my mama raised me not to lie" Jasper responded and she recalled like she had been slapped."Show your maker some MANNERS Whitlock! I am a Lady!" she spat in his direction."I regret having a maker like you, as for the lady part…don't make me laugh…you are more animal than make or female" he growled out, his patience was purred and thrust her breasts forward trying to be sexy, I scoffed and rolled my eyes…she raised her arched eye brow at me then at Jasper."Is thissss your mate, Major?" She Hissed at him, her face transforming into rage."I AM his mate, and stop talking about me like I aint here bitch!" I responded before Jasper set her eyes on me, I could feel jelousy radiating from hissed at me from the corner of his mouth;"Shh now my mate, please stay out of this!""This is my fight to" I responded quickly."not with her" he whispered."were in this together Jazz…"I whispered and squeezed his shoulder."Cute, really , please continue" Maria said sarcastically."we would BUT this cave doesn't really set the mood" I replied snarkily."oohhh FISTEY" Maria gritted her teeth in annoyance."Isabella"…Jasper hissed at me warningly"I got it" I replied formally."What took you so long James?" Jasper smiled hatefully at him in the corner of the room. James shrugged"Why hurry?" he responded, smirking."you wanted to wait to weak us, well ill tell you this James…your plan failed" Jasper laughed sourly."did it major?…did it really?…or is that another lie?" Maria growled."I lied, to save my coven!" he roared at the bitch across the room,"you lied to save your own skin!" she screamed back."that is my past!" he jerked forward angrily"and now your present!" she they had a stare off."Please bitch" I scoffed at Maria."do enlighten us, newborn" Maria smirked."you feel lust over Jasper and James…you're a whore" I whispered the last part. She shrugged and crossed her arms across her chest. Then she laughed like a crazy woman;"You love that monster in front of you!" she squealed like a kid"Jasper is not a monster! The people who he has murdered…that was YOU THAT FORCED HIM!" I roared at her. She rolled her eyes."jasper was a savage killer!, he fucked innocent girls and got them pregnant so they gave birth to vampires!" she laughed."he was my best killer, my best hunting buddy and my best FUCKING buddy…we used to fuck in front of the newborns, and if any of them touched themselves, we would kill them! He killed millions! He killed the Volturri's wifes! The volturri is even afraid of the major! But not me, because deep down, I know he still loves me!" she laughed crazily. I shook my head in pity."you are delusional..."I spoke in horrorJasper chuckled and Maria was flustered."Bitch watch your manners! Or I will tame you!" she roared."Bitch, seriously…who did your make up?…a hobo?!" I laughed happily and Jasper laughed too."I'm warning you…" she hissed."You have no power Maria…your sisters abandoned you…you lost the wars, you were unable to train newborns without me…your DONE!" Jasper laughed lowly and I giggled."reaaaalllllyyyyy?" Maria hissed out with a smirk on her face."is that why I killed your coven?" she laughed crazily and Jasper roared in pain."No…." he whispered in agony."yes!" she hissed in victory"not…possible…." Jasper breathed pulled up a chair and sat down gracefully."it was around 2 years ago now, I was with…ah yes! I has found this amazing vampire called collin! He controlled the weather!, we had made a nice little group of heavily trained newborns!and we approached your coven, thinking you were with them still!, I was hoping to take you on our side and if not, cut your head off and have it for our army to show others! ANYWAY, peter and whats his mates name?….Charlotte?…they came out then Amy (authors note-new people in the Whitlock Coven!) Amelia, Rory and Mathew all came outside and we had a little battle and yadda yadda….the only survivors were peter, charlotte and amy…we circled them with fire that we had created from lightning from collins power, ANYHOW!…peter begged for Charlotte and Amys life, we had an agreement...because of peter and charlottes gifts, we let them live...killing amy.!" she laughed evily, long and hard."we agreed they would check in every year with me, and they would train my newborns for 1 month. If not, i would get. Tracker and kill them" she giggled."you MONSTER! I HOPE YOU DIE IN HELL YOU EVIL CUNT ASS BITCH! I SHALL RIP YOU APART! HOW DARE YOU! THE MAJORS COVEN? YOU SHALL PAY YOU SLEEZY ASS WHORE!" Jasper roared, my ears felt like they were bleeding. I sobbed tearlessly for the loss of Jaspers Coven."Shut it Whitlock!" Maria Snapped."ohh its on bitch!" I hissed, baring my teeth."Ill take you down like I took them!"I looked inside her thoughts;I shall Capture that newborn and kill her slowly as Jasper watches…then stick his head on the end of a stick! Yes!"Jazz, she wants to kill me in front of you then cut your head off and put it on a stick" I whispered at him, Maria's head snapped up."you….have a gift?" she asked slowly."I have more than one" I replied, vainly."Incredible…what are these gifts"? she asked in wonder."I" I Announced "can absorb others gifts…I have Jaspers gift, I can read minds, I can see the future and now, thanks to james…I can track too" I smirked, Maria roared and grabbed James around the throat"how dare you give her your power!" she screamed"I didn't mean it!" james pleaded. Maria let go of him."let them out" she waved her hands towards the cage we were in."but the major…"james wavered."is nothing! Now LET THEM OUT!" She laughed opened the cage and all hell went loose….Jasper flung himself towards Maria the same time I launched at James…Jasper and Maria started circling each other….eye to eye and me and james scuffled and rumbled around on the floor.I yelped as I felt james teeth bite me and I grabbed his nutsack and ripped it right out, he howled in anger and agony and screamed and ran towards me again, I kicked him in the face and he flew into the wall…then zipped right next to me and yanked my hair and I screamed in pain…I bit his ankles as I was upside down, and he dropped me…I launched myself onto his back and prepaired to rip his head off but he flung me forward, I rubbed my eyes as dust entered them and suddenly James was on top of me, grinning. Then he grabbed my breast and squeezed so hard I thought I might die, I clawed at his hand,and cried out…then I ripped his ear off and he let go, I shoved him onto the floor and kicked him in the face and ripped his leg off, he bit my wrist and I hissed and bitch slapped managed to rip one of my fingers off and I cried out as my finger was thrown into the corner…then I dug my nails into the flesh at his lips and ripped them off to. I giggled like a crazy person then ripped his head off. I sighed in relief for a moment before I remembered jasper! I surveyed the was losing…even with all his rage he was to weak, he currently had a missing ear, a missing nose, scratches and bites everywhere and a badly damaged ankle so he was had a arm missing and some bites…and she was still winning. She was currently crouched over jasper so I flew on her back and tried to rip her head off, but she flung me away…but not until I grabbed her hair and we both landed in the same pile at the wall… she spat in my face and threw me against the wall, her teeth biting my neck I screamed in pain at each new bite…jasper came over and peeled maria away from me and ripped her cheek open. Venom oozed from the new wound and it was gross!Jasper roared and charged towards her, trying to get a grip of her,
but she was to fast! She smashed my skull against the wall when I launched on her face and venom as leaking out…maria laughed slowly"Failures…both of you…" she giggled like a mental patient… tutted at jasper;"this could have been ALLLL avoided if you had just stayed with the army" she stroked his cheek and he growled."I regret nothing!" and he spat in her face, she slapped him and ripped his arms off…."goodnight Major"….she smiled them grabbed his exact same moment I yanked her head off.I sighed in relief and hugged jasper hard…"were alive, were alive, were alive!" I cried out in joy but jasper made no sound."jazz?" I asked him warily."im a failure." he mumbled "I never avenged Amy or...Matthew...Amelia...Rory…im…im" and then he passed out….
Bella's POV Everyone watched victoria's head drop to the ground. There was silence, except a dripping sound from the back of the cave."Shit" Laurent cursed then flew out the cave like a bat out of hell."well…this Isabella is the reason why I'm the leader of this group" James smirked before pulling a chair up. Jasper hissed long and low;"Don't…speak…to….my….mate!" he set his glare on James."ohh so scarey major!" James taunted wiggling his fingers."You're a fool" Jasper laughed loudly clapping his hands like a child."I shall enjoy killing you" he added."I think it might be the other way around…pal" James laughed loudly and I winced."I'M away on a little trip, be back in a few days…try not break anything Major" James chuckled and smirked at me, then was silence"Jazz?" I whispered…no response."Jasper?…"I whispered lowly, fear creeping into my growled in response."Jasper…please don't be angry with me!" I cried out, bursting the silence"I didn't mean to lead you into this!, away from the family! And you got hurt! I can never forgive myself!" I cried, my heart breaking. Jasper ran over to me and held me close in his lap."Shhh my mate, I can never be disappointed with you…and there is nothing to forgive!, it was not your fault those bastards found us! I think you have been very brave, please do not cry my mate" he purred soothingly. I sniffed loudly."Now what Jasper?" I whispered into his chest."Now….we wait" he said stronglyA week has passed and we have not been found by the Cullens…and James has not returned. I can séance Jasper getting weaker as the days draw on…were both starving and we cant get out. Most nights we just sit in silence, holding each other…other nights I tell him stories of my human life as he keeps watch. Im wondering if anyone will ever come…I was in the middle of a sentence when there was the sound of vampires running towards us, Jasper crouched in front of me and growled, the two vampires approached was James…and he had a hissed hatefully at the smirked at him."Maria" he spat her name out like poison."Major" she purred "I have missseeeeeddd you" she smiled evily."I wish I could say the same, but my mama raised me not to lie" Jasper responded and she recalled like she had been slapped."Show your maker some MANNERS Whitlock! I am a Lady!" she spat in his direction."I regret having a maker like you, as for the lady part…don't make me laugh…you are more animal than make or female" he growled out, his patience was purred and thrust her breasts forward trying to be sexy, I scoffed and rolled my eyes…she raised her arched eye brow at me then at Jasper."Is thissss your mate, Major?" She Hissed at him, her face transforming into rage."I AM his mate, and stop talking about me like I aint here bitch!" I responded before Jasper set her eyes on me, I could feel jelousy radiating from hissed at me from the corner of his mouth;"Shh now my mate, please stay out of this!""This is my fight to" I responded quickly."not with her" he whispered."were in this together Jazz…"I whispered and squeezed his shoulder."Cute, really , please continue" Maria said sarcastically."we would BUT this cave doesn't really set the mood" I replied snarkily."oohhh FISTEY" Maria gritted her teeth in annoyance."Isabella"…Jasper hissed at me warningly"I got it" I replied formally."What took you so long James?" Jasper smiled hatefully at him in the corner of the room. James shrugged"Why hurry?" he responded, smirking."you wanted to wait to weak us, well ill tell you this James…your plan failed" Jasper laughed sourly."did it major?…did it really?…or is that another lie?" Maria growled."I lied, to save my coven!" he roared at the bitch across the room,"you lied to save your own skin!" she screamed back."that is my past!" he jerked forward angrily"and now your present!" she they had a stare off."Please bitch" I scoffed at Maria."do enlighten us, newborn" Maria smirked."you feel lust over Jasper and James…you're a whore" I whispered the last part. She shrugged and crossed her arms across her chest. Then she laughed like a crazy woman;"You love that monster in front of you!" she squealed like a kid"Jasper is not a monster! The people who he has murdered…that was YOU THAT FORCED HIM!" I roared at her. She rolled her eyes."jasper was a savage killer!, he fucked innocent girls and got them pregnant so they gave birth to vampires!" she laughed."he was my best killer, my best hunting buddy and my best FUCKING buddy…we used to fuck in front of the newborns, and if any of them touched themselves, we would kill them! He killed millions! He killed the Volturri's wifes! The volturri is even afraid of the major! But not me, because deep down, I know he still loves me!" she laughed crazily. I shook my head in pity."you are delusional..."I spoke in horrorJasper chuckled and Maria was flustered."Bitch watch your manners! Or I will tame you!" she roared."Bitch, seriously…who did your make up?…a hobo?!" I laughed happily and Jasper laughed too."I'm warning you…" she hissed."You have no power Maria…your sisters abandoned you…you lost the wars, you were unable to train newborns without me…your DONE!" Jasper laughed lowly and I giggled."reaaaalllllyyyyy?" Maria hissed out with a smirk on her face."is that why I killed your coven?" she laughed crazily and Jasper roared in pain."No…." he whispered in agony."yes!" she hissed in victory"not…possible…." Jasper breathed pulled up a chair and sat down gracefully."it was around 2 years ago now, I was with…ah yes! I has found this amazing vampire called collin! He controlled the weather!, we had made a nice little group of heavily trained newborns!and we approached your coven, thinking you were with them still!, I was hoping to take you on our side and if not, cut your head off and have it for our army to show others! ANYWAY, peter and whats his mates name?….Charlotte?…they came out then Amy (authors note-new people in the Whitlock Coven!) Amelia, Rory and Mathew all came outside and we had a little battle and yadda yadda….the only survivors were peter, charlotte and amy…we circled them with fire that we had created from lightning from collins power, ANYHOW!…peter begged for Charlotte and Amys life, we had an agreement...because of peter and charlottes gifts, we let them live...killing amy.!" she laughed evily, long and hard."we agreed they would check in every year with me, and they would train my newborns for 1 month. If not, i would get. Tracker and kill them" she giggled."you MONSTER! I HOPE YOU DIE IN HELL YOU EVIL CUNT ASS BITCH! I SHALL RIP YOU APART! HOW DARE YOU! THE MAJORS COVEN? YOU SHALL PAY YOU SLEEZY ASS WHORE!" Jasper roared, my ears felt like they were bleeding. I sobbed tearlessly for the loss of Jaspers Coven."Shut it Whitlock!" Maria Snapped."ohh its on bitch!" I hissed, baring my teeth."Ill take you down like I took them!"I looked inside her thoughts;I shall Capture that newborn and kill her slowly as Jasper watches…then stick his head on the end of a stick! Yes!"Jazz, she wants to kill me in front of you then cut your head off and put it on a stick" I whispered at him, Maria's head snapped up."you….have a gift?" she asked slowly."I have more than one" I replied, vainly."Incredible…what are these gifts"? she asked in wonder."I" I Announced "can absorb others gifts…I have Jaspers gift, I can read minds, I can see the future and now, thanks to james…I can track too" I smirked, Maria roared and grabbed James around the throat"how dare you give her your power!" she screamed"I didn't mean it!" james pleaded. Maria let go of him."let them out" she waved her hands towards the cage we were in."but the major…"james wavered."is nothing! Now LET THEM OUT!" She laughed opened the cage and all hell went loose….Jasper flung himself towards Maria the same time I launched at James…Jasper and Maria started circling each other….eye to eye and me and james scuffled and rumbled around on the floor.I yelped as I felt james teeth bite me and I grabbed his nutsack and ripped it right out, he howled in anger and agony and screamed and ran towards me again, I kicked him in the face and he flew into the wall…then zipped right next to me and yanked my hair and I screamed in pain…I bit his ankles as I was upside down, and he dropped me…I launched myself onto his back and prepaired to rip his head off but he flung me forward, I rubbed my eyes as dust entered them and suddenly James was on top of me, grinning. Then he grabbed my breast and squeezed so hard I thought I might die, I clawed at his hand,and cried out…then I ripped his ear off and he let go, I shoved him onto the floor and kicked him in the face and ripped his leg off, he bit my wrist and I hissed and bitch slapped managed to rip one of my fingers off and I cried out as my finger was thrown into the corner…then I dug my nails into the flesh at his lips and ripped them off to. I giggled like a crazy person then ripped his head off. I sighed in relief for a moment before I remembered jasper! I surveyed the was losing…even with all his rage he was to weak, he currently had a missing ear, a missing nose, scratches and bites everywhere and a badly damaged ankle so he was had a arm missing and some bites…and she was still winning. She was currently crouched over jasper so I flew on her back and tried to rip her head off, but she flung me away…but not until I grabbed her hair and we both landed in the same pile at the wall… she spat in my face and threw me against the wall, her teeth biting my neck I screamed in pain at each new bite…jasper came over and peeled maria away from me and ripped her cheek open. Venom oozed from the new wound and it was gross!Jasper roared and charged towards her, trying to get a grip of her,
but she was to fast! She smashed my skull against the wall when I launched on her face and venom as leaking out…maria laughed slowly"Failures…both of you…" she giggled like a mental patient… tutted at jasper;"this could have been ALLLL avoided if you had just stayed with the army" she stroked his cheek and he growled."I regret nothing!" and he spat in her face, she slapped him and ripped his arms off…."goodnight Major"….she smiled them grabbed his exact same moment I yanked her head off.I sighed in relief and hugged jasper hard…"were alive, were alive, were alive!" I cried out in joy but jasper made no sound."jazz?" I asked him warily."im a failure." he mumbled "I never avenged Amy or...Matthew...Amelia...Rory…im…im" and then he passed out….