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CH 9
Hinata pov
I look at my teammates with some fear and love. Both Shino and Naruto-kun are arguing and it hurts me. We are a team sure we have individual traits and strengths but that is what a team is. "Naruto-kun Shino is right we need to work together for this." Naruto looks at me and lowers his head. "You are right we do need to work together. Come on guys we have already wasted time. I say we find them and then formulate a plan." naruto-kun says with high spirits. "I already know where they are. I tagged them with a bug when we got here. I figured they would pull some kind of stunt like this." I smile at this. " alright but we have to deal with not one but two Jonin. Not too mention that they are both married and have impeccable teamwork." "I have a plan," naruto-kun says he then pulls us together. I smile at the plan and nod.
Kurenai pov
Huh, they have about three more hours too not only find us but take the bells from me and my wife. "Anko-chan do you think they will figure out the test," I say looking down at the woman laying on my lap. "I think so Nai-chan. Hinata and Shino are pretty smart but the outlier comes with Naruto. We don't know his skills or smarts." I nod at this and look up. Suddenly some of my hair is cut. I look around and don't see anything. My hair falls down on top of Anko causing her to sneeze. "Nai-chan is this your hair." she looks up at me. I nod and her face contorts in rage. " WHO THE FUCK CUT MY NAIL-CHAN'S BEAUTIFUL HAIR." at this I see naruto walk out of the trees. Above his hand, a shuriken is floating and spinning. "KIIIIIII" At this Naruto takes off. "GET YOUR ASS BACK HERE SO I CAN BEAT YOU WITH YOUR OWN FUCKING TESTICLES." Anko takes off towards Naruto while I chuckle a little bit. I reach my chakra sense out to find the others. I find Shino in a bush a little at the edge of the clearing we are at. Hinata is on the other side of the clearing " I know where you guys are. you are pretty good at chakra suppression." both genins stay put huh why have they not moved unless those are not Shino and Hinata then where are they "Kurenai sensei" I turn my head to see Hinata standing there. Suddenly I feel something on my back. Turning around I see Shino controlling some of his bugs. "Nice try Shino but your bugs can't stop me" there is a sudden pain and all my limbs fall limp. "Very clever both of you distracting me and taking advantage of me. Too bad I only have one of the bells you need to find Anko san to complete this test." smile at this knowing that I have won somehow. "Hey guys you were right Anko is easy to defeat." I turn my head and see Anko flung over Naruto's shoulder knocked out. "How" is the only word I can muster as Anko is placed beside me. Naruto just smiles "oh that was easy you see"
Flashback naruto pov.
Shit shit shit "GAKII WHERE ARE YOU. I WANT YOU TO MEET MY LITTLE FRIEND. HE IS VERY HUNGRY AND LIKES SAUSAGE. ESPECIALLY FRESH FROM THE SOURCE." I'm trying to stay hidden from the enraged and protective Anko. I move silently and find the tree I was looking for. It was very thick and had the right density to knock anyone out. "GAKII COME HERE. I'M NOT GOING TO HURT YOU. I JUST WANT TO EXPLAIN TO YOU WHY YOU DON'T CUT MAI-CHAN'S HAIR. THAT BEAUTIFUL DARK HAIR JUST MAKES ME GO CRAZY NOT TOO MENTION IT IS SO SOFT AND SILKY." I start writing a simple genjutsu seal. The seal will make the tree look like me unless you aren't turned into the seal array. "GAKII WHERE ARE YOU. I WANT YOU TO UNDERSTAND THAT I WON'T HURT YOU. I'M JUST GONNA SHOVE MY FOOT UP YOUR ASS FOR CUTTING HER BEAUTIFUL HAIR." once the seal is finished I teleport away. I wait for about thirty seconds till I hear. "FOUND YOU GAKKAI NOW I'M GONNA KICK YOUR ASS SO BAD THAT NOT EVEN HINATA WOULD WANNA TOUCH IT." she rushes at the tree that looks like me too her. She leaps into the air when she is about ten yards away from the tree. She then slams into the tree and it knocks her out cold. I can't help but laugh my ass off at this.
Flashback end
Kurenai pov.
I sweat drop at this. "So you're telling me that she ran into a tree and that is how you beat her." Naruto just nods while smiling "huhhhhh we need to have a talk about this tonight. So you guys got the bells. So whos going back to the academy." Hinata looks at Naruto and Shino. Shino raises his hand as does Naruto. Hinata then tackles naruto and kisses him "ohhh Naruto-kun I knew you would keep me company in the academy." I smile at this and then laugh. "Congratulations you pass now can you unlock my limbs Hinata please." Hinata walks over and does so. "Alright team meet back here at eight tomorrow for some training." they all nod at this. I pick up my wife bridal style and teleported back home. When I get home I throw her on our bed. She wakes up as she hits the bed. "Huh what why where oh hi Nai-chan. you know I had this crazy dream. You and I were testing your genin team. Your hair got cut and I flew into a rage and chased naruto down. When I saw him I ran towards him and then I blacked out. I then woke up." she then smiles at me. My face stays stern while she tells the story. He smiles begins to fade. " Nai-chan". I walk over to her and grab her collar. " listen here Anko Mitarashi Yuhi. you left me your wife all alone in enemy territory to fight one man. YOU LEFT ME. DO YOU KNOW HOW THAT MADE ME FEEL. I THEN FIND OUT THAT ONE OF MY GENIN OUTSMARTED YOU BY WRITING A SIMPLE HENGE SEAL ON A TREE. YOU WERE SO MAD AT HIM THAT YOU RAN INTO A TREE AND KNOCKED YOURSELF OUT. IF THAT HAD BEEN A ENEMY NIN YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN DEAD. YOU WOULD HAVE LEFT ME ALONE." I am visually sobbing at this point. "I JUST FOUND LOVE AND YOU WOULD EASILY THROW IT AWAY BECAUSE OF MY HAIR. I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU SO PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME." tears are streaming down my cheeks at this point. Ankos face falls at her lover's tears. Putting her down I start to bend down to my knees "DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE PLEASE. DON'T LEAVE ME." I feel Ankos hands snake around me. "Nai-chan I'm not going anywhere. You are my wife it is my responsibility to be there for you." she pulls me into a hug. The dams have broken at this point. I start to cry into her chest. "Shhh it's ok I'm here Nai-chan. I'm here" she says with a sweet voice while petting my hair. We stay like that for a good hour. The whole time I'm crying in her arms while she just takes it.
I stand up after my tears dry. Anko pulls me onto her lap. "Nai-chan come here. I'm not going anywhere. This ring is more than just a piece of jewelry. It is my promise to you to be by your side no matter what. I love you so much that it pains me to be away from you. I'm not going to leave you alone ever again. Understand?" I nod at this while smiling. "Good, now how about we order in and sit here in bed and watch some movies." I nod at this and pull her into a long passionate kiss. We then order some simple Italian food and watch many different movies. We fall asleep in each other arms that night. We wake up and share a kiss. Anko has T&I duties while I have my genin team. We get ready and walk out. After a passionate kiss, we go our separate ways. Till dinner that is.