Ok so, a few days ago I received a very harsh and incriminating review from an ANON user saying I had stolen work from the very talented author of MTH (More Than Human). I do admit that there are a few similarities in the first chapter, but after that there is no similarities. I am very hurt that I was accused of STEALING work from this author. To prevent comments like this to reappear, I am going to rewrite those scenes in Chapter One. I am still kind of pissed off about this, and to be honest, I wanted that Anonymous Reader to be blocked and removed from . That review was unfair and simply oblivious to the rest of the story. If you have suspicions of my story, read the fucking rest of it before commenting that I have copied and pasted someone else's story. I'm tired of cutting my life off from the world to write these for you if your just going to bash on my work. I do this for you guys, and I love it when I get good reviews and constructive criticism. I love writing, and I love creating this other world you can escape to. But once again, reviews like the one I just had piss me off and make me wonder why I keep going!
I am going to put my response I put in the reviewing area to this comment so you can read what I had to say, my evidence of differences, and just how royally pissed off I have been:
To the Guest and any other viewer who views this as a copy: I have read MTH, as a lot of you have, but this is not a copy of that story. BTW Butch plays with a paper weight if I remember right, if I'm wrong I am sorry. And a major part of MTH is Blossom being a dancer and Butch being interested in her like everyone else. I do not have that in my story. Another thing is Buttercup and Mitch's obvious ex-relationship status. I also do not have that in my story. Boomer also plays in a band with Mitch which I also do not have. Not to mention the boys TRANSFER to Pokey Oaks High school. Not have always lived there like in my story. Also the town doesn't try to mend a extremely bad patch between the two groups in MTH like in my story. Also I do admit there are similarities in the first chapter, but if you would read on thats where they end. Buttercup isn't a cheerleader in MTH, nor is Butch a football player, or Bubbles ballsy enough to slap someone in the face. Also MTH is a REDS fix, mine is a GREENS! Buttercup and Butch don't fight like brutes, the biggest fighters are the REDS, Buttercup lives with the ruffs, Buttercup is a depended character, Boomer gets a hard on, and there are many more I could list. This is not a copy, and I would appreciate if you would read further on before making such aggravating and serious accusations. Also, if you don't like my story, please do not read it. And if you're just going to be hateful or even tell people not to view something I work my ass on, then don't comment or even waist your time trying accuse me of something untrue and, frankly, hurtful. I write these chapters for hours, locking myself away from my friends and family, just so you can have something to read and I can enjoy the work I have done. Please don't insult me with half assed accusations that don't have enough evidence to create a backbone. I admit that there is a similarity in the office scene and schedules, but after that there is nothing to compare. Got your shit straight before accusing me of such a awful offense! -GreenBabe
So, I am going to update Chapter One to do my part to keep this shit from happening. Now, please do yours. Report comments that are accusing me of anything ridiculous or isn't proven. And just don't comment accusing shit like that!
Thank you- GreenBabe