Ok before I get to the story I want to say to all the story followers that I'm sorry for updating and deleting over and over again! I have a huge problem with my Doc Manager or something and it's sooooooo annoying! Ok here we go... Brace yourselves.
Mina heard Nan gasp. What were they doing here?
"Geez Grimes, you're holding out on us. Why didn't we get an invite?"
We? Mina looked in horror as about sixty more people followed Savannah downstairs.
"I guess you won't have to eat that pizza by yourself after all," Brody whispered.
Nan stormed up to Savannah. "You weren't invited!"
She shrugged. "Well here I am!"
Nan opened her mouth to answer but Mina cut her off. "Nan, can you come here for just another sec?"
"Yeah?" She walked up to Mina.
"What is going on?" She gestured to the now crowded room.
"Mina, I'm so sorry! I made sure that they didn't find out but obviously that didn't work! What are we going to do?"
"We could just tell them to leave..." Mina shrugged.
"Uh it looks like Brody has that covered," she pointed. Brody was trying to get a stubborn Savannah to leave. She wasn't listening. Pri walked over to the stereo and changed the song. People started to dance and a few couples were already making out.
Mina and Nan watched in horror. Brody kept trying to get them to leave, and Nick didn't know what to do. He stood next to the girls.
Brody walked up to them. "They aren't leaving for a while." He looked mad.
Savannah's shrill voice cut through the air. "Seven minutes in heaven!" People cheered in agreement while Mina, Nan and Nick watched open mouthed. Brody was furious.
"Brody goes first!" Some random group of girls pulled a struggling Brody into a closet that was empty. Two guys held the door shut.
"So who joins him?" Savannah yelled. "I volunteer if there's no suggestions!"
"Grimey should go! It's her party!" Someone yelled.
Mina paled. She started slowly inching towards the stairs. Nan had a different thought though. A moment- seven minutes to be exact- with Brody might just cheer Mina up.
She grabbed her arm. "Mina goes in!" She yelled.
"Nan, you traitor!" Mina screamed as she was pulled towards the closet. The door opened and she was pushed through.
Brody caught her against his chest when she stumbled in. "Mina?"
"Uhh," she couldn't speak. Brody had been her longtime crush until Fate had a say. She knew now that she didn't love him, but you never forget your first crush, even if he forgot you.
Soo... This is what I was talking about earlier how I don't even know why I wrote this... I do not ship Mrody (or is it Brina?) at all. I am strict Jarina shipper since Fairest... Please don't start another fandom war! I just do not like Brody Carmichael anymore, at all. So that's why I was so surprised when I found this because I think it was supposed to be a Mrody story. But now I need your help, what should I do with this? Suck it up and try to write them together? Or just try to make it a couple of awkward minutes between them or something else? Please leave a comment with suggestions! Sorry it's short!
**review response
Guest: I'm excited to see where this goes... I love how Nix described how he knew Mina was over Brody " well you see when my magical Fae side was dying I saw them making out and almost confess their undying love for each other before he was killed but not really killed." Perfect. Brody's a dick. Just don't show up, she wants Jared not you. I'm so happy I FINALLY got to read Jared's Quest today cause its in a special book set on amazon. It's so sweet how he cares about her... And I can't believe Ever is his guardian... Go pay $4 for the 13 books if you haven't read it. Do update soon!
Me: I like you, you're my new fandom best friend! Thank you for liking my sarcastic explanation idea from Nix. I don't want him to be another love interest for Mina, but I love him. I agree 100% about Brody, he's too perfect. I love how you love him in the first book but then totally down hill after that. JARED ALL THE WAY! I really don't want to make this a Mrody story, it's against everything I have... So I need something exciting to happen!
I fortunately got Jared's Quest the first time it came out, I could. Not. Wait. I was so excited. I absolutely love how much he loves her. It's awesome right? I'm happy it came out again for you and a good cause! I hate Ever too, so she has to come into this story somehow and get a beatdown or something... Hmmm. Comment any ideas or suggestions you have! Thanks for the comment! :)
