A/N: hey guys so about what i said earlier i just wanted to say that im not trying to pressure you to make reviews or anything that would be mean. but i do really do like them just in case you didnt think i did, i do and it makes me want to keep writing but im not pressuring you but it would be nice. anyway heres the new chapter i hope you like it and if you do you can leave a review if you want to and also if you have time thanks

Chapter 11: dumbledore

Dumbledore was sitting in his office looking at a pile of ash that was actually fawkes but it had died 2 minutes ago. "Hmmmmmmmmm i wonder what harrys doing maybe i should check up on him" said dumbledore. And then he went to the fireplace and cast a spell on himself that made him invisible (see-through) and floo'd to harrys place and then he saw him with tom and ruth and nagini laughing and having a good time.

"Oh no harry is happy and i want him to defeat voldemort and be angsty" said dumbledore stroking his beard. "This isnt good" he said. Then he went back to his office and summoned a house-elf and asked it to get minerva mcgonnagall and she came, but she was in her animagus form. "Stop showing off" said dumbledore "meow" said mcgonnagal. "Minerva this is serious" said dumbledore stroking his beard and then minerva turned into a human "whats wrong" she asked.

"Harrys happy and he hasnt defeated voldemort yet" said dumbledore. "So" said minerva. "So…" said dumbledore stroking his beard. "Maybe we should just let him be happy for now i even hear he got kidnapped by voldemort but managed to escape" said minerva. "oh" said dumbledore stroking his beard "but i dont want him to be happy because im an old coot" said the old coot, stroking his beard but then fawkes became a real bird again and they both got distracted.