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Disclaimer: Warriors belongs to Erin Hunter. The original plot isn't mine, it comes from an unfinished fanfiction called "Redemption" by Moonbirds. Enjoy!
Chapter 2
Allegiances
Forestclan
Leader: Finchstar- light brown tabby tom with green eyes (Frostkit's father)
Deputy: Leaffall- long haired orange she-cat with white markings on muzzle and underbelly and yellow eyes
Medicine Cat: Haretail- skinny brown tom with a stubby tail and pale green eyes
Warriors:
Rosethorn- tortoiseshell she-cat with light green eyes
Eagletalon- smokey grey tom with dark blue eyes
Apprentice- Webpaw
Quickfoot- calico she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentice: Nightpaw
Treenose- white tom with brown points and yellow eyes
Pineclaw- golden tom with amber eyes
Stormfang- black tom with grey splashes and sharp green eyes
Apprentice: Lilypaw
Larksong- pretty white she-cat with dark brown points and blue eyes
Applefur- tawny brown tabby she-cat with light brown spots and yellow eyes
Apprentice- Sandpaw
Fawnspots- light brown she-cat with white spots and pale blue eyes
Apprentices:
Webpaw- blue-grey tom with wide paws and amber eyes
Nightpaw- black she-cat with white patches and yellow eyes
Lilypaw- brown tabby she-cat with bright green eyes
Sandpaw- sandy colored tabby tom with white underbelly and tail tip with green eyes
Queens:
Snowshine- white she-cat with black points and green eyes, mate of Finchstar (Mother of Frostkit and foster mother of Icekit)
Rabbitfoot- calico she-cat with amber eyes, mate of Treenose (Mother of Snakekit and Birdkit)
Flowerpetal- pretty dappled she-cat with yellow eyes, mate of Pineclaw (Mother of Goldenkit and Dustkit)
Kits:
Frostkit- white she-cat with grey splashes and bright green eyes
Icekit- white she-cat with pale blue eyes
Snakekit- white tom with brown patches and amber eyes
Birdkit- calico she-cat with yellow eyes
Goldenkit- golden tabby tom with amber eyes
Dustkit- golden tom with white splashes and yellow eyes
Elders:
Berrybush- white she-cat with brown points and amber eyes
"Frostpaw!" Icepaw raced up to her and pressed her face in her fur. "Birdpaw called me a filthy rogue and said that I don't belong here!"
"Don't worry Icepaw, i'll take care of her for you," Frostpaw soothed. She marched off to find Birdpaw while Icepaw sat there with a smirk. Frostpaw found Birdpaw grooming herself in a patch of sunlight.
"Oh hey Frostpaw," Birdpaw meowed.
"I can't believe you could be that rude to Icepaw!" Frostpaw growled. Birdpaw tilted her head to the side, confused.
"I was never rude to Icepaw," she said. But Frostpaw wouldn't hear it.
"If you are going to be that mean to my sister, just because she isn't clanborn, then you're no friend of mine!" Frostpaw stormed off and Birdpaw sat there, angry and hurt.
"Get up sweetheart, Icekit is already outside," Snowshine's voice awoke Frostkit. She yawned and stretched while her mother gave her a quick bath. Frostkit almost shivered in disgust. She hadn't forgotten what Snowshine had done to her and she wouldn't forgive her either. But in order for her plans to work, she had to endure it. Frostkit padded outside and layed down in a patch of sunshine. 'Icepaw had deliberately pushed me apart from the clan. That was why they all believed her and not me.' Frostkit narrowed her eyes, 'Well i'm not falling for her tricks this time. No, this time she will be falling for mine!'
"Umm, Frostkit?" Frostkit was snapped out of her thoughts by Dustkit, who was standing over her with a concerned expression. "Are you okay? You had this weird look on your face…"
"Of course," Frostkit said as she slipped her mask back on. 'Idiot, you're going to give yourself away if you don't learn to control your expressions better!' she reprimanded herself in her head. "Would you like to play mossball with me?" she asked him. Dustkit ducked his head shyly and nodded. While Dustkit went to get some moss, Frostkit thought back to a memory from her previous life.
Frostkit spotted Goldenkit and Snakekit arguing with Dustkit. She raced over to join them.
"...is obviously the be-Oh Frostkit!" Dustkit's sentence ended in a squeak. Frostkit ignored him and bounded up to Goldenkit.
"Hey Goldenkit! What're you guys arguing about?" she inquired. Dustkit sat down with a dejected look on his face, but Frostkit didn't notice.
"We were arguing about whether squirrels or rabbits were better. Goldenkit and I both say rabbit, but Dustkit says squirrel. What do you think?" Snakekit asked.
"Rabbit of course!" Frostkit said, not taking her eyes off of Goldenkit. Frostkit actually prefered squirrels, but she didn't want to get into an argument with Goldenkit. She was determined to show him that she would be the perfect choice of mate for him and if that meant changing a few little things about herself, then so be it!
Frostkit cringed when she thought back to that moment. She had been so eager to please him. Dustkit came running back with the mossball in his jaws.
By sunhigh, Frostkit was determined to get into every cat's good graces and had formulated plans to do so. When Dustkit was called away to take a nap, Frostkit trotted up to Webpaw who was carrying some mouse bile from the medicine cat's den. He looked exhausted and irritable and Frostkit could understand why. Taking care of the elders was one of the least desirable tasks you could do when you are an apprentice.
"Hi Webpaw! Are you taking that to Berrybush?" Webpaw glanced down at her and nodded. "If you want, I can take care of her. You can go rest." Webpaw looked at her in surprise.
"Are you sure Frostkit?" Webpaw asked.
"Yeah! I'm a kit and don't have much to do. You're an apprentice so you're busy all the time. You should be able to relax for a little while," Frostkit explained and Webpaw passed her the mouse bile. She wrinkled her nose at the disgusting smell, but maintained her cheerful facade.
"Wow, thanks Frostkit. I owe you one." Webpaw padded off and Frostkit walked to the elder's den. She poked her head in to see Berrybush tucking into a plump thrush. She looked up when Frostkit entered.
"Hello Frostkit," she rasped. "Are you here to get rid of my ticks?" 'No, I was just carrying around some mouse bile because I like the smell of it,' Frostkit bit back the sarcastic comment and nodded. She settled down by the elder's side and began to get rid of her ticks. Berrybush started telling Frostkit the story of how a group of rogues settled into Forestclan's territory moons ago. It ended in an epic battle between the leader of Forestclan, Spiderstar, and the leader of the rogues. Berrybush was getting really into the story and told the fight in gruesome detail. Frostkit was sure that's not what really happen, but she didn't comment.
"Spiderstar raked his claws down the huge rogue's side and he howled in agony," Berrybush slashed at the air with her paw and Frostkit had to duck to avoid being hit. She pictured the battle in her head, but instead of Spiderstar, it was Froststar. Brave and beautiful as she faced down the giant rogue. She pictured herself slashing her claws along the rogue's side. "The rogue tried to claw him back, but Spiderstar caught the huge brown paw in his teeth and bit down hard!" by now Berrybush had stood up and was sinking her fangs in her bedding as she acted out the story. Froststar had caught the rogue's paw in her mouth, but the screech of pain sounded familiar. Berrybush continued her story, slashing at the air with her paws and rolling around the den. Froststar continued fighting the rogue in Frostkit's mind, but soon the rogue's fur became white, the eyes became blue, and the huge tom became a she-cat. "And finally Spiderstar bit deep into the rogue's neck and the giant tom was dead beneath his paws!" Berrybush finished and bit deep into the remains of her thrush and shook it around. In Frostkit's mind, Froststar was watching as Icekit slowly died beneath her claws, battered and broken. Berrybush realized what she was doing and put her thrush down. The elder began licking her chest and Frostkit's whiskers twitched in amusement.
"Thank you for the story Berrybush," she dipped her head respectfully to the elder.
"Yeah whatever, go away," Berrybush said, not looking up from her grooming. Frostkit padded out of the den and smiled to herself. She had made a lot of progress for her first day. 'I can't go after warriors yet, it was just annoy them more than anything. I guess i'll just have to work my way up.'