8 Dec 2018
- Still figuring UI out. A lot of my changes did not take place because I changed only the Doc Manager file and did not Update in Manage Stories. My story looks like a first draft, despite it having gone through 3 edits. Formatting is the main issue right now. I like new paragraphs to have some space before starting (like hitting TAB once in Word), which doesn't seem to work here.
- 'Less than' and 'More than' sign does not work for skills, so skills are rewritten in Bold. For example, Kinetic.
- Roland's thoughts are in italic.
- Missing bits all over the place, plus grammar corrections here and there. I am so sorry. The transfer (paste as text) and some last minute changes have shredded some content.
- Changes and corrections done in Chapters 1 to 18. More later.
9 Dec 2018
- Still kicking myself for being so sloppy.
- A whole chapter was missing. Chapter 18 is the missing chapter, making the whole story 25 chapters total.
- Added mentions of some other Archer skill names from my skill tree draft.
- Italic and Skill Name corrections, plus additions here and there from Chapters 19 to Chapter 25.
16 Feb 2019
- This site is banned in Malaysia, so I'm posting it in that other one site with 'A' and 'O' for extra reach. Why would you ban FF? Because religious people are morons.
- Don't know how many edits in and I'm still finding bits and pieces I missed out, skills I didn't Bold, thoughts I didn't Italic, or downright garbled sentences. So over the next few days, I will make sure the version here and there are the same. Thank you so much to the almost 10 people who read EVERY chapter. To the ones who loved what they read, thanks twice over.