Yay! My second chapter! Again, please critique my writing! It is greatly appreciated! So this chapter is in Mountainclan's perspective, just to let you know. On with the story!
Silverkit didn't know where she was. She panicked and ran around until she hit a hard but soft shape. "Watch out little one!" Said the shape. Silverkit blinked. A whole new world stretched around her. She saw the fluffy shape that was her mother. "Mama!" She exclaimed. She wondered if she looked like her mother. Then, she saw her sister. Her name was Windkit. Her sister stood over her. Silverkit wasn't that small… was she? "Come on kits." Said their mother. "It's time to meet your father!"
They walked up to Bloodtalon, their father. "Hello kits." he said coldly. Windkit looked up to him bravely and glared at him. He sat up and said "Windkit, come and take a walk with me" She smiled when he said that and trotted into the forest.
"I'm glad you're not going with them" said Silverkit's mother "why?" Silverkit asked. "You'll see." Her mother replied. Silverkit noticed that while her, her mother, and her father were black, Windkit was gold. She looked at the entrance they had left through, about an hour ago. Suddenly, her father burst through the entrance. "Help! Windkit is dead!"
"She wandered into the forest, and I chased after her, and she's been eaten by a family of foxes!" He cried. Silverkit was stunned, as was her mother from what she could tell, yet there was something… off about the whole thing, considering Windkit didn't wander out of camp, Bloodtalon took her. The clan gathered around the sorrowful family. Jaggedstar sent a patrol to find the body, since according to Bloodtalon, he chased off the foxes, but couldn't save Windkit.
When they arrived with the body, Silverkit couldn't help but notice that there were no bite marks, there was a single claw mark on the throat of Windkit. She glanced suspiciously at her father, but he was too mournful to notice. That night, her mother let her go to bed instead of sitting vigil. She layed down, and fell asleep.
She found herself in a vast expanse of pine trees and mountains. A cream colored she cat and her lost sister trotted up to her. "Greetings" Said the older cat "My name is Dawnheart. I am from Streamclan" "H...Hello…" Silverkit said shyly. "You are right to be suspicious about your father." Said Dawnheart. "I am? ICool." Silverkit said. Windkit sighed "I barely met you Silverkit. When Bloodtalon took me in the forest, he brought me to an abandoned fox den and slit my throat." She looked at her paws sadly. "I knew there was something off about your body!" Silverkit exclaimed! She thought of the horrifying things that Bloodtalon could do… considering the clan believed him about this. "Goodbye and goodluck, Silverkit" Dawnheart sighed. Starclan faded around her.
Silverkit woke up at her mother's belly. She noticed it was only about moonhigh. She peeked out of the nursery and saw Bloodtalon talking to the deputy, Pebbleclaw. Silverkit had a bad feeling about this. She saw him smile at her dreamily, and twine his tail with her's. She smiled at him shyly. Silverkit saw them exit the camp, and followed them. She followed them, and rolled in some ferns to disguise her scent. She saw him curl up around her, and sneak a claw toward her throat, and he slit it. Pebbleclaw looked up, horrified. She tried to speak, but she couldn't. Silverkit was horrified, and sprinted back to camp. She curled up at her mother's belly, and hoped it was all just a dream, but she knew, it wasn't.
I had a LOT of fun writing this! I hope you guys enjoy it! Comment below on what you enjoyed in the chapter!.