Mablestory: Thank you! I will make sure not to make that mistake again, so thank you for you're advice! :D
I hope you all enjoy seeing Moonkit become an apprentice! :)
Moonkit stood by the stream where Riverpaw had taught her how to fish. She stood over the stream, careful not to get her shadow over the water. She saw a big shape in the water, and tried to grab the huge fish. Moonkit dug her back claws into the bank, and stuck her other paw around the trout. She finally managed to pull it out, and realized it was bigger than Riverpaw! She reached for the neck, and dug her claws into its throat, and managed to kill it. She drug it to the prey pile. Blazepaw stared at her as Moonkit laid it onto the prey pile.
"Woah! That thing's bigger than me!" Blazepaw said, amazed.
"I know!" Moonkit shouted excitedly. Moonkit's mother rushed over.
"Moonkit! Where on earth have you been?!"
"I caught a huge fish!" Moonkit pointed at the prey pile.
"You caught that?"
"Yeah!" Moonkit shouted. Windgorge smiled proudly
"Well, let's get you cleaned up!" Moonkit struggled as Windgorge groomed her. She finally gave in and sighed.
"Let all cats old enough to swim join beneath the waterfall for a clan meeting!" Rainstar shouted. "Moonkit, Sunkit, Pinekit, and Songkit are now old enough to become apprentices. Moonkit, you have reached six moons, so from this moment forward, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Moonpaw. Your mentor will be Beachleaf. I hope she will pass her courage and strength on to you."
Moonkit padded over to Beachleaf, and touched noses with her.
"Sunkit, from this moment forward, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Sunpaw. Your mentor will be Berryclaw. I hope he will pass his kindness and loyalty on to you." Sunpaw stood beside Berryclaw, narrowing his eyes.
"Pinekit, from this moment forward until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Pinepaw. Your mentor will be Otterleaf. I hope she will pass her knowledge and wisdom onto you." Pinepaw touched noses with Otterleaf.
"Songkit, from this moment forward, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Songpaw. Your mentor will be Cranewing. I hope she will pass her fighting skills and speed onto you."
Songpaw walked over to Cranewing and touched noses with her.
"Moonpaw! Sunpaw! Pinepaw! Songpaw!" The clan chanted.
"Okay Moonpaw!" Beachleaf smiled "We're going on a tour of the territory!"
"Awesome!" Moonpaw exclaimed.
Moonpaw and Beachleaf traveled to the Mountainclan border
"This is the Mountainclan border" Beachleaf said "Mountainclan is known for attacking in the shadows"
"Cool" Moonkit meowed.
They arrived at Frostclan border quickly, and saw Snowtuft , the Frostclan deputy, Cricketfur, and Rosepetal.
"Greeting Beachleaf, Streamclan has a new apprentice I presume?"
"Yes, actually, four new apprentices." Beachleaf responded
The Frostclan patrol quickly marked the territory.
"See you at the next gathering." Beachleaf meowed.
"Yes, until the next gathering" Snowtuft said.
Moonpaw walked back to the camp beside Beachleaf. She had also shown Moonpaw the Great Oak, the river, and the Beech tree. "You can go get some food with the other apprentices. Blazepaw and Riverpaw have made yours and your siblings nest. See you tomorrow at dawn. You're going on the dawn patrol." Beachleaf smiled
"Got it!" Moonpaw responded.
Moonpaw saw Songpaw and Pinepaw sharing a rabbit. She grabbed a minnow, and sat beside them. "Hello!" Moonpaw greeted.
"Hi! How was your first day!" Songpaw shouted at Moonpaw
"It was awesome" Moonpaw purred, sitting down beside Pinepaw. "We took a tour of the territory! It was huge!"
"I had to make nests because I happened to run into the warriors den when I went chasing after a rabbit." Songpaw groaned "But on the other paw, I caught it!"
"I learned what a few herbs could do." Pinepaw smiled. Riverpaw and Blazepaw trotted into camp and sat beside the new apprentices. "How was your first day?" Blazepaw purred.
"It was SO awesome and fun!" Songpaw meowed sarcastically "And oh my gosh! Making nests? It's the most AWESOME thing ever." Songpaw muttered sourly.
"So Moonpaw, what did you do?" Riverpaw asked, changing the subject
"I took a tour of the territory! It's huge!" Moonpaw meowed.
"Mind if we join you?" Blazepaw asked.
"Not at all!" Pinepaw smiled.
The sun set quickly, and the new apprentices were sent off to bed. Moonpaw sighed. She wasn't tired yet. She curled up in her new nest. It was a lot bigger than the nest in the nursery. Probably because Moonpaw was the only one in the nest. After the moon had rose to the middle of the sky, she still hadn't found sleep. She walked out of the den, and saw Rainstar sitting on top of the Waterfall. "Hello Moonpaw." She greeted "Why are you still up?"
"I can't sleep." Moonpaw meowed.
"Why not?" Rainstar asked.
"Sunpaw's not here-"
"What?!" Rainstar interrupted.
"Yeah. He never came back."
"Come, Moonpaw. We have to find him. I'll excuse you from the dawn patrol"
"Okay." Moonpaw meowed.
I wonder where Sunpaw is…
Yay! Moonpaw and her siblings are apprentices.
Flameheart88: I have a plan to add that character in :D
Q: Where do you think Sunpaw is? What do you think he's doing?
Thanks for reading!
~Moonstripe
