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Chapter 9 – Bloody Mary, part 2
Sam and Dean found some strange markings, along with the name Gary Bryman, who, they later found out, had been killed in a hit and run. Charlie claimed that the car that did it matched Jill's. They then went to the Shoemakers' house and found the same markings and the name 'Linda Shoemaker', suggesting that Donna's dad killed her mom.
'So, the spirit is going after people with secrets where people died?' John asked. Sam and Dean nodded.
The brothers then went to Fort Wayne, Indiana after finding a murder that fit the description.
'But how is that connected to the place where those people died. It doesn't make sense.' Mary said.
'That cop was so helpful.' Mary said, as the cop gave them a copy of the report on the murder which she kept and gave them his opinion on who murdered her.
'Yeah. Sometimes they are.' Dean replied.
'It's so annoying when they are cremated.' Sam complained as the Cop said that Bloody Mary had been cremated.
Charlie and Donna then argued about Sam and Dean and who they were and whether Bloody Mary was real. It ended with Donna saying, 'Bloody Mary' in the bathroom mirror to prove that it wasn't real.
'She is so stupid.' Mary said.
'Now she's set it on her friend.' Mary continued as Charlie noticed Bloody Mary in all the reflections.
The scene then cut to Sam and Dean in the car and Sam tracked down the mirror Bloody Mary died in front of. Sam then got a call from Charlie who told them that Bloody Mary was after her. They immediately found her and covered up all the reflections.
'I don't understand. Her boyfriend's death wasn't her fault.' Cas said, looking confused as Charlie explained what happened with her boyfriend.
'She felt guilty about it and I think that is what the spirit latched on to.' Sam replied.
Sam and Dean then left to find the mirror and Sam suggested summoning Bloody Mary.
'Look. My amazing big brother moment.' Dean said as he pulled the car aside to try and convince Sam that Jess' death was not his fault. Mary looked carefully at Sam and from the look on his face she knew that he still felt some guilt over her death.
'What was the secret?' Mary asked as Sam said that there was something that he hadn't told Dean.
'You'll see.' Sam replied.
'That doesn't seem like a safe plan.' Mary said as Sam told Dean his plan to summon Bloody Mary.
'It worked.' Sam said.
Sam and Dean found the mirror and Sam summoned Bloody Mary, only for Dean to be distracted by the police.
'I don't think splitting up was a good idea at this point.' John said.
'Looks like you were right.' Mary replied as Sam was overcome by Bloody Mary and his eyes began to bleed. As Dean knocked out the police officers, the mirror version of Sam revealed that he dreamt about Jess' death before it happened.
'What? That's strange.' Mary said and Sam looked uncomfortable.
'You'll find out what it is soon enough.' Sam said and the dark look on his face made Mary and John worried.
Dean got back just in time to smash the mirror but Bloody Mary climbed out just as they were leaving and made their eyes bleed.
'Well that's creepy.' Sam said.
Dean then turned a mirror on Bloody Mary and she disintegrated.
'That was way too close.' Mary said.
'Not as close as it has been.' Sam replied, which made Mary feel worse. What else had her sons been through?
Sam and Dean then dropped Charlie off home and Sam told her not to blame herself for her boyfriend's death and Dean told Sam that he should do the same. They then drove off and Sam saw Jessica standing on the pavement and Sam refused to tell Dean his secret.
'Why didn't you tell me?' Dean asked.
'I didn't understand it at the time and it scared me.' Sam replied.