The Coming

by KitKatTheCrazyFangirl

Born far away from the Clans is Spark, a silvery city cat. Her world is harsh, where cats are under the rule of dogs. Lead by Shard, a cruel doberman, they are a formidable force. However, among all the bad, Spark can see good. As a rebel, she can see hope.

2. Chapter 2

Hello! Second post today! Although I should be writing The Beast's Origins...eh. I'll do it tomorrow.XD

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Cobrastar:Thank you for the constructive criticism. And I did think about saying what they look like, but the kits will change as they get older. I'll put it in this chapter, though. And I'll try to have better grammar! And thanks for reviewing! It's really encouraging.

On with the story!

As the seasons progressed, so did the three kits. Spark's pelt grew from a dull grey to a shiny silver, a bit like her mother's. Lily's fur was orange, like Chase's. Char's fur was soft gray color, like a storm cloud. The kits were anxious to leave the den, to see the world. They felt that all was well and good, until they were told something.

"Emmy, we need to give one of the kits to Shard, for his army." The mother cat shook her head. "No. I won't do it. It's not right. They're my kittens." Chase growled angrily, pressing his ears against his head. Emmy backed into the corner, hissing. The larger male cat stared her down. "Do. It. Now." He snarled. The feirce mother shook her head. "No." Chase was taken aback. "What?!" He yelled, furious. "What did you just say?!" Emmy squared her shoulders and took a step toward her enraged mate. "I said no. I'm done following that mutt's rules." Chase stared for a long while, before hissing through clenched teeth, "You'd better pick a kitten real quick, otherwise the guards will be here."

As this scene unfolded, Spark and her siblings watched. "What are they talking about?" Char whispered. "I don't know, but I don't like it..." Lily whispered back. As they watched, they saw a pair of Golden Retrievers walk towards the arguing cats. Spark gasped. "MO-" before she could even finish a word, her siblings were on top of her, hissing. "Hush up! Do you want them to hear us?!" Lily yipped quitely. Spark shook her head, and climbed back onto the boxes giving the kits a veiw.

"Where is your contribution?" One dog asked.

"I-I'm not g-giving one of m-my k-kittens." Emmy's voice shook in fear. The other dog stepped forward, teeth bared. "Are you challenging the order?!" It growled. Emmy shook her head. "N-no. I'm challenging Shard." Without another word, it stepped closer, raised a paw, and slashed Emmy's neck. Spark didn't even realize she was screaming until the dogs looked at her.

Hope ya enjoyed! Have a great day/night!

~KitKat