hey guys so heres chapter 17 pls let me know what you think if its not too much to ask thanks! ! !

Chapter 17: tea and biscuits

Mcgonnagall and harry were in the classroom with some other students and mcgonnigal was teaching charms. "Harry" said professor mcgonnagall "yes professor" said harry. "Stay after class please" "ok" and then the class went on and harry really loved it because he was really good at magic and he was the best in class. Then he stayed after class "harry come here" said macgannagol "ok" said harry and then he went up to her. "Would you like some tea and biscuits harry" asked mcgonnagall smiling because harry was her favourite student "yes please" said harry and then they had some tea and biscuits (the ones that have chocolate in them and are kind of crunchy (not very crunchy just a bit) not the ones with raisins).