"Hello everyone and welcome back to Ask The Warriors!" Snow greeted everyone. "Please go check out my story, A Darkened Breeze because... well, I just posted the last chapter today and it is 1,947 (I think) words long. I am proud of myself! Anyway, please give a warm welcome to... Jayfeather!"

A scrawny boy with grayish black hair and blind blue eyes grunted, arms folded.

"Aw, Jay." She frowned slightly. "Please be in a better mood... everyone here loves you."

"Fine." The male grunted.

"That's better!" Snow grinned, looking down at her cards. "The first question is by Breezestar of CinderClan then the next set after that is by Jayfeathers Friend."

'Ask him if he likes Briarlight or Half Moon better!'

The blind boy's eyes widened some. "Briarlight? I- when I was Jay's Wing... I loved Half Moon. I'm not Jay's Wing anymore... Jay's Wing can see." He huffed, glancing away. "But Briarlight? No..."

Snow raised a eyebrow. "Oh really?"

His blushed lightly, glancing away. "Just go on with... who? Jayfeathers Friend's questions?"

Snow laughed. "Okay! Okay!"

'JAYFEATHER! As my title goes, I am your friend. Probably your only friend. I too am rude, sarcastic, and a smarta**. So don't be afraid to answer my questions.'

"I don't have 'friends'." Jayfeather grumbled.

"Oh really?" Snow scoffed.

"They are acquaintances." He shot back.

"Sure!"

'You will probably have the most questions from me.'

"It looks like it." Snow looked down the list.

'Did you enjoy Mentoring Alderheart?'

"I didn't mentor him." Jayfeather hissed. "Leafpool mentored him because she's the 'full medicine cat'. The only way I'm going to get a apprentice is if Alderheart leaves and my mother dies."

Snow chuckled nervously. "Heh.. you heard me talking about that didn't you?"

He paused before nodding. "Yes."

Do you enjoy your fans shipping you with a stick? I don't ship it FWI.

"WHAT!?" Jayfeather stood up quickly, looking surprised. "A stick!? No way! I rather kiss Briarlight!"

A grin slowly spread on Snow's face. "Good to know."

"You don't.. uh... 'ship' me with her, do you?" Jayfeather groaned, slumping down in his chair.

"I ship Briarfeather an Jay's Moon." Snow shrugged, glancing away from him.

"Star wars or star trek?"

"I don't watch TV or movies." He huffed. "I'm bl-"

'Oh and I am WELL aware you can't see them so shut up about how you don't watch movies.'

This made the male fall silent.

'Just by the sound of them and your knowledge of both is more appealing.'

"Neither." He rolled his blind eyes. "Happy?"

'If Half Moon and Briarlight were to argue, who'd you side with? Yes I'll go that far.'

"Depends on what they are arguing about."

Snow nodded in agreement.

'If you were to go back to the ancients one last time, would you risk...mating with Half Moon?'

Jayfeather and Snow both blushed.

"Uh... I'll let it pass this one time... mostly because I'm curious." Snow looked at her feet, feeling self-continuous.

"Uh... uh... maybe?" Jayfeather mumbled, looking at his feet as well. "But it doesn't matter..."

'How would you react to finding out Alderheart was breaking the "no love," code for medicine cats?'

Jayfeather seemed to have recovered from the last question. "The 'no love' code breaks families apart." He crossed his arms. "As long it isn't out of the clan, it shouldn't matter." He paused. "As long as there is another medicine cat, if the cat is a female, that knows the herbs well enough if anything happened, who cares?"

Snow nodded in agreement. "That's how I feel!"

'Enough of these question?'

"Yes."

'TOO BAD GRUMPS!'

He huffed.

'Can you fight despite your...state? If so, can you hold your own in a fight between you and Breezepelt?'

"Doesn't anyone remember that fight I had with him awhile ago? With Poppyfrost there?"

"Uh... not really. I just remember someone pointing that out." The host spoke up.

'If you were made leader after a "Tragic,"...accident with your foster parents, what's the first thing you'd do?'

"Why would I be leader even if something happened to them? I'm a medicine cat for crying out loud!"

'Would you elect your deputy?'

"Briarlight... or Lionblaze. I guess."

'Last one. I swear. How would you react to Half Moon showing up to the clan revealing to you she's pregnant? Would you take the kits to the clans keeping it secret?'

"Why in Starclan's name will Half Moon come here, expecting?" Jayfeather rolled his eyes. "But, I guess I'll take them if she didn't want them."

'That's it. See yo- Oops, sorry buddy. Till we meat again my friend and follower.'

He raised a eyebrow. "Me? Follow you? In your dreams."

'I vote Foxleap next.'

"I'll add him." Snow responded, tossing the card off to the side. "The next set is from Duchess Luna."

'I'm aware I reviewed questions for Jayfeather last time but here's some more.'

"Oh! Right! I need to retrieve those!" Snow jumped up, hitting her head on something. "Ow!" She rubbed her head. The host looked over the crowd and spotted Wolf. "Wolf! Get over here! You need to read the rest of these questions are the card!"

Wolf smirked. "Finally crawling back to me, huh sis?"

Snow rolled her eyes, throwing the card at him. "Whatever. Just read."

"Okay, okay!" Wold picked up the card and went to Snow's spot as she ran off.

'If you were a warrior, what's the first thing you would do?'

"Really?" Wold held the card off to the side so everyone could see what was on the card. "These questions are stupid."

A bucket of paint dumped on him.

Jayfeather started chuckling, holding a remote with a button on it. "Snow told me to press this whenever you 'weren't doing your job'."

Wolf glared at him, covering in purple paint. "Hmph. At least you made the paint purple.'

"Haha." He chuckled lightly.

"Just answer the question." The annoyed male huffed.

"If I was a warrior, I wouldn't be blind because blind beings are useless." Heavy sarcasm could be heard.

Wolf sounded like a robot as he listed off the rest of the questions.

'Do you like Briarlight?'

"That's classified."

'How does it feel to be shipped with a stick?'

"Terrible." Jayfeather scoffed. "Do ya'll think so little of me to ship me with a branch?"

'What's your opinion on that?'

"Rewind what I just said."

'Do you actually like the stick?'

"No." He rolled his eyes, his patience wearing thin.

'How was it to mentor Alderheart?'

Jayfeather grabbed the edges of his seat and pushed himself up. "Why does everyone think I mentored him! I didn't my mother did! Ugh!" He kicked the chair.

Snow ran back in. "I'm back! I'm back!" She noticed her brother and started laughing. "What happened, purple bro?"

Wolf glared at her. "You happened."

Snow chuckled, pushing hm away. "Go on now and clean up, now. I might need you again."

"Humph." Wolf walked away without another word.

Snow put the card she had to go and collect on the front of the pile and looked down at it to read it.

'How does it feel to be blind?'

"It feels natural considering I have been blind my whole life as Jayfeather."

'Who do you like more? Briarlight or Half Moon?'

"That is classified."

Snow huffed. "Classified, Smassified." She tossed the card at him and took away the remote. "Hmph." She looked back at her cards. "The next set of questions are by Zouboss!"

'Jaybae. Jaybae. Jaybae. Jaybae!'

"Jaybae?" He raised an eyebrow. "Is that what you call me?"

'You salty son of a gun'

"That's better."

', I got 2 questions for you!'

"Get on with it, will you?" Jayfeather grumbled. "We have just reached 1,347 words."

"Oo!" Snow's eyes lightened up. "Two extremely long chapters on a school day? I feel so proud of myself!"

"Congratulations." Jayfeather rolled his eyes.

"Ahh!" She grinned, her face really bright and excited.

'Uno is...Who do you think was the smarter of the two of your siblings, Lionblaze or Hollyleaf?'

"Hollyleaf. Obviously. She is the only one that kept us together for most of our lives." Jayfeather casually informed us.

'Question number dos is what is your opinion on Crowfeather (y'know since he's your father and all)?'

"He's an idiot." Jayfeather frowned slightly, looking kind of confused and upset for some reason.

"And, in my story, he's now de- Opps! I don't want to give away anything." Snow covered her mouth with her hands, not dropping her cards.

'Can you do Yellowfang next? Please it would be amusing.'

Snow spoke through a covered mouth. She uncovered it and nodded. "I'll add her!" She tossed the card to the side. "The next set of questions are by Flame That Burns In The Dark!"

'Critics, Snow? Why would you EVER think that? *looks extremely critical*'

Snow laughed lightly. "Not you, Leo. I meant the critics that flamed my story. I got angry but eventually talked to one of them, mostly because I don't like being mad at people, and made a compromise. Also, whoever put my story in a community for stories that might need to get reported, please take it off. I changed things."

'Also, I loved the chapter! You did a great job.'

"Aw... thanks! It means a lot." Snow grinned as she read it.

Jayfeather rolled his eyes. "Just ask the questions."

'ANYWAY, I want to ask Jayfeather: Who's the most annoying cat in all of the four Clans?'

"Depends on how I feel." The grayish black teen smirked.

'I vote Crookedstar for the next chapter, by the way.'

"I'll add him."

'Have you heard of him, Jayfeather?'

"Yes. From the Elders."

'Probably. You're probably scared stiff every time you hear about him!'

"Excuse me-!" Jayfeather started, annoyed.

"THE NEXT QUESTION IS BY HeatherDiamond128 AND THE QUESTIONS AFTER THAT ARE BY X-Red!" Snow cut him off loudly.

'Jayfeather, do you love Half-moon?'

"Yes, as Jay's Wing."

'If you could have your eyesight back, what would you do?'

"Just examine everything." Jayfeather answered thoughtfully. "I haven't seen anything except during my time as Jay's Wing."

'Would you rather fight Ashfur or Tigerclaw?'

"Ashfur! He's the reason Hollyleaf ran off to those mouse-brained tunnels! All because Squirrelflight didn't love him!"

"I hate Ashfur." Snow muttered, tossing the card away. "The next questions are by Shadow."

'Oooh, yay. Jayfeather:'

'If you were not a med cat, who would be your mate?'

"Well, if I had to pick someone who is currently living... I guess Briarlight." Jayfeather shrugged. "She's the most tolerable one."

'If you could, would you fly? Like a bird?'

"Why would I want to fly like a bird?" The grumpy male snorted. "I am not a bird."

'Honest answer: do you think Dovewing is annoying?'

"She's annoying." Jayfeather rolled her eyes again.

"She's like my sister." Snow muttered under her breath.

'What is the most commonly used herb? (Not counting cobwebs)'

"Marigold." Jayfeather replied. "The warriors get injured too easily."

"If you could chose your name, what would it be?"

"Not Jayfeather, that is for sure!" He huffed. "I don't like that Leafpool named me after her lover! Though it isn't the worst name."

'Ok, done. Can you do Hollyleaf or Lionblaze next?'

"I'll add them." Snow tossed the card up in the air and it hit her. "Ow... Anyway, the next questions are by Anonymous Guest."

'Jay feather what is it like being blind?'

"How should I know how different it is?"

'What do you think of when I say branch?'

"Stupidity."

'If you had your sight for a day, would you run to the lake and back?'

"Possibly."

'Would you rather have a cat with whitecough or a cat with nightmares? *Runs far away*'

"Why are you narrating what he/she is doing?" He raised an eyebrow.

"I-" The host started but quickly give up. "I don't know... moving on." She tossed the card away. "The next question is by Rainbowzalt then the other ones after that are my Zagzagel."

'Jayfeather, if had the chance to get a power again, what would that power be?'

"The same one I had." He shrugged. "It worked well enough."

'[Here's a short story I wrote a while ago to put the critics at rest.]

1. Pretty sure that's a poem dude. Poems are allowed and can tell stories but a bit different then what would be termed a short story by the vast majority people.

2. Does it have anything at all to do with what's in the following chapters or are you just plastering it here so there's something deemed 'story content'? Cause if it's the latter, it still wont fly.

I did like it though, so there's that.

Look, I'll be honest here, I'm not part of any group - I just happen to lurk. The thing of it is, this story is interactive and it will sooner or later land you in trouble. It's up to you on how you want to handle things but between the interactive part and the non-story content of the first chapter, you've already got two rules broken. Will I report you? Not at this time. I doubt you want to risk loosing your story and what people are telling you may be something to think on.

I will admit to just skimming this so I can't really comment on what's going on as a whole. I do want to say something about your summary. It might be better to make it, um, more like a summary. Not only will people be more interested in clicking and finding out what it's all about, but it will be informative in general. While not all of it is in caps, it might be wise in the future to leave out sentences in all caps and not advertise your poll as both of those could fall into the grey area of what's allowed.'

"That's not a question but it works." Snow shrugged, tossing the card away. "Anyway, guys, we are over 2,500 words now for this chapter! I am so proud of myself! I got two long chapters out in one day! Anyway, lets see who will be coming next.

"Can I go?" Jayfeather asked.

"Sure, sure."

Crookedstar - 2

Hollyleaf - 3

Onestar - 1

Leafpool - 1

Foxleap - 1

Lionblaze -1

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!" Snow jumped up and down excitedly. "Hollyleaf is coming! Hollyleaf is coming! She is my favorite warrior cat! Violetpaw (I'm not spoiling things for people.) is the other cat that even comes close to her! YAYAYAYAY!"

Wolf rolled his eyes and helped Snow off the stage. "Come on, sis. Let's go."

"DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW QUESTIONS AND FAVORITE AND/OR FOLLOW!" Snow called out. "ALSO, GO CHECK OUT MY FORUM, ROGUE! WE NEED NEW MEMBERS! Thanks!"