Ok, ladies, I listened to you and yesterday and today I took the time and I edited out what I had to and made the best of it, I got three chapters edited. HOWEVER! Sorry for shouty capitals here, but however, based on the fact it is an original piece, I wasn't wanting to compromise on the story and water it did so the next few chapters will take place in Whistler BC. As well as the Seattle parts too, I know the city better and its a lot better than me dumbing down how awesome Seattle is with minor details, actually that is half of the reasons that some of my stories don't get finished, its because I don't know what I can't write about. So it is a minor switch but one I hope you will enjoy! I don't own Fifty Shade of Grey or characters and I welcome all good and bad reviews. I also knew this was a short chapter so I put Chapter 8-9 together.

Chapter 8

After we filled in the papers saying what we were doing could kill us, Christian and I were driving up the mountain to the ATV's, I looked at him. "Did you pay the guys extra to take me ATVing alone?" He smiled,

"I don't know what you are talking about, but I have been quading before, you will love it" I gulped, "what if I get attacked by a bear?" He snorted. "Good luck to the bear!"

He hoped I would like it? We pulled up to an open field with ten red ATV's sitting there waiting to be turned on and played with. "Come on!" Christian was on my right and he jumped out first, grabbing my hand too. I looked at him then back to the guy who was at the bottom where the ATV's were. We got closer and the guy stuck his hand out to us, "Hi, I'm Benson, I'm your tour guide today, Ana and Christian today is it?" Christian nodded "yep that's us." I found my grip on Christian's hand get tighter as I squeezed it, he squeezed back, and I stopped. I was safe, for now.

"Ok Ana, I will get it you to hop on this one." Benson turned to me, the one with the single seat, "say what?" I thought I looked at him, he smiled, and Christian came around me "hop on it won't bite." I looked at him and Benson. "I thought I was getting one with Christian?" Christian smiled at me, "no I wanted you to have your own, and you will love it." He pushed me closer on the ATV, I walked over to it, swung my leg over, and I sat up on it. I watched Christian do the same on his. Benson explained the rules to do and not to do, and not to flip it over, then he put on my helmet and handed Christian his and stripped his helmet on. "Ready?" He asked as he started his ATV, I started mine as Christian did his next. I held my thumbs up to signal I was good, as Christian nodded. "Ok let's go!" He took up the hill again, and weaved us up to practice the turns and to climb the hill, he put his thumb up to motion lets go faster, he took off as I raved my engine on the vehicle, and took off! I looked ahead afraid I would crash I let go and the vehicle stopped, "Ana!" I looked at Christian, "you ok?" I nodded, "not used to the speed." He laughed, "Follow behind me, if you get nervous about the speed, just pull past me." His eyes danced as if he was smiling, I looked at him as he revved his ATV up the hill and onto the gravel path, and I looked after them I started the ATV up again, revved my engine and took up after the boys.

I caught up to them and watched the sun play peek-a-boo in the trees, and I loved it, Christian was right, this was fun, I looked ahead and how he was doing tricks on his ATV, kicking up dirt, I was impressed, so impressed I did pass him on his left, he waved and gave me a thumbs up. I slowed down so he could be beside me, we drove up through the trees knowing that where we were on the mountain, it was one of the trails to go to the village in skiing weather, but this was perfect, Christian watched Benson take us to the up, then along a long windy road where I had to be in front of Christian, I saw so much in the trees and in the wildlife, I was so happy I was doing something where I was out seeing the world, not beside a two-year-old who wanted to pay trains and watch paw patrol. As we were riding I noticed that the ATV rumble was getting me turned on, that the feeling was passing through me and I was wishing Christian was riding with me so we could stop and take care of matters arising in my thighs, I watched him from us cruising and I was content he had picked me to do this with, he may have taken another girl or done this with his buddies but right now I didn't care, I caught up them and rode on through the mountains with an ache for him growing in my belly.

We came to a clearing and we looked out to the village, I got to take off my helmet after I put my ATV into park, I got off of it, and looked at Christian take his helmet off, I walked up to him. "Well Ho…"He never got to finish his sentence as my mouth was on his. I wrapped my arms around him with the helmet in my hand, and hugging him, he kissed me his gloves covered in mud, grabbed my head and kissed me back. I heard the click of a camera and pulled back.

"I take it you liked it?" He asked, and I nodded.

"It was fun, can we do more of it?" I asked. Benson smiled and handed Christian back his phone. "Lucky for you, there is a park we have set up in the summer to do tricks off of, wanna go?"

"Yes!" I said it a high squeak, Benson smiled, "ok let's go!" He put his helmet back on as did I, Christian fasted it as he did he pulled the visor up and looked into my helmet, he couldn't kiss my lips but he leaned in to kiss my nose. "That will do for now." He pulled on his helmet and I turned and pulled myself back on to the ATV. I didn't turn it on I looked at Christian as I thought of something. I pulled my visor up.

"Hey, do you have that guy Benson's number?" He nodded, and pulled his visor up, "yeah why?" I smiled as I looked at my ATV and back to him, I pulled my helmet off and got off my ATV, I walked over to his, "put it into park." He did as he was told, he pulled his off too. The rumble of the ATV in between my thighs made me horny as hell, I couldn't resist him. "Here? Now? Baby? What if we get caught?" I smiled as he asked the questions.

"That's why you text Benson and tell him to wait 20 minutes and give him another 50.00. To keep his mouth shut." He smiled.

"Ok fine, but we have to be quick." I smiled as he pulled his jeans down a bit, as I looked at him and pulled mine down to mine off, I sat up on him like I was on the ATV, he even left the engine on idle so I could get off on the rumble, he looked into my eyes as I bounced up and down his hips, he hit my G-spot, and it felt amazing, I dripped my head back as he held my body he was close and for me I wasn't there yet. I pushed his head in between my breasts and he moaned into them, us not getting completely naked I rocked my hips on him even more, watching his face as he was enjoying our lovemaking. "God baby you are so tight I don't think I can hold on much longer." He grunted to me, I looked at him as I said that. "Can you rub my clit baby?" He found my buttons and as he did, I was screaming and nothing but the birds could hear me screaming his name, it wasn't long before Christian was pushing me over the front of the ATV and holding my hips as he fucked me hard and he let himself go inside of me. Feeling his warm seed let go in me, I shuddered as my orgasm came to an end as did his. He smiled as he pulled me up from the front of the ATV and helped me get off his and helped me get my pants on. Just as I was buttoning up my pants and Christian was doing his up, I heard another ATV coming up the way. Benson pulled his visor up and yelled at us. "There you two are! I thought one of you had fallen off the mountain, I thought I would have to do more paperwork today. Come on, guys." I smiled as I saddled up and pulled my helmet back on my head, I looked behind me and smiled as Christian started his engine up.

Ok baby, use that phone anytime, I don't care as long as you call me and anybody else from your old contacts, just no ex's boyfriend's." Christian smiled at me, I was feeling happy.

"I will cover your bill, and anything you need baby, I will be nearby so just ask. Also, I know you spent most of the money in Vegas plus you still have the Amex card, so can I have it back please?" I thought about it as I pulled it out of my pocket, I handed it over the weight left my hands for only a few minutes, he put it back in his wallet, and pulled out another Black Amex card, "this one is just for you, it will never be cancelled for as long as we are together." I fell hard for this man. Not because of the money he was giving me or the cards or the dinners, it was because he wanted to take care of me, I could do ok without his help but I liked it when he wanted to do nice things for me, something I never had. We were standing outside beside the limo, the darken house holding Christian in my arms for a few more minutes. It was dark outside, I had my own entrance. Kate would never know! I thought. Kissing him one last time, maybe I thought.

"You want to come inside?" I purred against his lips pulling close for that one last kiss. He looked into my eyes as he made another pass over my lips but not putting pressure into our lips meeting. He whispered his answer on my breath. "Sure." Taking his hand in mine and walking around to the back door, opening it up, turning on the light. Making out with him like we were teenagers, feeling his tongue in my mouth, dancing with mine, as I walked forwards and backwards down the whole way the hallway, gigging the whole way, I was so happy to be with this man. I was trying to find my doorknob, pulling on it as I was pulling on his collar adding depth to the kiss, he grabbed around my waist to pull me closer, as if he wanted me to jump into his arms, I reached inside my door found the light switch, as I flicked the light on the mood took a big switch itself.

"Hi, Anuty Annie." Hearing the sound of my three-year-old nephew Teddy in my bed tucked in with his teddy Zippy. "What the" In a half daze looking around the room for the source of the little voice and it landing on Teddy in his Thomas the tank engine pyjama's "...TEDDY! You're supposed to be in bed! What you out?" Reaching for him, and pulling him to my arms and hip, he snuggled in like a little monkey he was, looking at Christian as Teddy took hold of my body, what a mood killer.

"Give me five minutes and I will put him to bed," I said as he looked down at Teddy he said.

"Maybe it's better if I go." Disappointed, I kissed him one last time and watched him walk down the hall and out my back door. I sighed, he was gone only ten seconds and I missed him so much.

I sighed as I looked at the door, wishing for him to burst the door, saying, please baby come with me I changed my mind I love you, come with me and we will make love until the dawn. "Only in romance novels do they only do that." I voiced out loud knowing only Teddy would hear me. "Come on Teddy, let's get you to..." looking at the sleeping toddler on my arm, "bed." I sighed again, he was getting heavier soon I won't be able to carry him, in fact, my weak ankle was twitching it meant soon I couldn't carry him to his Thomas the tank engine room. Soon it will be filled with Star Wars stuff. I flipped back his sheets and tucked him in. I walked downstairs and grabbed my two suitcases and dragged them to my room. I walked back out and grabbed my small carry on with my passport and books in it. Thinking I wanted to paint it Kate said no because her house her rules, I was mad always mad she never let me have my room in the colour of red. I kicked my cases off to the corner, got into my bathroom stripped down and stood under the stand-up shower. I let the hot water wash away my long day, all the flying and sex, I touched myself in the shower to remember what he felt like. My fingers making do in replacement of his cock, and it would do since now I would be ruined for all other men, or men would be smaller than the monster cock Christian had in his pants. I smiled as I think I will be paying the next water bill. Thinking about how I took his cock in my mouth, that he put it deep inside of my mouth, how I did that in the limo, in the plane, and the ATV. He loved it, he loved how I swallowed his cock deep down, how I swallowed his cum. He loved saying my name.

As I was washing my hair, I thought about his parents of how much I remembered them, his mom was awesome, she had blonde hair that came to her hips and she was a housewife and took care of the kids. Christian's dad I never saw, then again, I saw him for the two-three times I was there, it was around the time my mother had passed after she passed and the rapes started, I never went to Christian's anymore. I was scared of other boys. I thought of the swing set, every time I was there Christian and I was on it, swinging back and forth. He knew he wanted me. That it was meant to be. Since he was nine Christian knew he wanted me as his wife.

I got out of the shower dried off my hair and wrapped the towel on my head like Carman Miranda and looked in the foggy mirror as I did every time I got out of the shower, I wiped the steam away and looked at my whole round face, the one whom was the one watching her life pass by her, and for once a smile came out to play, I brushed my teeth as I thought about what I had to say to Kate. I thought about school and about going back and making a mark in this world with Christian money he was sending me he could help me go back and finish school. I stopped brushing my teeth, He could help me! I thought. The money could be used for anything, for him sending me to school or to go to cows ice cream, maybe even help me get my own car. The last one was too extreme but the school idea was within reach, I dried my body and took my hair dryer to blow dry my hair, watching the blonde hair fly in different directions, feeling the cold water drip off my body, and yet it felt good. I went to my closet and pulled out my Thai fishermen pants the ones I begged Mia for when she was in Thailand, she was gone for two years but it was worth the wait, even when she came back with 3 pairs for me. Elena asked if one pair was for Kate, but Mia said no, it was because I asked I got them, ever since then Kate tried to steal a pair so simply I only wear one pair, and wash one pair and keep the other two at Mia's house, for safe keeping. I pulled on a black shirt, sleeping in the basement it was always colder, even in summer, and turning up the heat costs money so I always layered up. Tucking myself in and pulling my new phone close to me, and looking at the apps I had downloaded, and I thought about Christian.

*you awake still?* Watching the message pop up in blue. He read it.

*yes, why are you still awake?* I typed back quickly.

*I had a long hot shower and I wish you and me were in it to fuck and have somebody finally wash my back!* He read it.

*LOL, that's sweet, we will one day just give it time. Ok,?* I nodded realizing he couldn't see me.

*Ok, also one more thing?* I typed and waited he read it then the speech bubble came up then went away then up again.

*Ok what's up?* He asked.

*Is the money you sent me to be used for anything even helping with school?* My finger hovered over the send button then I knew he would see that my speech bubble was typing. He hit me with another message.

*I'm going to bed soon so make it quick.* My finger pushed send as his message came in. His message came up almost instantly.

*You can snort cocaine with the money for all care, my family makes so much that I don't care what you do with it. But don't snort coke, that shit is horrible!* I laughed out loud as he said that.

*I won't, but thank you, sorry I had to ask I just wanted to know what to do with it, I always had to ask when it came to money.*

*I know, now go to bed! Talk in the morning.* I smiled as I read his last message, and I put the phone in my nightstand and turned on my side, how I liked to sleep with my comfortable feather pillows. Pulling them close I now knew of my plan and to put it into action tomorrow morning with Kate. I outstretched my arm to my lamp and turned off the light, not even a second later I was out cold.

The next morning, the thoughts of last night still rang in my brain, either that or a hangover, I stretched, and flipped back the covers and went to my bathroom to relief myself, while there I looked at the small bathroom for the Advil pills, and couldn't find them. "God damn it Kate stop stealing my shit!" I cursed out loud because it was her house didn't mean she got free range into my bedroom, that's why I knew I could never leave my Thai fishermen pants, she would take them for herself. I stormed out of my bathroom after finding no pills and washing my hands from peeing, I bolted upstairs to talk to Kate about this.

I have an almost finished degree I should have the right to do what I trained for. I got marched to the kitchen and waited, I know she goes into town to the animal hospital daily. I had her morning coffee out and her breakfast ready same for Jack. Teddy was getting up later so there wasn't a need to get him ready just yet. In sleepy-eyed walked in Kate. Kate was 5,10. Blue eyes, black hair, fair skin, skinny as a rail. She and Jack Hyde owned an animal hospital in Whistler normally it was twenty-four hours that's why when I was looking over at her, she looked bagged tried. It's not every day I find her son in my bed when I try to bring a date back. Looking at her over tired eyes I spoke, trying not to yell.

"Thanks for the heads up that your son was in my bed last night!" I wanted to scream she at times makes me so mad. She pulled herself together and woke up a bit and shook her head awake, thinking about that night, she blinked a few times wondering why I didn't put a peace offering like coffee before her, she grunted as if to say "coffee?" I shook my head "no coffee, did you go shopping while I was gone?" She looked almost like a cavewoman as she formed words together and tried to think about to say next. Finally, a word came out of her pretty mouth. "No." She went to the coffee machine and started pushing random buttons. "Turn on!" She worked later than Jack and loved what she did, so it was normal the mornings I came upstairs and find her in a sleepy haze ready to knock out the coffee machine. I laughed as she knew what she was doing she wanted me to fight with the darn thing next. I didn't budge. She looked back and pointed at it with her thumb out, "no sorry I quit when you stole my Advil." Now she woke up to speak. "Sorry I didn't know, I put him to bed and said go to sleep like how you do it, why he comes downstairs?" She came back to me to stand in front of me to talk.

"Look I don't mind, but it's a bit much when I have a date in my arms and there is your son in my bed, long after his bedtime, he told me you said it was fine." She nodded

"I thought your flight came in around five pm yesterday?" Trying to distract me.

"Yeah but his flight crew left Vegas around 6 pm, we made a detour to pick him up in New York, then flew all night here, we got here around 6 am or so, then we took our time getting up here, I came home around 10-10:30 or so." The wheels in her coffee-deprived brain slowly working, as she came up with an answer, "You don't know anybody in New York." As if she was trying to see if I was referring to Christian, or his younger Brother Elliot, "No I don't, He had to do business there, and I don't care what his business was other than doing me. Ok?" She nodded, "ok that's all I needed to know," knowing I may have given her a bullshit answer to drop whatever she was looking for, but at least it would buy me some time. "Anyways" I carried on. "Teddy was in my room when I came home, that was a huge turn off to him so I wanted to know what happened to you to being parents for one night." I scoffed, she knew I was that I let her son come down when he wasn't supposed to.

"I don't know, Jack called me to ask what to do and gave him a bath read him two books and made his warm milk and put him to bed, when I came home at 10:30. He was out of bed, but I put him back to bed and I guess he got out because of night terror." And shrugged, she was lying I was home around the same time as she was and I didn't see her car pull in. "You must have gotten in later than me I was home I was there at 10:30." She looked with a panicked look in her eyes and looked at me as if she was going to lie. "If you are going to lie to me about the guy were fucking every night or helping a family with a Husky, make sure the timing is right." She signed and gave in. "I just got home." I looked at her surprised, "Kate, what are you doing?" Her hands fell with her face in them and cried. "I don't know, Jack is great, but I don't know."

"Kate I watched you cry about your failed attempt at a marriage, and broken hearts along the way, I wiped tears, butts, cleaned up your room and kept my mouth shut about things I find in there, even if it isn't yours..." Oh, fuck! Shit, I knew Jack was fucking somebody else, but it wasn't what Kate thought. He liked girls to come over tie him up and spank him like a little bitch. I came in one day while he was in a spank session. I promised to keep my mouth shut. Oops, I was pissed, it was fine for a second.

"Anastasia I know about the spank sessions, why you think I ask you to take Teddy to the park for an extra hour on Wednesdays?" I smiled then Kate and I broke out giggling. As pissed as I was, it was her jokes that made me laugh. I eased myself off the bar stool and walked around her at her kitchen island and started making breakfast, "bacon and eggs?" I asked she nodded and continued. "Kate, do you and Jack talk about this or partners? I thought you were more traditional about marriage than I thought."

"We are, just, he is the one who has a hard time being traditional so we talked and he likes it when I go out late and come back and tell him about the guy I screw around with and it gets him off and his prize is having girls come over to spank his ass." I just shivered all over, knowing I would never do that. I looked back to the cooking bacon in the pan and made some cereal for myself. "What's that lifestyle called?" She looked at me as I pulled out the coffee filters and the coffee container. She got her cup ready, "what you mean? BDSM?" She asked I nodded focusing on breakfast, "it just means that Bondage, Bondage and Discipline or Dominance and Submission Sadism and Masochism. Nothing for your pretty little head to worry about unless your new guy practices it than I would worry." I turned the bacon over listening to it crackle in the pan. "Why?" I didn't look up until I felt Kate come up behind me, "for this!" and felt her hand smack my bum, I yelped as I took me by surprise, sending the frying pan forward almost knocking me into the stove flame. She grabbed me and pulled me back, my hand still on the pan pulled it back to the element. I was still trying to catch my breath and sort out what she did! "That's why. Most people practice it, most people have a safe word and it is fun but you have to have the right teacher somebody who listens or it can just be abusive and I don't want that for you." I nodded, scared to speak. I thought about Christian and thought about what he wanted in the bedroom a slut, every day, "where do the princess and slut fall into BDSM?" Kate turned back from where she was standing and let out a howl in laughter. "Oh Ana, that's!" She fell over in a fit of laughter, "Darling, that is nothing in the BDSM world if anything you are hard cord you be rope bound, tied to a cross and spanked with a paddle, as his princess he can treat you with all nice gifts in the world and then bend you over his knee. You have nothing to worry about, in fact, I'm proud of you." I nodded. Proud ok…. Just don't let her find out who it is. "Ok" I turned over the bacon and looked back to the eggs and poured them into a warm pan, I heard Jack get up and I was almost done his breakfast, the man was a nice, but he also was as mean as Kate, I tried not to pick favourites.

"Hey, Ana you're home!" He came in beside me to reach for the coffee pot as I pulled back, knowing I like having personal space.

"Yep, no problem oh and your son in my bed was a buzz kill for me. Thanks, guys." They looked at each other, and back to me. I felt done with Kate, she needs to pay for somebody to come in. She could help me find a place and I had to move out and move on!

"Listen I am asking only once then if you can't help I will move on."

"Move on?' Jack said. "What?" Kate followed up with. They were build sided it hit them quicker than they thought

"Annie, I know what you want to do, but please don't leave us!" Kate begged.

"Kate, I have a degree to go into photography, and I need your help financially, please can you help?"

"No." They said in unison.

"Just like that, no thought, nothing? I wipe your son's ass and clean up your mansion of a house, I don't get paid, and it's like that."

"No, it's not like that!" Jack plead "You're the best I had, and I love you like a sister, you keep things tighter than a corset here." "And I can't do any of it without your help." Kate chimed in, then followed up with. "The point is, I want you to go to go into photography, just my mom, doesn't want you to finish thinking it's a useless talent everybody has today with they're camera phones, and I have seen your work and you're brilliant! I never trust anybody else to take Teddy's portrait again, you know how to work a camera. I want you to do both here and there. I just don't want to give you up." I looked at her as I started taking the bacon out of the frying pan and getting the eggs out onto a plate for Jack and Kate. I made a disgusted face, "Yes Ana I'm that selfish." She paused, I pulled out five eggs, two for Kate three for Jack, and began mixing the eggs up, they liked they're eggs the same or I thought that was the case since that was the only way I knew how to made. Hearing her sigh "you need this more than me with the care of my son" she signed again and smiled. "I will help you get a new place to stay, and some money to get into it, but this is your months' notice, to find a new girl and get out other than that you're fired!" I turned to the both of them, "thank you guys!" I hugged the both of them.

"Remember to thank me after you get a big award for the best picture!" Kate said I smiled back at her, and nodded.

"I will." I smiled though my tears. This was the best news I had all day.