This fic is written by the lovely BlenderChicken from . Honestly...I purposely took my time with this one. I just didn't want it to be over, so when I got to the chapter I literally stopped reading for a day or two so it didn't have to be over. Usually, I take forever because...well I'm just super slow at literally everything in life. But this was super good. I was kind of sad when I reached the end of the five chapters in this story. (Hopefully there's more coming soon!) Anyway, let's get into the review.
Grammar
I don't have much to say here. The grammar was pretty good. There's not much to nit pick, in all honesty. So, I'll just leave it at that...
8/10
Plot
The plot of this story is a fun one, indeed. Who doesn't love a good Flash/HoO crossover?
The story starts with Leo Valdez being kidnapped by Zoom. He is then forced to work with Zoom, being told that he had to capture the Flash and bring him in if he wants to go home.
So far there are only five chapters, but I'm already on the edge of my seat.
10/10
Oc
This story is mostly just cannon characters. I did, however, see a few I think. They were only in, like, one scene, though. That's not enough time to analyze then thoroughly. But we'll see how they turn out at the story progresses.
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Cannon Characters
I actually thought that BlenderChicken did a great job with keeping everyone in character. Many times I could actually hear the actors voices in my head, when reading. (Or -- in Leo's case -- what I think their voice sounds like.)
This is a hard thing to do. You have to be super in tune with the characters to do that. I know I can only do it like fifty percent of the time. So...good job, dude.
9/10
Writing Style
BlenderChicken's writing style sort of reminds me of Rick Riordan's writing style. With the quick wit and the sarcasm. Very nice, indeed.
It really just feels like they've taken the time to think things through for their story and written the best they can. Or maybe I'm over analyzing and this is their worst work ever. (If that's the case their best must be utterly stunning.)
9/10
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