Author's Note:
Valentine's Special Below!
Okay, so I woke up this morning and I checked my notifications to see that an argument has been instigated among the comment section between two people.
Let's make something clear:
To the Guest User, I know that I said I fully accept negative comments on my story, and I do, but I don't accept hateful and negative comments on my readers. You can hate on me and my writing all you want, I don't care, but to go so far as to insult my readers or anybody else because you hate something from me is shallow and uncalled for.
For WhitePurity, while I appreciate your effort to defend my story and for being a loyal reader of mine since I even started writing on this site, please do your best not to argue with the hate comments. I, myself, said that I will accept them and that's what I wish for all of you who disagree to do so as well. I know you probably don't like that idea but I don't want to see arguments in my comment section. If they don't like my story, that's on them, not you. You just keep on reading and enjoy the story, please :)
Now back to the Guest User, what I want to know is why are you still here? You made it pretty clear that you hate my story in the last chapter so if you hate it so much, why come back? If you're just gonna stick around to throw shade then at least give some helpful feedback to make me a better writer. And I'm not talking about the crap you're saying about how Bakugou is "too OOC" or how "he'll never like someone as weird and stupid as your OC" because that's not feedback. That's just your opinion. Give me something that would make me a better writer like tips on how to make the plot thicken or tips on how to keep the character in character and still be fan fiction. Right now you're just looking like a typical troll that hates on things just to hate.
And for some reason, you're making a huge deal about Bakugou thinking my character is cute? First of all, he's only thought that twice in the entire story, one of which he was only 4 years old. Second, I don't see how I'm making my OC his only focus. Because it looks to me like he is still pretty damn focused on being the top hero, even with his "OOC" crush on my OC. So far Bakugou is pretty much still the Bakugou we all know with the addition to a little crush that he's had since childhood. Anybody who has had a crush on someone they grew up with will still think about them being cute or whatever sappy stuff like that despite being a cold-hearted angry jerk on the outside. But please, if I'm am still not seeing what you are trying to say then explain in detail what I did wrong and suggest something to make it better without changing the story so that I may fix it to your liking. For all I know there are other readers like yourself who thinks the same thing and just doesn't say it. I want to make everyone happy.
Another thing, what exactly do you find "weird" about my character? Is it that she got overly excited at being enrolled at Yuuei? Or maybe the time she made Bakugou "dance" with her at the party? Please, tell me. Because as far as I'm concerned my OC is far more mature than some of the characters in the show and manga, and the only thing weird about her is that she gets excited about things that anybody would get excited for.
And lastly, it's Fan Fiction. Which means I can do whatever the hell I want with the stories that I write. If I want my OC to be a plain and boring, unoriginal wind manipulator, then that's what she's going to be. If you don't like that then don't read it or hmu if you have a suggestion for another story. But don't expect me to change my character or story just because you, out of all of the other readers, don't like it.
Like I said before, you can message me privately or comment on this if you have any helpful suggestions on how to make this better. My aim is to please everyone. But do note that I will NOT change the plot or my OC's character design/ personality, because it is still my story. But if you have any suggestions or idea's you'd like to discuss or throw out, I'm all ears and will take every one of them into consideration and will give full credit to any idea that I use.
Keep in mind that this A/U does NOT mean you can send hateful comments towards the Guest User I have mentioned. I'm just voicing my thoughts and opinions on the things they have said because I feel that my opinion still matters.
For those who enjoy the story, thank you and ILYA!
Next Chapter will probably come out next week, I'm not making any promises, but I'm almost certain it will. I'm falling a bit behind since I was just involved in a recent car accident and haven't gotten the chance to even turn my laptop on. But I'm back to full health (And by that I mean I can still use my arms, yay!) and I am ready to write!
And YES I have read the rules and guidelines for published works here and there is no filter for titles or content as long as it is given the appropriate rating. As you can see I have my story rated under T for teens because of the cursing, so this story is still within its proper guidelines.
However, it is stated that no chapter can be used strictly as an A/N so I have whipped out a short story that has nothing to do with the plot but is still dealing with the characters and such.
And since tomorrow (Where I am) is Valentine's Day, I will make this a Valentine's short.
Lil Fucker Fuko Short:
Valentine's at Yuuei High!
I was currently in the kitchen, making a huge mess as I frantically mix ingredients together in a large mixer bowl.
Tomorrow was Valentine's day, meaning that all the girls in the school will be giving the boys chocolate. Valentine's wasn't always stressful for me, but now I have more guy friends other than Katsuki that I have to think about.
Japan celebrates Valentine's day a little different than other places, you see. Here in Japan, Valentine's is a day for girls to give chocolate to the boys, specific chocolate for friends, acquaintances, and lovers. Then, one month later on March 14th, the boys all celebrate White Day by giving return chocolates to the girls that had given them some on Valentine's day.
So, here I am, slaving away in the kitchen making chocolate for the guys in my class. I was making the charcoal chocolate, or in Japanese, the giri-choco. This chocolate is only meant for close friends, colleagues, and bosses. I always only made chocolate for Katsuki because he was my only guy friend, but now I have to make fifteen boxes of chocolate, one of which is for Aizawa-sensei since he's our homeroom teacher.
And the thing is… I am TERRIBLE at making anything edible!
I'm a terrible cook and baker! No matter how precisely I follow the instructions of any dish, be it salmon or ramen, it always manages to taste horrible. I can't even make rice properly, I mean all I have to do is wash the rice, measure the water and plug it in the rice cooker. But for some reason, my rice always comes out either super mushy or completely dry.
Katsuki was like a natural in the kitchen. Ever since he learned how to cut vegetables, he was able to make food better than our parents. Every year when I gave him chocolate, he only eats one and throws the rest away. I don't blame him though, I'd throw it away too. But he always eats at least one chocolate to make me happy, even though I can clearly see the disgust on his face with it reaches his taste buds.
I sigh, now all the other boys are gonna have to taste my chocolate. And it's not like I can just not give them some. It's completely rude to forget about your friends and only give them to one of them. Besides, all the other girls are giving out chocolate so I have no choice either way.
Tomorrow will be a disaster for sure.
I had all of my boxes of chocolate stacked neatly on top of each other in a large bag. Each of them had a note instructing them that it's best they eat mine first and get it over with. At least then they can wash out the taste with the other girls chocolate.
I reached the classroom and I wait for the rest of the class to show up. We all agreed to hand them out during lunch and sit together. Aizawa-sensei was the only exception because he eats in the teacher's lounge. So I put his box on his podium, making sure to also have an apology note for what he will have to experience if he decides to even eat them.
The rest of the class came in and the girls did the same thing as me and stacked their boxes on the podium for sensei.
We all proceeded class like normal until the dreadful moment in which the lunch bell rang and I internally groan.
We all sat at the same table, squeezing a little for more room. The girls and I all handed out our boxes and the boys looked curious at the boxes that I handed out.
"Why does it say to eat yours first and get it over with Kazeyu?" Midoriya asks
I gave a nervous chuckle when the entire class turned to me, "Trust me, you don't want to eat it last. The taste is rather… strong, ahaha"
They all gave me confused looks except for Katsuki who opened the box and quickly put one in his mouth, destroying the rest of the chocolate with his quirk. He cringed for a moment and quickly swallowed, grabbing for his water bottle to wash out the taste.
Everyone turned to him incredulously and some of them glared, "Bakugou, why'd you do that? That's completely rude bro!" Kirishima scolds.
Katsuki let out a shiver after he gulped down his water, "Trust me, that was completely reasonable."
"He's right, I'd do the same thing if I had to eat my chocolate too, or anything that I make really," I say, "That's why I suggested you eat mine first. You don't want my chocolate lingering on your taste buds for too long."
The boys all gulped nervously and paled. They all opened the box and grabbed one of the chocolates. Some of them sniffed it, and some of them eyed it like it was a territorial gorilla. And one by one they all took a bite out of it and chewed. The girls and I watched with curiosity.
Slowly they all started to cringe and revolted at the taste, a couple of them were more polite and kept a stoic face, but their eyes still twitched at it.
"Why is it so bitter?"
"What an… interesting… flavor."
"I need some water!"
"Why?!"
"This taste does not make me sparkle…"
"I'm sorry Kazeyu, but this…*gag noise*"
"Ugh! It's like eating black coffee beans that have gone bad!"
The girls and I all laugh at their reactions watching as they all open the other boxes and tried to get rid of the taste with good tasting chocolate. It was quite humorous, I wonder what Aizawa's reaction will be?
Meanwhile at the Teacher's lounge…
Aizawa was looking at all the boxes with disinterest. He wasn't really the type to eat sugary things, but he always ate at least one of the chocolate that his students gave to him to be polite and respectful. They did go through the trouble of making them after all. One of them caught his eye though and he read the note attached to it.
Happy Valentine's Day Aizawa-sensei!
I would recommend you eat mine first. I'm a disaster in the kitchen so if you eat mine first you can just wash out the taste with the other chocolates that you got.
Sorry for the bad taste in advance.
- Kazeyu
He opened the box and saw how many there was, then he called out to the other male teachers in the room.
"Fumiko Kazeyu wants us all to have a piece of chocolate," he says, hiding a small smirk beneath his scarf.
The other teachers excitedly grabbed one and plopped it into their mouth. Aizawa watched his colleagues reactions with much amusement as they frantically ran about trying to find something to take the taste away.
He then grabbed one and took a bite out of it.
He made no reaction to it whatsoever and gave a pleased smile, "As bitter as my coffee" he says with a nod of approval.
"You are a cold, cold man Aizawa! Cold!" Present Mic yells as he frantically drinks from the fountain.
Aizawa only leaned back in his chair and ate the rest of the chocolate.
