Bandbreiten, meine Freunde. And, may I just say, OH MY GOSH I GOT EIGHT REVIEWS IN ONE CHAPTER THATS MY NEW RECORD THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!!!
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KajkaElina: First off, thank you so much for this. I positively love constructive criticism, because I want to make my stories better. I see all of your points, and will try my best to fix them! One thing though, Spark and Casper are mostly unaffected by that, because, in my mind, they are mostly immune to things like that because they're cats. But that's just my thoughts. *shrugs* Thank you so much for reviewing!
NovaSpritWolf:You're welcome! Yeah, I was tired, so it was pretty short. XD
PheonixRune: I'm not sure if I ship them, or some other one's I've got going on in my mind. XD
Timewing: Please do! I love getting characters. :)
Guest: Thank you! I'll put them soon!
Cobrastar: Oh, thanks, I'll stop doing that. And I'm sorry, I try to catch those but I'm terrible at spelling! I'll try to be more careful. Thanks for the constructive criticism! :D
Snyuff: Aw, thanks. I'm glad you think so. And yeah, I check it all the time to see if I updated, even if I know I didn't. XD
Twinkle.exe: Oh, thank you. And yeah, me too.
Now, time for a chapter about some very strange cats.
"Yeah, then I called him a moldwarp, and then he left with Amber. That was a moon ago." Spark explained. As they walked, the silver cat had told Perky the surprisingly short story of her life.
Perky snorted. "Good goin', idiot, you got your crush to leave you for some other she-cat."
Spark looked at him. "What's a 'crush'?"
The tomcat moaned. "Don't you know anything? A crush is the cat you love."
As soon as he said that, Spark stopped. "What?! I hate Casper, not love him!"
Perky shrugged, still walking. "Sounded to me like you love him."
The silver tabby glared at him as she started walking again. "Why does it even matter to you, Perky?" As soon as she said that, Spark started to laugh.
"What's so funny?" The tom asked, annoyance in his voice.
Through her laughter, Spark got out: "Y-you!"
Perky looked at her, wondering if she'd gone off the deep end. Finally, though, she calmed down. "Sorry, sorry, b-but your name...Perky, and you're so...well, un-perky!"
"That's why you laughed so hard? It's not that funny."
"Well, I haven't laughed in a moon, so I just figured I'd make the most of it. Some of us want to be positive, you know." Spark tried to sound angry, but she couldn't. She was just too happy for that.
Perky rolled his green eyes. "Whatever, stupid."
And so, for days and days, the two cats wandered around, avoiding humans and dogs. They had no goal, nowhere to be, so mostly they just walked. And, even though she didn't want to, Spark felt a growing liking for Perky. She hoped he felt the same.
Casper was running. He didn't know why, but that didn't matter. All he knew was that he had to run- run for his life. There was nothing to run to, or from, as everything was black.
"Casper!" A shriek made him turn around. There, cornered by a massive, vicious-looking mastiff was Owl, her eyes wide in fear.
"Owl!" He yelled, charging towards her. Before he'd gone three paces, another scream rang out. He whipped around to see Spark in the jaws of a muscular bulldog. Slowly, the silver tabby opened her eyes and stared at her former friend. "Ca...sper...help..."
Owl screamed. Casper turned and saw the most horrible sight he'd ever seen. Owl's small, bloody, mangled body, torn apart by the mastiff. A scream like no other escaped Casper's throat, and in an instant, he was mauling the dog, screaming curses all the while. Then, without warning, the mastiff disappeared and Casper fell to the ground. A voice from behind startled him.
"You chose her over me," That was Spark's voice. The tom looked up at her.
"You..." he hissed, trying to keep his voice steady.
"But it didn't even matter, did it, Casper? She died anyway."
Tears began to form in the tom's eyes, slowly rolling down his muzzle.
"Oh, Casper," Suddenly, Spark's voice turned deep and gravely. "If only you knew your fate,"
Surprised, Casper looked up to see a dog where Spark had been standing. A dobermann. A dobermann with a regal, confident bearing, and ice in his eyes. Immediately, Casper knew this was Shard.
"Shard..." he whispered. Suddenly, he was mad. "What do you know about my fate?"
"I know of your stupid little rebellion, Casper, and I know of your plans to kill me."
"K-kill you? No. I'll do much worse than that." The tomcat hissed, trying to keep his voice steady.
The intimidating dog laughed. "I'd like to see you try."
Several things:
1.I had to force myself to write this. I really hate this chapter and it even sounds forced, but I tried.
2.I'm sorry it's short
3.The next one will be better
Please review! Have a great day/night!
Water is wet,
~KitKat