Ugh, I'm getting bad at regularly updating this. Oh well, better late than never right?
Grammar
The grammar in this story is fairly decent, except for some small scale errors in the beginning. But that's okay. No one really pays attention to grammar on wattpad anyway. The fact that there was minimal errors is refreshing to me.
9/10
Plot
This fic features Oliver Queen and Felicity Smoak crash landing on an island and being stuck there for a while. They have to over come terrible feats like the weirdo Kai and their freaking outrageous love life.
It was an interesting read, though it's not usually my type of thing.
8/10
Oc
Kai was really the only oc in this fic. (Unless you count the wolf.) Though, he wasn't in it all that much, so behind being a psychopath with some questionable beliefs...there's not really a lot to judge him on.
6/10
Cannon Characters
I felt as though the cannon characters ( namely Oliver and Felicity ) were very well written. Not once, I don't think, did I feel like something wasn't right with them.
You got everything, from Felicity's awkward stammering to Oliver's brave and slightly hormonal teenagirlishness.
9/10
Writing Style
I'm not usually a fan of first person stories. I find them to make the characters sound uneducated and childlike. (Though, maybe that's just because I suck at writing in first person, I dunno.)
However, that doesn't mean it's wrong to write in first person. If you feel your story is better suited written in first person instead of third person...go for it.
This particular story wasn't too bad written this way. Though, it did take some getting use to.
I love the descriptions, such as this one scene where Felicity was injured. There's sentences like "[...]fire in my leg" and "[...] screaming at my pain receptors."
9/10
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